Unforgettable Moments : KriYaansh One Shot

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Edited by -Vaish- - 10 years ago

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Deetha pehle toh ek bada hug🤗 for writing this
i was waiting for ur Os frm the time u mentiond abt it in AT
haayee me love u so much :*
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Brilliant writeup deetha
the way you wrote it
i mean the whole concept and story of kriya's return was so wonderfully written
thats really commendable
hatts off man
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Rey's thoughts were totally justified
nicely written...
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And the way you describe the song was fabulous
walts is my fav dance form
i just love it too much
pics were perfectly chosen
great job in that
and i love their "not-to-follow-routine thing" a lottt...
And swayam was right at his place...but am glad he told rey everything

and then came the end
finally kuch toh bola dono ne...kab tak chup rehte
so thats the beginning of "together forever" now...great
and woahhh
smriti smiling...matlab jhasi ki rani ko ab koi prob nai hai rey se
waaah waah
awesomee
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Keep writing such amazing stuff
Thanx for writing thisEdited by -Ocean.eyes- - 10 years ago

wow...ye os parke main kriya ko aur jyada miss kar rhi hoon...its kriyaansh and only kriyaansh ...

awesome os.. awww in love with it..
hope something like this happen in show coz i don know how they r gonna show kria's return n d after effects of her entry...
loved ur version a lot...
beautiful
gang know s truth but stopped by swayam n kria from telling d truth which swayam felt was wrong after seeing d dance..
i always love d way u describe d dance sequence coz i can literally imagine them dancing..
rey came  to know d truth n loved d way u showed both starting 2nd chance of love...
awww rey ran away seeing smrithi was cute ..
but on reading smrithi chuckle she s not having any problem with him...
awesome os..
even am feeling relaxed after reading this os...
Edited by vaishu88 - 10 years ago

Now i realized y you asked us to see that Waltz..

Dee..this was just ... gosh I'm speechless...

It was sooo... BEAUTIFULLL...

M seriusly out of words right now...

Swayam getting to know Kria's truth..then making her join clg back...

Rey seeing things fishy...still in his ego avoiding it all..

abd there comes the dance... OMG..I just love that song sooo much... and waltz over it... woww...just wow...

especially when Kria started singing for him..and in the end der nose touching...it was magical...

bas...ab meko ye seq Real D3 mei bhi cahiye... 😛

and things sorting b/w them.. haaye.. i just loved the road walk... silent..yet beautiful...

loved it loved it loved ittt...

beautifulll dee.. 🤗

Deetha this isbeauty..

Dilko  sukoon mila  pad ke...
Like I kind of just love this song from long but itna perfectly suit karega KR pai  nahii pata tha..
myy nani used to love this song..

About her comeback the simplest beautiful way of a tale re-cherished...
I loved how you maintained the simplicity of KR in it

Aaawwweeeiiieee...
Arsha wali jhappi aapko Deetha di.. Dis is just aaawwwsssmmm...
I mean really reaaly beautiful :D
haiyeee... Kria ki aisi cute si re entry n the..ufff i jst loved it di... Superbbb

Dnt think dat nybody wil kill u 4 writing..jitna likh skte ho likho..wese b we krians r far behind in terms of wrks...
Nyways cming to d os, it was jst perfect..i m in love wid d song since i saw mukti performing, nd 2day u made me love it more..steps were 2 gud...storyline was jst...swayam's reactions were xpected 1 as in d3...cnfssn was so pure nd delicate..loved it thoroughly

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

da dance was Beautifully explained n da song ahh

U know I love ur work always b/w i requested u somefink :(