Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Nikki
wow Love the startingvery well writtenWaana read moreplz continue soonThanks for the PM
Take careLots of LoveGeet
Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Nikki
wow Love the startingvery well writtenWaana read moreplz continue soonThanks for the PM
Take careLots of LoveGeet
very beautiful...please continue
Originally posted by: honeybees22
omg pls cont asap
sorry for the late reply niki... awsome story and concept. continue soon. waiting eagerly to read more
New Character "Tina", Antara's Friend
Part 2
Good morning granny Tina came with a big smile on her face. Today is a very important day for Antara. Morning replied granny. Tum akeli aeye, tumhari dost kaha hai. ? Pata nahi dadi, Antara kaha chali gaye. Yahi to thy lagta hai upper chali gaye. Mein samaj gaye, aj itna bada din hai uskliye key who hai job join kar rehe hai is liye shayad purani yaadein... aj aghr uske maa papa hote to aj...
Dadi mein dekh kar aaty ho said Tina. Tina quickly ran towards antara room, but there was no one. Tina was surprised to see that. Kaha chali gaye yeh ladki bhi nah. Tina came to the terrace because she knew this was the favourite place for antara. Whenever she felt sad she used to came to the terrace. Tina start searching for antara.
Papa apko pata hai key aj kya hai.? Aj apki beti job join kar rehe hai han kam to bohat chota hai lakin ap hi kehty thy nah profession passion ho nah ho lakin passion profession ban hi jata hai. Or apko to pata hai key mujhe books parhna kitna pasand hai, apko yaad hai papa meri 8th birthday pe apne mujhe ek book gift ki thy who book abhi tak meine sambhal key rakhy hai, kash mein ap dono ko bhi.. mein bohat bhuri ho nah papa isi liye ap mujhe chor key chale gaye...
Tina stood behind her and heard everything. Now she came and asked Antara, tu yaha akeli kya kar rehe hai. ? Antara said, aj mama or papa ki bohat yaad arehe hai. Tina said dekh is baat key liye mujhe rona chaheye tujhe nahi. Kyun asked antara. Tina replied, kyun key kam se kam tune apni mama papa ko dekha hai, kuch yaadein hai inki tere paas or meine to apne mama papa ko dekha tak nahi hai. Kitne unlucky ho mein. Antara, tu phir se shuru hogaye, hum kuch nahi lagty nah tere. Tum dono hi to ho mere sab kuch said Tina.
Tu mujhe kabhi rone nahi deygi nah said antara. Who to sochna pareyga, ab neeche chal kyunke jab mein senti hojaty ho tab mujhe bohat bhook lagty hai, Antara chal nah neeche said Tina. Ok chal and they both proceed towards dinning hall. Dadi said, Antara breakfast karlo aj tumhe job join karni hai. After breakfast they were ready to go while dadi said, dekho mein hamesha chahty thy key tum bohat achy insane bano lakin ek baat yaad rakhna umer key aage nahi, but umer key sath badhna chaheye. Itne aage mat badhna key zindagi ka maza nah ley sako.
Kabhi kabhi halat insane ko badal deity hai, chalti hoon said Antara. Mein sambhal logy dadi ap tension mat lo said Tina. They both were walking on the road while Antara said, tujhe pata hai meine kal who tune phir se apne sapno mein suni. Phir se said Tina. dekh aisa kuch bhi nahi hai said Antara. Arey haan tu suni hogy whats the big deal said Tina. Tu samaj nahi rehe hai, ek aise tune jis mein adhuri hi janty ho iska kya matlab hai said antara. Iska matlab yeh hai key koi hai jisse yeh tune key aage ka part bhi pata hai said tina.
Or kaun hai who said antara. Mujhe kaise pata hoga said Tina. Dekh yeh real life hai koi movie nahi jo ek prince charming aeyga, ek tune sunaeyga or mujhe pyar karne lageyga said antara. Oey dramebaazi band kar said tina. Mein nahi tu kar rehe hai dramebaazi. Tu jo bhi bol antara mujhe poora yaqeen hai koi to hai kahi or woh tujhe zaroor mileyga said tina. Hogaya ab chal ab jaldi. Antara feels irritated and go away.
To Be Continued...
Originally posted by: ankusanu
nice update...mssed raghu our hero..
continue yar
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