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NEW SS: Ardent Desires - Sneak Peak of Pt 9 Pg 142 (31/12) - - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
how can Arnav behave like that?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow.. Thats some start! Very interesting!
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Posted: 10 years ago


  Interesting 

  Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woww...this looks very interesting !!
Would love to read more of it !! Update soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Looking forward to it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story..arnav is too fast forward..i hope he understands his mistakes..waiting for the next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow an amazing and awesome start to a story,

The prologue was quite intense yet quite scary,

I'm loving the story line, can't wait to read the story further. 

I can't believe Arnav was being quite forceful and Khushi made the mistake by calling him characterless, 

Can't wait to read what happens next, I think he will marry her but will be very cruel towards her.

The prologue was a fantastic read, amazing writing.

Can you please PM me when you update next, thanks xx 
Edited by P4rveen12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very interesting prologue. cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb prologue...
Both acted impulsive i feel... he demanding her... and she denying him...
they could have handled it nicely...
waiting to know more...
update soon...
Thanks.. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting concept.

But I really hope the wedding happens.