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alwyz_with_u

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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Hey everyone,

A small try from my side on FFs. Its my first try, so do comment and criticize. Smile
Its kind of a redo on the karwachauth...with no murder Confused LOL

So here goes...

Sarita looked at the clock for what felt like the hundredth time that evening. But still there was no sign of him. She looked at Abhi, who like her was waiting for his Daddy. She couldn't even imagine what could possibly cause Vikrant ji to be late. She turned towards the main door and felt a spark of annoyance as she noticed vandana and kajal smirking at her.

Vikrant sat in his office looking outside the window. It was dark and cloudy outside, just as it was inside his mind. Yes, today he was supposed to give Sarita a taste of her own medicine. Today he was supposed to make Sarita realize the consequence of her mistakes. REVENGE - that was the only thing in his mind. But...He swirled angrily in his chair. But the gun, hurting her yesterday, lying to her only made him think less of himself. He was Vikrant Suryavanshi. He never treated a female like that, let alone his own wife. He was disgusted with himself. But the thing that shocked him the most was that his feelings for her was stronger than he expected and that just angered him more. Her tears, her pain hurt him more than his own pain. He banged his fist against the table and threw his head back against his chair.

He heard the cabin door open and even though his eyes were closed, he knew, he knew that it was her.The reason behind his pain, behind the torture he was going through. Taking a deep breath, he slowly opened his eyes and looked at her. She stood there looking almost ethereal in a red sari and with a thali in her hand. "Vikrant ji...what is it?" Sarita asked him with concern reflecting in her eyes. He had been deceived so many times by those eyes and feared trusting them again.

'What was bothering him' Sarita wondered as she stood by the door looking at him. He looked stressed, like all the world's burden was on his shoulder and she didn't want anything more than to help him. "Vikrant ji...??" she called out to him while moving towards him.

He angrily stood up and walked towards the window. She froze, stunned and unsure of how to proceed. "Sarita...what are u doing here?" His voice reflected suppressed anger and she wondered what could possibly be the reason. His behaviour puzzled her. Was he angry at someone else or was it her. And if it was her, then what could she possibly have done.

With confusion and uncertainty, she took a step towards him. "Woh...karwachauth?" "Karwachauth?" Vikrant spat it out almost like an insult. He spun around on his heels and walked towards her. He yanked the thali from her hands and dropped it on the table. He than grabbed both her shoulders and pulled her towards him. "Karwachauth? Do you even know what it implies...", he pulled her even closer; his face now mere inches away from hers, "... are you even fasting for me?"



Well I didn't want Vikrant keeping everything bottled up and then finding the truth from someone else.This was just a try at that. So how is it? Sleepy

Edited by alwyz_with_u - 15 November 2013 at 2:53am

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Awesome. 

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Wonderful start, dear! Clap

Please continue soon! Embarrassed

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plzz continue soon...

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Superb,updt soon.
Waiting.

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Beautiful start
continue soonSmile

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Thank you so much for the likes and comments Hug
Will try and update the next part soon.
PS. Eijaz Khan looks awesome in the precap...his rolled up sleeves Silly and finally the moment all ViSa fans were waiting for, Vikrant Suryavanshi in action. Party

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