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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jhanvi_TaaRey

Gosh!! This was one of thw awesome unique's' I have read...This definitely made me feel the heartbreak...this was amazing, though kinda emotional..it was heart wrenching.. i could actually feel the emotions described here...the start to the end..was...just so perfectly described...
would be glad if you continued this..
Maya, hats off Thumbs Up

~ J h a n v i 

Jhanvi, thank you so much!!
I'm so glad you liked this and that you could feel all that I wanted people to feel through this one shot!!
Continuation?
I don't know... I suck at anything longer than a chapter... 
So as of now I have no plans of continuing this...
But if I can come up with something worth penning down, I'll definitely get back to this! :)

Thank you once again!

~Maya

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Posted: 21 December 2013 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
This was something I really liked. Passion and tragedy-does wonders!
Both of them aren't easy to pen down,you have combined the two! Clap

Looking forward to read more from you! 

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
This was something different and amazing to read.
The heart break is beautifully penned down and 
the essence is felt while reading.

Keep writing.

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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by disha15

This was something I really liked. Passion and tragedy-does wonders!
Both of them aren't easy to pen down,you have combined the two! Clap

Looking forward to read more from you! 

Hey! Thank you so much!
I'm sorry for the late reply, but I was out of town.

I'm so glad you liked this enough to comment on it.
It means a lot!
And yes, I do hope you'll like my further pieces too. I'll try my best!
Thank you, once again!

~Maya

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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

This was something different and amazing to read.
The heart break is beautifully penned down and 
the essence is felt while reading.

Keep writing.


Thank you so much!
I'm sorry about the late reply, but I was out of town.

I'm glad you liked this and that you commented on it.
It really means a lot!
I hope my further pieces would be liked as well. 

Thank you, once again!

~Maya

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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 11:35am | IP Logged
it was awesome 

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Posted: 12 February 2014 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navk

it was awesome 

Thank you so much!

~Maya

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Maya
This reminded me of a message I received once. Though love is no just physical , the physical part is a core portion of love. No matter how much we shy away from discussing these things , it remains a fact that physical love is just as strong if not more than emotional love. 
So when we combine emotional love with physical off course an insatiable need is born. 
A different yet well executed OS.
Regards
Nidha

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