MMFF-Partners In Crime- FINISHED! last updt pg 99 - Page 27

Originally posted by: angeala95

Hey nice chapter!! The story is progressing really well!!
Happy new year to u and ur family!!

Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Hiii...🤗

Sorry to become a silent reader 4 sometime..😊

U r going on very nice...👏👏

Reviews:

Chap14-

Nanhi-Monu sequence is always a pleasure..whether to read (or watch) and as expected (4m the preview)..here too, it was really superb..👍🏼

And the name-"Green Uncle"-sounds really nice..perfect..!!

Chap15-

Oho...

The whole dupatta sequence(flying of the same n Monu catching it so quickly)..,was lovely😆

Enjoyed it..

Chap16-

Monan-Guru -"Friends-perfect"

They both not only understand each other but provide the best solution to each others problems tooo...

Loved it..

Chap17-

OMG...

Ms Spitfire apologised to Mr Disaster...!!!😳

This chap was fantastic...👍🏼👍🏼..at least Megha realized that she was wrongly thinking about Monu..

Chap18-

Nice update...n a good 1 again..

The portrayal of changes of equation b/w Mohan (Mr Disaster) & members of Vyas family espicially Megha (Ms Spitfire) was excellent..!!👏

Waiting eagerly 4 MM moments in next Chap...

Lastly..

Best wishes 4 New year 

&

The pic U've chosen is really nice..!!!😆

 Awesome chapters Lakshmi, great going👍🏼 Edited by yami2410 - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yami2410

 Awesome chapters Lakshmi, great going👍🏼

Loved all the Mohan/Nanhi, Mohan/Guru & Mohan/Megha scenes and the name Green Uncle is something different and I liked it. Nice picture.

Happy New Year 😊

Waiting for the next update and Thank you so much for the PM's dear.

https://www.wattpad.com/34503160-partners-in-crime-chap-19-updtd-chapter-19 
Edited by lilylakku9 - 10 years ago

feel good as mohan and megha are having talks and no disasters !

amazing chap..👏... n so much interesting...

hmm so now the bond is forming between the 2 , well lovely chapter eagerly waiting 4 next😃👏

Mohan gazing at Ms. Sweet Megha! That's nice and easy to visualize! 😉 The way he always gets lost in her presence and smile! 😳

Hi...

I just started reading your fanfic😊

Finished chapter 2...n am dying to finish it😃

Your beginning is really good..it grabs the reader's attention at once...😳

I liked how you have introduced the characters...giving every minute details...
😃