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Flashback in Bold.

 

Part 2

 

They were talking , when he asked.

"Kria , when will you stop calling me rehaan?"

"Mujhse jhut bolte waqt toh you did not think right? So why should I stop calling you rehaan? "

"Itna simple sa naam hain reyaansh singhaania mera , usse simple rey hain. Lekin rehaan."

"Come on yaar , rehaan ka short form reh hain , dono ko pronounce toh ek tareeke se kar sakte hain na."

"Fine you win."

Saying this he sealed his lips with her.

---

Four kids were playing in the garden , they were 5 years old.

"Chalo na chupan chupayi khelte hain."

Swayam said enthusiastically. To which sharey agreed , but kria was quiet. They thought she wanted to play , and sharon had to find everyone. Kriyaansh hid together.

"Klia , kya hua?"

"Mlko ghal ghal khelna hain."

"Toh tune bola kyun nahi."

"Tum logo ne bolne nahi dia."

"Accha koi nahi , next game?"

Kria nods.

"Shalon toh hum sabko kal tak dhundh legi."

Rey giggled. And peeped out , but sharon was no where suddenly.

"DHUNDH LIA!"

The two jump from their places and turned to see sharon , who showed them her tongue. Kria pouts.

"Accha ab hogaya , ab hum ghal ghal khelenge."

"Kria , abhi nahi na , baad mein."

"Lekin twayam mujhe khelna hain."

"Klia baad mein na plssh , mujhe chupan chupayi hi khelna hain."

Sharon said. Kria looked down and ran away to the bench , rey behind her.

"Klia aaj khel le , hum humesha ghal ghal hi khelenge."

"Nahiii , mein aur sharon agle mahine jaa rahe hain na dehradun. Phil?"

"Toh mein dehradun aakar , tumhale saath ghal ghal khelunga."

"Humesha?"

"Bale hokal udhal hi lahunga , tumhale saath!"

Kria smiled and held his hand and took him to the ground.

----

"Lo hogaya settle dehradun mein tumhare saath."

Rey said , knowing what kria must be thinking.

"Lekin ab mujhe mumbai jaana hain."

"Fine sweetie. Hum jaayenge."

"Yeah!"

Rey kissed her forehead.

---

It had been 19 years since kria had last met rey. Sharon had gone to mumbai for college , while kria had completed her college in dehradun.  Rey had come to dehradun , to meet his friend , who knew kria. So the two met. Rey recognized kria , as Sharon had showed him his pictures. They did not have an introduction , as kria was not in a mood to talk to anyone.

She was sitting alone , rey came to her.

"What's wrong?"

"Why should I tell you?"

"Sometimes sharing your problem with a stranger is better!"

"Fine , sit."

He sat beside her.

"Shoot."

"College has just finished , and mom's behind my marriage. Mom and dad have decided to make me meet some guy. Actually meet bhi kya , they have already decided to get me married to him."

"Who is the guy?"

"Reyaansh Singhaania , my childhood friend. "

Rey's eyes went wide , but he controlled.

"He is your childhood friend, so what's the problem?"

"Mein use jaanti tak nahi hun. 19years se nahi mili hun. I agree we both had promised each other ki hum dono ek saath rahenge , lekin that was a childhood promise."

"Tum usse ek baar mil lo."

"Mil bhi lun , mujhe koi problem nahi , jitna meine Sharon se sunna hain usse I know he is a great guy. Lekin mujhe ek bahot accha dancer banna hain , shaadi nahi karni abhi."

"Oh."

"Aur mom yeh samajh nahi sakti."

"That's bad , talk to your mom."

"She won't understand , that's the problem. Sharon toh apne boyfriend ke saath readily shaadi kar legi , lekin mein."

"Chill , universji par trust karo , he'll sort out everything."

"Tum bhi universji par vishwas karte ho?"

"Haan."

"Mein bhi. Yeh maine aur rey ne ek saath milkar decide kia tha. Anyways what's your name? I am kria."

"I am re."

"Re?"

"Rehaan."

"Nice to meet you rehaan."

Rey smiled at her.

 

Days passed , kria and rehaan oops reyaansh , became really close. It was time for rey to go back to Mumbai , before that kria promised that they would meet , and exchanged numbers.

---

Once kria came back to Mumbai , Sharon and kria were talking. Sharon told her about Rey.

"You should meet him once."

"Sharon , I guess I love someone else."

"What! Who? Tell me na."

Kria told her everything.

"Ooh , mujhe bhi milna hain jiju se."

"Fine , mein kal usse milne jaa rahi hun , tu bhi chalna."

"Cool."

"And mujhe rey se bhi milna hain , let's see voh hain kaisa."

"Fine."

---

The next day , krisha went to meet Rehaan in a caf. They reached. Rey was sitting in a way that his back faced them.

"Rehaan."

Rey turned , and Sharon was left flabbergast . Rey saw her and gulped.

"Sharon meet rehaan. Rehaan meet Sharon my sister."

"Hello Sharon , nice to meet you."

"Hello , re-rehaan!"

Rey thanked her through her eyes , kria went to the washroom after a while.

"What the hell rey! Yeh rehaan kaun hain?"

"Yaar , jab mein usse pehli baar mila , mujhe laga agar mein usse bol dunga ki mein rey hun toh voh toh mera katal kar degi."

"Haan baat toh sahi hain."

They laugh.

---

Days passed , kria and rey finally confessed. But now kria had to meet rey. So she went to rehaan and told him.

"Chill kria. It's going to be fine."

"Mein unko bol dungi ki mein tumse pyaar karti hun."

"Just don't hurt yourself sweetheart."

"I won't , I love you reh."

"What!"

"Rehaan ke first 3 initials , reh."

"Oh. I love you to baatcutter."

"Huh? Voh sirf mujhe rey bula sakta hain."

(Kria had told rehaan urf rey that rey used to call her baatcutter)

"Abhi mili nahi aur rights bana li , agar mil logi toh kya hoga?"

"Kuch nahi."

---

Kria and Sharon entered the restraint where kria and rey were going to meet for the first time. Their parents had already arrived. Kria spoke to rey's parents. Rey had still not arrived. That's when swayam came , practically pushing rey to go.

"Sorry we are late."

They look up and kria was numb.

"There they are. Uff now sit you two."

Reyam gave an apologetic look and sat. Kria stared at rey in shock , while shareyam and the parents who knew about rey's secret identity were controlling their laugh.

"Kria , meet reyaansh."

Anjali (Reyam's mom) said while pointing to rey. Kria was shocked.

"Mom , I don't think kria ko mein pasand aaya."

"Uss ne toh kuch bola bhi nahi dude."

Swayam said.

"Nahi , I think usse shayad shaadi se mana karna tha."

"Is it kria?"

Smriti asked. Kria nods in a no.

"Maine kab bola?"

 

And everyone burst out laughing.

"Tum mujhe uss din bhi bol sakte the na!"

"Uff baatcutter , socho agar mein uss din tumhe bolta toh tum mujhe gusse mein maar daalti ya guilty hoti ki tumne mere saamne meri baat ki. Waise ab rey se ya rehaan se, shaadi toh hum kar hi rahe hain . and I promise tere saath dehradun hi rahunga"

Kria bites her lip and smiled. Swaron clear their throat. All laughed. And soon kriyaansh got married. Kria made a carrier in solo performance and Rey continued in his group performances. Though they used to perform together.

 

---

"Kria whom do you love more? Rehaan ya reyaansh."

"Dono , barbar."

"Why?"

"Rehaan ne mujhe pyaar ka matlab sekhaya , aur reyaansh ne mujhe pyaar ka ehsaas dilaya."

"Tum itni pyaari kyun ho jaan?"

"Agar pyaari nahi hoti , toh tumhari jaan nahi hoti."

"I love you sweetie."

"And I love you too rey."

And they lied in each other's embrace re-living each and every moment they spent together.

--- 

Hope you all liked this work , ab toh gussa nahi ho na? :P

@-Vaish- your bizarre theory is true. :P


NOTE

 

1.Guys , I am really very DISSAPOINTED with the reviews I get. I send Pms to 200 ids! I deserve at least half reviews , I am not asking you to give me 100 reviews but just 34 reviews is NOT DONE! And can't review so atleast Like! The likes have hardly reached 70.

Now I am DEAD SERIOUS , PMS will BE sent to ONLY those who will review.  Abse bahot hogaya. And MOST of you don't bother to read the notes , I am sure about that. :/

 

2. I am posting this again ,  I have written an article you know school ka home work tha :P . Lekin mujhe uss par ek OS likhna hain. It suits Kria's situation , toh anyone ready to help me give a concept for that , please PM me. :D Plus remember i had written a D3 Os in Gumrah version? I need another concept for that as well , please suggest.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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wow !! i am first. i really didn't realize it.. LOLLOL
coming to the update
loved the childhood wala flashback.. it reminded me of my childhood
and then the adult wala flashback..

amazing..
i liked the way how kriya unknowingly told her feelings to rey Heart
all the krisharey scenes were well thought...
ishana superb chapter yaar !! too good !! Clap
loved it Embarrassed

thanks for the PM

PS. me first Big smile
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Edited by -spongy- - 09 November 2013 at 3:07pm

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awsum update..
loved it..
haye rey nd rehan same hi hai..
nyc..
loved the OS


Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 09 November 2013 at 6:09am

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