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TR SS - Light Camera Action!!!(Pt 2 updated pg 8)

SuMaN_TR Goldie

Joined: 27 December 2012
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Posted: 04 November 2013 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Heya guys after along period i m back 2 trotrue u writing ss bcoz finaly our lovely taani aka vrinda di is back so on this occasion i just got an idea or a scene how Taani goin 2 re enter in rey life again how would it wil be well this story can be of 2 - 3 parts ... if i get sufficient like n comment then only i wil update another part or else i wil quit 4m writing this story ... so njoy n this story wil be based on current track of d3 that is on ram leela...Big smileBig smileBig smile !!!!!!!

2 pg8


Morning about 7am all boys r in locker room ... every1 is thinking about the scene which was held yesterday ...!!!!


 Whole gang was present in rehersal hall n doing rehersals on ramleela ... all were moving ramdomly just memorizing their following dailouges according 2 their roles ... while at same time all where crashed with each other ... suddenly bharat crashed wit simmi  theiir a small fight started bwt them  then slowly all member inculde in that fight infact sharon swayam n rey where also inculded in it which bcom boyzz vs girls ... all were just messed up .ShockedShockedShocked ... suddenly Vp sir entered... by looking this mess he became damn angry n shouted st his high pitch  SleepySleepySleepy !!!!

Vp - Guys what the hell is goin on it is realy ramleela or u r preparing 4 mahabharat AngryAngryAngry ????
Gang was damn shocked n scared but then in bwt interupted by rinni
Rinni - sir hum tho ramleela kar raha hai Big smileBig smile
Simmi - ( banging her head n said near her ear ) Rinni dear sir is talking about the mess j abhi chal raha tha DeadDead
Vp - Well guys i think this ramleela is not yr cup of tea OuchOuch
Nil - ( Wit big smile ) Matlab humein ramlela nahi karna padega Big smileBig smile
Vp - No not like that tum sab tho ramleela karoge but their is sum change !!! WinkWink
Rey - change ??? what change ??
Vp - u guys hav 2 work under sum one direction so authority has appointed  a DIRECTOR who wil direct u n cast u ... n u guys hav 2 follow their intrustion !!!!!!!SmileSmile
Gang - Director ????? who wil be it ??ConfusedConfused
Vp - well u guys wil get know it soon !!!WinkWink

Then vp leave from rehersal hall n all gang r lost in vp sir news 

                                                                   FLASHBACK ENDS
In boys locker room 
Nil - Yaar vicky kya lagta hai kon ho sakta humare director ??? agar ladki hogi na dude i swear kaam mein flow aa jayega WinkWink 
Vicky - seriously dude WinkWink
Bharat - abbe nahi yaar agar ek ladki di di ...ConfusedConfused
Amar - Director 
Bharat_- haan vaich lakdi director banegi na hum usse rey ke saath setup karwa dege kya bolta hai bichara kitana akela padh gaya hai a usse nayi item ki jarurat hai boss !!!!WinkWink
AMar , Vicky , Nil - ( Glaring at bharat ) sahi hai baba jai ho apki Big smileBig smile !!!
Vicky - So guys done agar director ladki nikali so hum uska rey ke saath set up karwayege WinkWink
ALL in one - Yes mission rey ki new gf WinkWink !!!

Now scene shift to rehersal hall REY is present their n doing some workout After sometime swayam enter 

Rey - hey dude whats up??
Swayam - hey ... waise tu itane subhe subhe rehesal hall mein ???
Rey - Yaar u know na abhi ramleela ke practises hogi n jada se jada time usi mein busy rahege so dance ke liye routine banane ke liye time hi nahi bachega ... so we hav ready as schedule bahut tight honewala hai !!!
Swayam - I know ... upar se ye new director ka scene pata nahi kon hoga ???
Rey - ya but usmein prob kya hai agar new director aa raha hai infact acha hua ab sab kuch jada sorted jayega n sab kuch maintain hoga SmileSmile!!!
Swayam - Aare yaar wahi baat ka daar hai kahi sort hone ke jagha jada messed up na ho jaye OuchOuch
Rey - Matlab???
Swayam - aare yaar ye sharon kahi implusive hoke koi panga na karle director ke saath u know her agar kuch uske ke against hoga tho kitana hyper ho jati hai OuchOuch
Rey - agar itani care karta hai tho usse dur kyun hai??
Swayam - yaar tu nahi samjhega 
Rey - hey dude chillax sab sahi hi hoga ohk so lets wait n wtch KOn hoga ya Hogi hamari director so WAIT n Watch !!!!Ermm
Swayam - ya lets Wait n watch !!!!

SCEne is of rehersal hall all gang member r present their n waiting 4 their new director well r excited, nervous, tense , etc as it just mixced emotion is goin on in gang mind as they r excited actualy who is the director ... n nervous n tense boz they don't knoe how will be he or she whether they can cope up with that director????

At the sametime a girl enter at the collage premises enterance gate ...their got the glimspe of shining board of St. Louis collage ...

All guys were just staring at her each glance n girls r damn jealous of each thing well wehther it may ne glittery still classy heeLS !!!

HEr heels were so prefectly fitted her tip toes to her heels with her one walk all r fainted !!!!!!!! Even girls dye 2 hav such classy walk with prefection !!!

SCEne in RH
Simmi - yaar ye director kab aaye ga ??
Nil ( suddenly) - ya phir aayegi !!!!
Simmi - What??
Nil- I mean director ladki bhi ho shakti haina Big smileBig smile ( giving ishara 2 vicky,amar n bharat ) 
Rinni - But guys aisa jaruri tho nahi haina wo ladka bhi tho ho sakta haina !!!!

Scene shift 2 collage corridor 
Girl - Excuse me !!!
suddenly massive of boys jumps in front of them all askin - aapne mujhe bulaya ???
Girl- ( totaly confused still her back i s facing ) Can u guys tell me D3 gang kaha par milege ???
ALL boysjust melted in her honey n sweet voice n just tempted by it 
Then one reply dreamily - haan wo rehersal hall mein hai ... well miss what is yr name??
Girl- ( with full attitude) Whatever !!!Sleepy
she move from there 2wards rh ways

Scene shift 2 Rh
Bharat - nahi wo ladka nahi hoga wo ladki hi hogi dekh lena 
Simmi - tum itana sure kaise ho sakte ho???
Vicky- Bas humein aise feeling aa rahi hai !!!
Aashi- what feeling types tho humein bhi aa shakti hai n humein feel ho raha ladka hi hoga !!!Embarrassed
Boys - nahi ladki hogi !!
Girls- naho ladka hoga!!
Boys- ladki
Girl_- ladka
Rey got irritated n shouted aloud - Guys stop it what the hell ladka hoga ladki hogi ... yaha koi pregenant nahi hai ki hum decide kar rahe ki ladka hoga ya ladki hogi!!!!!AngryAngryAngry

Suddenly an unknown voice overpowered Excuse me guysss at the enterance of the rh hall
All gangmember turn 2wards rh enterance just 2 see that persons by whom their conversation was interupted... as soon as they the image of the person appear... the screen freeze their !!!!

Soon the unknown person wil be reveal in next part if i got enough response or else i will not proceed so do like n comment if u think it is worth it Big smileBig smileBig smile !!

Edited by SuMaN_TR - 07 November 2013 at 1:02pm

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rabitaarey Goldie

Joined: 30 June 2013
Posts: 2106

Posted: 04 November 2013 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Awesome ts dear Clap
loved it its superb yaar Clap
and loved rey 's dialogue
And director I guess taani hogi Embarrassed
but dont no kon hoga ya hogi Wink
plzzz continue this Clap

Yeyyee me first Party

Thanks for pm Heart

Edited by Rabertmona - 04 November 2013 at 1:57pm

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Muskan_TR Goldie

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Posts: 1559

Posted: 04 November 2013 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
superb yaar...
plzzz continue it

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shamanbk IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4287

Posted: 04 November 2013 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
awesome start
I think it's Taani
please continue and pm me

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..Deepkriti.. IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5845

Posted: 04 November 2013 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
we all know who this girl is!!!
post asap
and do send me the pm

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taareylover14 Goldie

Joined: 23 January 2013
Posts: 1238

Posted: 04 November 2013 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Waoo like aeriouslly waoo
It was superbbb
Am speechless...
U did a fabb job
Plz plz plz plz contiue yr
Plz plz plz
Its jst superbbb

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taanitaarey Groupbie

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Posted: 04 November 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Nice start
update next part ad early as possible

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-crazyfan- Senior Member

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Posted: 04 November 2013 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
Suberb yaarr 
waiting for to know who is she

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