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Poem: Are you Okay??

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 3:57am | IP Logged
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Someone asks . " Are you okay??"

No I am not..
I am not okay at all
I feel lonely , I feel alone
I feel abandoned as if no one is my own!!

I feel lost , I feel confused
No one to talk to , No one to listen
All busy with their lives 
Not a single soul to spare some time!!

I hide my feelings
I hide my thoughts
I hide my tears and just move on..
Each day brings more fear
Each day becomes worse..
But i just move on!!

Life becomes harder with each passing day
I really need someone to talk too
Someone to listen'
Someone to pull me out of my own world..

But all I reply with is - " YES"



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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 4:02am | IP Logged
You amaze me sometimes sweety!Tongue

Your poems are awesome!ClapClapClapClapClap

And remember, I'll always be there for you even in my busy schedule!Wink

Wanna talk to you... Missing you baby!CryCryCry


Edited by Angelic_Friend - 03 November 2013 at 4:03am

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It's really awesome Ridhzz...
I luv ur poems always...
u have an amazing talent...
keep writing dearSmile



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it's awesome buddyClap

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angelic_Friend

You amaze me sometimes sweety!Tongue

Your poems are awesome!Clap

And remember, I'll always be there for you even in my busy schedule!Wink

Wanna talk to you... Missing you baby!CryCryCry


Thanks chocoBig smile

Arrey dont cry naa...
We will talk soon naa..
U give ur exams first n get rid of them
n then We will have lots n lots of chatSmile

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samtarey

it's awesome buddyClap

thanks a lotSmile

P.S   i will read n comment on ur story soon Smile

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ridzi123

Originally posted by Angelic_Friend

You amaze me sometimes sweety!Tongue

Your poems are awesome!Clap

And remember, I'll always be there for you even in my busy schedule!Wink

Wanna talk to you... Missing you baby!CryCryCry


Thanks chocoBig smile

Arrey dont cry naa...
We will talk soon naa..
U give ur exams first n get rid of them
n then We will have lots n lots of chatSmile


Sure sweety!Wink

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 4:40am | IP Logged
I just love all of ur poems, including this one. You write them so flawlessly. I don't have words for them. They r amazing. Keep writing. Its always a pleasure to read what u write! Smile

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