FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 7

great update! I just love Asad being so possessive about Zoya they're too cute! please continue soon; I can't wait to see what happens next

Awesome update... Loved the way Asad is reacting to both Zoya n Najma behaving like two starstruck teenagers in the house. 😆😆😆

A brilliant twist that you have introduced n am looking forward to read on those lines. 👏👏

Thanks for the pm n please update soon. Please pm me for the next part too.

P.S. Read your ff "Web Of Lies" in one go on the night of 8th November. just loved it.😃

The seeds of the mystery have been laid

Asad irritated by the girls fussing over glasses and jug.

I LOVED IT AND HOW ASYA ARE DOWNSTAIRS AT NIGHT THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE 😃

wonderful...girls r going crazy over rohan...poor asad!!!
so there's someone trying to ruin asad's business...interesting!!!
continue soon

Great chapter!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!

Fab update!!


Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

you are my favourite fanfiction author on this site in terms of writing  BUT you don't update frequently so that makes you lose points. I try not to get hooked to your story, but any time an update comes I drop everything to read it. Please don't torture your fans.

 Edited by PalyGirl - 10 years ago

Hey! Firstly the update was superawesome as always, I love the way najma n zoya fangirl over Rohan n Asad's reaction its damn hilarious at times n the last part was gripping n secondly so very sorry I couldn't comment the last time as I m currently not that very active on forum nor I m faollowing qh that religiously but who can ignore such a wonderful writer like u. U just rock girl n keep writing your amazing mysteries n keep entertaining us. Eagerly waiting for your next update n thanks a lot for the pm...