Arjun Case SS: The Devil's Trap, Chap4, Page 27 24/01 - Page 3

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Amazing prologue tina 

U r really good at  writing suspense 

Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: Sakuu

loved the prologue! Hmm who is the rugged looking guy?

what is in the parcel?

Why was the guy kidnapped?

And why were the womans eyes swollen? Is she related to the guy? If she is then the rugged looking guy could be apna Arjun...

Ah itbe zyada sawaal tina update chheti chheti! Mujhe jawaab chahiye!

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Prologue seems intriguing... 

Please continue soon

And PM me if you can... Sending a buddy request, kindly accept it.😳

Eagerly waiting for the first chapter😛

Originally posted by: invisible2018

another case story wowww...👏

i just love to read these suspense stories...nice prologue

continue soon...

i have sent u a buddy req plz accept it and do pm me when ever u update...😳

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital

Awesome beginning dear...
An interesting one...

Is she getting trapped in any sort of smuggling or homicide...???
It was indeed her stupidity to accept a job without knowing what she is transporting actually...
But ofcourse her miserable situation made it undeniable...

And what was there in that...??? who is that lady...??? Is her friend also involved in this...????

And ugly truth was just awesome...
It really hightened up my expectations dear.. 😉

Cont. soon...

Originally posted by: Faruheer

Wow interesting
Riya ko include karna plz if possible
Thanx for pm
Continue soon

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

wow!!

liked the concept!!!😃

well started!!😃

why do i feel ke us packet me koi body part tha??😕

update soon!!