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mannat.urwish

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 5:35am | IP Logged
awsome Clap Clap Clap plz cont soon Smile Smile Smile

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~*Milly*~

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by brainychild92

i wonder...... who will win????????? hmmmmmm.. such a tough decision.. my goody good or hotty hott!!!!!!!!!

well glad it aint up to me cuz otherwise i go mad just trying to choose!!lolzzz....    

plzzzzzzzzz continue soonn.. and i wonder. prem kya karega?? will he stop them from meeting or take the rishta to their home...      
wat aboout iqra.. will she luv josh or adi?? hmmmmmmm...   


dont keep us waiting.. we all wanna know.. rite guyzzz
Beat  the crap out of themLOL

Shazii

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 11:50am | IP Logged

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Dil ko churaya aapne part 4

 

Prem gets out the car angrily,he goes up to shazmin and anum who are still hugging there boyfriends.

 

Prem-ANUM,SHAZMIN,tum dono kya kare ho

 

Anum and shazmin apart and are shocked to find there brother there.

 

Anum-hi bro

 

Prem-hi now would you care to tell me wat u two r playing at?yeh ladke kaun hai no forget that why da  the hell r u hugging them

 

Shaz-vo

 

Rishi-hum inke dost hai

 

Sahil-ha dost

 

Anum-them two r twins like us and todays there birthday and we were just wishin them by hugging them

 

Prem-r u sure ke yeh dono sirf tumhare dost hai ya kuch aur bi hai

 

Shaz-bro we arent stupid these two are like our brothers

 

Rishi-wat u think of me as ur brother

 

Sahil steps on his foot

 

Rishi-ha ha brothers

 

Shaz/anum-believe us bro

 

Sahil-ha bro believe us

 

Prem-oi don't u dare call me bro,ok here shaz and anum your coursework

 

Shaz/anum-thanks bro

 

Prem-aur haan ider ao(moving them away from the boys)I know u think of them like your brothers but to me they look like big fools so don't get too attached

 

Anum/shaz-ok bro

 

Prem-bye

 

Prem goes,Rishi sahil anum shazmin all have a laugh about it.

 

Meanwhile kripa and iqra r talking sitting on the bench.(by the way kripa is unaware about the fight)kripa is still upset about earlier,iqra notices this.

 

Iqra-hey kripa kya hua

 

Kripa-kuch nahin

 

Iqra-mughse jhoot kehrahi ho

 

Kripa-di vo(she explains the whole story)I hate him

Iqra-u know angad was a good guy but since aliyah left hes become a total jerk but u don't worry im here and so is prithvi.

 

Kripa-forget me u look happy

 

Iqra-vo ha adi proposed to me

 

Kripa-wat wow(stands up in excitement)im so happy 4 u wat did u say

 

Iqra-I said ill think

 

Kripa-wat but u love him

 

Iqra-ha lekin imnot sure about adi i know wat type of guy he is afterall hes my best friend

 

Kripa-did he say he loves u

 

Iqra-ha lekin

 

Kripa-lekin vekin kuch nahin,look iqra tum kehti ho na adis ur best friend so theres no way hes gonna hurt you,if he said he loves you he probably means it

 

Iqra-u think

 

Kripa-I know

 

Iqra-fine ill meet him on satarday cuz hes going pune with his family 4 two days so itll be a surprise 4 him wen he comes back.

 

Kripa-done

 

She stands up and starts walking backwards at the same time as talking.

 

Kripa-im really happy 4 u but I haft to go now so ill see u…(bumps in to someone)sorry

 

She turns to find angad

 

Angad-that's wait wanted to hear now ill forgive u lekin tumhe mughe pehle kiss dena parega

Kripa-eh hello I was saying sorry cuz I bumped in to you and u think id kiss you r u out of your mind now u listen…

 

Iqra gets up

 

Iqra-kripa leave him comeon

 

Kripa-im going Its not my hobby to chat to losers.

 

She goes and angad grins

 

Angad-u just wait and watch kripa sharma ill make u kiss me and that be with your permission.

 

At the end of college all 4 sisters head home.at home shazmin and anum get ready to go watch the fight.kripa and iqra see them all dressed up and gets confused.

 

Iqra-tum dono kaha jaarahe ho

 

Shaz-why di

Anum-we don't have to tell u plus kripa di u should know

 

Kripa-know wat saaf saf bolo tum dono kaha jaarahe ho

 

Shaz-di were going to watch the fight

 

Kripa-fight whose fight

 

Anum-angad and prithvis fight

 

Kripa-kya

 

Anum-ha ok di hum chalet hai love u bye

 

Iqra-ek minute koi kahin nahin jaaraha hai

 

Kripa-nahin iqra di,shaz and anum u stay home ill go stop prithvi

 

Shaz-but di we realy wanted to go

 

Kripa-bas aj ke din ghar raho itna nahin karsakte mere liye ,pls

Shaz-fine

 

Anum-see di we do love you

 

Kripa- I know u do,anyways bye ill be back in a while

 

Iqra-kripa

 

Kripa-haan

 

Iqra-dyaan rakhna

 

Kripa-ok di bye

 

Kripa reaches the place of the fight shes wearing this:

 

 

She sees angad there hes wearing this:

 

Lee Mens Denver Jeans

 

And she also sees her best friend prithvi there wearing this:

 

Diesel Mens Zaf Jean

 

She goes up to prithvi

 

Kripa-prithvi pls fight mat karo

 

Angad-ha kripa bilkul sahi kehrahi hai prithvi,chalo kripa ke baat mano ya bachne ke liye aur koi chaara nahin milega

 

Prithvi-u just shut up and kripa pls u stay out of this

 

Kripa-lekin

 

Prithvi-kripa!!

 

Kripa moves away while prithvi gets beaten up by angad badly,prithv is now on the floor while everyone is congratulating angad,one by one everyone goes leavin angad,kripa,prithvi. Kripa runs to prithvi

 

Kripa-prithvi tum tik ho

 

Prithvi ignores kripa,he stands up and takes a knife out of his pocket and stabs angad in his back,prithvi then makes a runner leaving angad in a pool of blood and a shocked kripa.

 

Preview-WILL ANGAD SURVIVE?

Shazii

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 11:55am | IP Logged
and yeah everyone thanks for your wonderful comments and milly were nothing like shaz and anum in real life, well divijot i bet after reading this part ull think were even more eviler Wink LOL

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Cry Cry Cry my poor angad Cry Cry continue soon

bhumishah

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
nice part n that prithvi Angry how dare he stab angad? ofcourse he can b/c he is a killer lol he killed josh
continue soon

Divjot_10

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Hi,
Oh............. what the hell? Shocked. I think i was just kidding about the whole evil brain thingy. BUt i guess u guys are totally EVIL Angry Angry Angry ARe yaar Memze yeh kya kardiya aapne?? Bechara angad was prolly just kidding. Right Confused. Man this ff is good. Excellent part Memze. So I think Rishi and Sahil are urs and unums bros eh?? LOL That was good guys. Haan Iqra ji..... humein maaf kijiye plzzzz ki humne aapko evil kaha. Aap to maha evil se zyada nikle LOL Jk.... Jk... Plzzz plzzz don't kill me now. Ouch I was just kidding. I'm glad i could entertain u by postings comments on ur fabulous writtings. Big smile Good Luck!! How about u keep postings parts and i keep posting comments on ur guyss ff. Cool eh?? I love the idea.... how bout u?? K... Bye!!

Luv u all Hug Hug Hug
Divjot Big smile

~*Milly*~

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by memze

and yeah everyone thanks for your wonderful comments and milly were nothing like shaz and anum in real life, well divijot i bet after reading this part ull think were even more eviler Wink LOL
ya ya whatever i belive u Wink Tongue

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 31 August 2006 at 12:40pm

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