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Dill Ko Churaya Aapneh AK 1YR LEAP PG127 (Page 5)

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Kripa and iqra left for college with the driver,shazmin and anum went to the separate car and went up to the driver.


Shaz-yo driver


Driver-jee memsaab


Anum-we want to drive ourselves so get out


Driver-lekin prem saab ne mana kiya


Shazmin looks at anum and takes a few notes out and hands it to the driver.




Driver-shukriya memsaab


Shaz-ab niklo yaha se

Kripa and iqra in the car:


iqra-so kripa wat ur planning on saying today


kripa-about wat


iqra- angad if he comes to you


kripa-u no wat im not in a good mood today and if he does anything stupid today I swear I will shout norally I stay quite but I wont today so he better pray to stay out my way.


Iqra-why aren't you in a good mood


Kripa-prithvis phone came hes not coming back till tomoro


Iqra-don't worry hell come soon


Kripa-prithvi is so horrible he promised his best friend meaning me hell come today but wat does he do he he breaks the promise.let him come bahut maar kayega mughse


Iqra-well my best friend u no who is taking me out today he says his got a surprise


Kripa-are u thinking wat im thinking




They both laugh


Rishi and sahil go together in one car,on the way they see shaz and anum.

They stop the car on the side of the road.


Rishi/sahil-hey gals


Shaz/anum-(they aklso stop the car on the side road)hi boys


Rishi-hey shaz u come here and sahil will go with anum wat say


Anum-I say cool


Shaz-how can I say no


Shazmin goes with rishi and anum goes with sahil.


Angad on his date:


Angad-I love you


Gal-wat nonsense u don't even know my name and u love me


Angad-I don't need to know your name my heartbeat tells me you're the one


Gal-really angad


Angad-really vaise tumhara naam kya hai




Angad-wow beautiful vaise wat college do you go to


khushi-no im in year 9 in secondary school im only14




Khushi-why kya hua angad u love me na


Angad-yeah I love you but I haft to go bye


Khushi-lekin promise kar ke tum vaapas aaonga

Angad-yeah yeah promise


Angad runs from there and goes to college.


Angad-(thinks)god bachgaya


Everyone reaches college,they all go there classes apart from rishi and shazmin who are making out in the car and sahil and anum who are also making out in there kripas lesson angad iratates her.


Angad-hey kripa stop studying na and show me your beautiful face


Kripa-angad shut up and do your work


Angad-pata hai kripa I dream of you everynight I think I love you


Kripa-angad bakvaas band karo

Angad-kya kripa your such a bore




Angad-ah forget you(he turns to the other girl)hey baby




In iqras class:


The teacher goes out and iqra gets a phone call


Iqra-hello so mera best friend finally got time to ring me so tell me how come ure not in college


Guy-im planning the surprise I just called to tell you come to caf ritz at 2 sharp


Iqra-lekin I got a lesson that time

Guy-so miss it comeon iqra pls


Iqra-tik hai bye




2.00 sharp:


Iqra goes to caf ritz where as kripa has got a free lesson and goes to the canteen.angad is already there with the big crowd.he sees kripa.


Angad-kripa ure so damn beautiful only if you would stop being boring youd be so much fun


Kripa-angad shut up


Angad comes by her and holds her by the waist


Angad-comeon kripa wheres the spirit now be a good gal and give me a kiss wat say guys


Everyone in the canteen-yeah


Kripa pushes him off


Kripa-get away from me u saddo


angad-wat im a sadd khud ko dekha hai


kripa-yes dekha hai aur atleast mein to kehsakti hoon ke mughme decency hain aur tum huh

angad-aur mein kya

kripa-forget it

angad-no i wana no

kripa-ur nothing but a desperate lowlife whose got nothing better to do then chase girls.

angad-atleast ive got a life look at you,your a freak all you do is study i mean have u seen ur  younger sistas theyve got a life atleast theyre both hooked and u and that other sista of urs whats her name iqra.your both such weirdos.hey guys ive got a really good name 4 them



everyone laughs at kripa who is trying to control her tears.she just runs from there.kripa goes to the washroom and washes her face.


Kripa-why did I run I shoudve gave him one slap on his face but how could he be so mean,no if he says anything else to me that's what hes gonna get a slap on his face.

She goes back out to the canteen and sits in the corner and goes through her coursework.angad comes up to her.

Angad-hey behenjee u came back again

Kripa ignores him the first time thinking he might shut up,angad gets pissed off when she doesn't talk to him so he pushes off the chair and against him.

Angad-wen im talking to you I expect you to listen


Kripa-just bug off u horrible person


Angad-oh yeah well tell me if this is horrible


He pushes her closer and kisses her forcefully,he then aparts and grins at her.

Angad-so tell me now do u still hate me


Kripa is so angry she gives him one slap across his face.angad cant believe he raises his hand but someone stops him.


Preview-who is it ?

amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 6:30am | IP Logged
great part! Is it prithvi? Cont. soon!
Shazii Goldie

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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 6:33am | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

great part! Is it prithvi? Cont. soon!

thanks god guess it might be to find out read the next part which inshallah should be up tommorow evening

bhumishah Goldie

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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 9:18am | IP Logged
is it prithvi? nice part
continue soon
bhumishah Goldie

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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 9:18am | IP Logged
is it prithvi? nice part
continue soon
Mulle Senior Member

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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 9:31am | IP Logged
wauw awesome fanfic Clap Clap
pls continue soon Embarrassed
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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 9:38am | IP Logged
great part
brainychild92 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
its prithvi!!!!!!!    rite???? omg it is ... it sooo is..    

angad will feel jealous to see her with him!!!!!! perfect....

mindblowing part!!! continue soooooooooooooooonnn!!!

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