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This is my first attempt of writing story ...so I am ready for your Juta and chappal... Please like this chapters and post your comments and suggestion for improvement... thank you for reading my version of Jodha Akbar...love story
Before war or attack Jalal typically likes to visit that state... He heard a lot about Amer State and Ameri princess Jodha's bravery and beauty. He wanted to see this princess, who can fight with his 10 soldiers all by herself. Every time Jalal heard Amer and Jodha, he felt some connection, which brought evil smile on his face...His curiosity to see Jodha brought Jalal to Amer.
It was a time of Ghangor festival... Ghangor is one of the biggest festival in Amer. In this festival, there are many competitions organized and lots of Rajvanshi Raja and Princes from different states and villages come to take part in this grand celebration of Ghangor festival. It is colorful festival with full of life, everyone seemed very happy and enjoying this celebration. There are big markets, competitions, food, music, drama and fun for kids and many more things... Jalal was pretty much impressed by arrangements and preparations made for this festival. He walked around to see the Market & the richness of Amer, then he wanted to see how strong the soldiers are, so he went to see all the competitions. He was shocked to see how disciplined and systematic these competition's were taking place. People show their love and respect for their land before they enter, they bowed down to their land. There were 40 arcade of different competition. People were showing there different talent, art and expertise in different fields.
Jalal was passing through his favorite Sword fight competition. He stopped their and saw there were two brave expert sword firgter's (yodhha's) were fighting. One of the Yoddha looked different not really muscular and his face was covered with his turban... but he was fighting amazingly. He was pretty impressed with this yoddha's flexibility, moves and quickness which is the most important in sword fight. He was in the top rank winning; he defeated three soldiers one by one in no time. Finally announcer declares him as a winner and asked the group if anyone wants to fight against this veer Yoddha (Brave soldier) . Jalal didn't want to take part since there was a chance for his identity to get exposed . He kept quiet for a while then again finally he heard from announcer again that no one can win against this solider here and Jalal couldnt hold himself so he decided to fight and for him winning is everything, so he decided to take risk to enter in the competition.
Jalal with roar announced , I will fight with this fighter and show him real sword fight then he looked at the solider and smirks... Jalal jumped into the competition ground and fight started...Jalal never lost in sword fight before... At that time probably, he was the best in entire India in sword fighting. Other fighter realized right away with the first attempt from him that he is not an ordinary fighter. Other fighter put all of his effort to win this contest. They fought for about ten minutes with different moves. Jalal was pretty impressed with the fighter's attacks and defense. Jalal fell twice but he controlled very quickly and attacked back on fighter. Suddenly other fighter fell on ground facing down and his face and hair cover opened and fell on the ground...what he saw couldn't believe his eyes ...long silky beautiful open hair... Jalal was about to attack again but his sword stopped right there. He had never seen any women in sword fighting this was a shock to him , amusement and curiosity took over jalal to see this beauty.
Precap: Jalal mesmerized with the beauty of the fighter...
Jalal Mesmerized in Jodha's beauty:
Jalal couldn't believe his eyes that he was sword fighting with a women. Everyone around there were also shocked to see this. Women were not allowed in this competition. She was facing other side from the crowd and Jalal... Her long silky beautiful open hair was covering her back and face as well. Jalal got very curious to see her face before he could see her, she took her turban and jumped out from the competition arcade and covered her face quickly again. No one were able to see her face. Without wasting a second Jalal also jumped out from that place and followed her. She didn't know that she was being followed by Jalal. She ran towards the back side of the temple... near a small beautiful river and very lonely place. Yes of course thats our Jodha (Ameri princess)... She told Moti to meet her at the river in two hours. Moti was not yet there , she was little bit early ... She took off her turban cloth from her hair and face then started to fix her long beautiful hair. She was also afraid of her identity getting exposed , she talked to herself, thank you, god for not exposing my identity otherwise I would have been in trouble by my parents and brothers. She had no idea that someone is watching her from back. Jalal is still trying to see her face, he was only able to see her from back side. Jalal had impressed Jodha with his sword fighting skills and left a lasting impression on her, Jodha was lost in thoughts about his sword fighting skill, strong look and confidence. She admired his skill and smirks little bit...
Jalal could not wait to see her now, his curiosity was increasing every second...finally he decided to go & see her personally. He walked towards her... he almost reached where she was sitting and thinking about him but still he cannot see her face.
From behind Jalal said: So you have accepted your defeat and ran away. No one can stand against me in sword fight...
He said with proud look without looking at her...
She realized someone is behind her; she abruptly turned back with her sword and placed it on Jalal's neck... For a minute...her heart stopped breathing seeing his royal impressive look...then she said with gratified look "hum rajvanshi kabhi kisi se haar nahi mante, Sar kata sakte hai par jhuka nahi sakte".
Jalal forgot to breathe...his heart stopped beating for a second... when he saw Jodha for the first time... ... what a beauty, she looks every bit of a beautiful Rajput princess, her fiery eyes, powerful yet delicate sharp features, curvy figure, extremely gorgeous body... spotless soft skin. Jalal had more than five hundred wives but none of them where comparable to her beauty and bravery... Jodha looked at him with angry look and said stop staring at me...
Jalal with amused look asked her only one question... who are you?
Jodha asked same question with resentment, who are you and why are you following me? She recognizes him immediately that she had just sword fight with him. She also thought that he is a rajput prince or king.
Jalal came out of her beauty spell and back to his sense and said with smirk; looks like you still want to fight.
Jodha cools down and takes off the sword from his neck and asked him again to answer her question.
Jalal said with grin, I am king of Hindustan and I am following you because you have amused me with your beauty and bravery, I cannot take my eyes off you.
Suddenly Jodha started to laugh... And said King of Hindustan ..??? so you are Jalaludddin Mohammad...??? And again started to laugh hard. Jalal will not dare to put his feet in Amer. Jalal again got lost in her innocent laugh...he is completely mesmerized with her divine beauty.
Jalal with smirk; oh really why do you think, that Jalal will not dare to step in Amer...?? Jodha with full of pride says ; I have killed Jalal's ten soldiers all by myself alone. He will not even dare to think about coming to Amer. When Amer princess Jodha can kill his ten soldiers alone, what will happen to him when entire Amer's army attacks? She looked so satisfied of herself and flaming hot while answering jalal .
Oh so you are Amer princess Jodha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...hmmm & smirks again...
Jodha realized that she has been talking to a stranger and revealed him the secret that she is a princess.
Jodha inquired him again who are you? Jalal suddenly realized that he had sent Abdul to very dangerous mission to find out more secrets about Amer and he completely forgot he needs to be with him soon, otherwise he will be captured by Amer's army. He didn't wanted to leave this beauty but he had no choice.
He came very near to Jodha ...with very sensual voice & passion he whispered that he will come back to get her and she will find out soon who he is. Before Jodha could say anything Jalal walked off with a smile on his face, saying to himself ... UFFF ...JODHA princess of amer... "hum khamkha hi wo sipahi pe naraz ho gaye the aapko dekh ke to allah bhi ruk jayenge" at that time he decided that he will acquire her no matter what happens. She belongs to HIM only...
Jodha still thinking who was he? She also liked his strong attitude, his bravery, his bright look, charming and attractive personality. She thought that he is definitely a king or prince of some Suryavansh.
Both of them were lost in each other's thoughts.
Precap: Abdul got captured and Jodha's wedding fixed with Raja Suryabhan.
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