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Posted: 10 years ago


" Your highly illustrative write-up, especially you positioning 'realisation' as the raison d'etre for today tells me that the epi was built around the core concept or element of 'realizations' and the entire narrative 'unfurled' from that point. It also bespeaks brilliant handling on the storyboard and at 'execution' time. 

Let's thus imagine the episode as a 'rosebud' with 'realizations' as the core - and all other story tangents (Saras-Kumud, Kumud-Saras-Kusum, Kumud-Pramad-Saras, a probable Kusum-Danny-Kumari etc) as 'petals'... The rosebud is slowly opening up, and once it does then only will we be able to ascertain if all the petals are a vibrant, rich, strong Red right through, or has 'Black' already crept in dyed the velvet in places with its hue, & curled it around the edges. 

So let us all await the day/epi of 'full bloom' friends... =)

Edit: Think of the petals then, as the actions individual characters will make on their respective realisations. That will ensure and determine the strength and 'health' of the petals... And how those actions, executed as a result of today's realisations - will affect the different equations in play, at the level of the larger narrative. "



Ivy ...




What a Beautiful image you have painted above ... Siigghhh...  ❤️

a lovely allegory ...  👏


" Unfurling of the Rose bud " ... Yes let us wait for it ... look forward to it... Hopefully it shall ultimately flower into a Heavenly Red Rose ...with no taint of Black ... 😊 

Posted: 10 years ago
" Let me not to the marriage of true minds

Admit impediments. Love is not love

Which alters when it alteration finds,

Or bends with the remover to remove:

O no! it is an ever-fixed mark 

That looks on tempests and is never shaken;

It is the star to every wandering bark,

Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.

Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks 

Within his bending sickle's compass come: 

Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks, 

But bears it out even to the edge of doom.

If this be error and upon me proved,

 I never writ, nor no man ever loved. "




Sriija ...




What lines ... Absolutely BEAUTIFUL   !!        👏


Thanks a lot for the  lines above ... 


and ... All the Good Luck for your exam ...    😊

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by annete


Tere siva
Nahin aur kuch bhi tera siva
Meri dosti
Meri zindagi
Mei khamoshi
Meri be-basi 
Mera alam bhi
Mear naam bhi
K meri subah 
K meri shaam bhi
Woh sabhi kuch tujhe atta(bestow/confer) kare
Meri jaan to yaheen kar
Mujhe mangana tu na aa saka
Main ne phir bhi mangi yehi dua
K gawahi de ga mera khuda
Maine jab bhi us se talab kiya 
Nahi manga kuch bhi 
TERA SIVA

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annette ...



Aaap SAMUD  ke liye Kyaa Khoob Panktiyaan Chun Chun ke Laate  Ho ...


Waahh ... Waahh...     👏
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Ad_Mumbai_Girl



do see it dear. It is worth it :)
your time will not be going down the drain.

Ivy ji, well written. The epi was worth watching. You might want to give it a try.


Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by -Ivy-



AMEN Annete. Long Live CB, indeed:

Ghar bann gaya hai, ahem saath bann gaya hai
Dil ke kisi kone se shuruat kiya tha
Magar ab hamari jaan bann gaya hai. 



Life line of the forum indeed. Thanks arshi.

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