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OS Amarprem - Chapter 58 Part 2 page 2 (Page 2)

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Posted: 25 October 2013 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rekrn

Dhanya what an wonderful updateClapClapClapClap

It was so beautifully written you could feel and understand the feelings that Kriya are going thru.  Both of them trying not be affected by each other but failing miserably.Embarrassed

So will Krishna realize that she only has the one sari and have clothes sent for her.
 
  Thanks dear Big smile 
 
 
 U will see Wink 

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babithaj

while she frightened about the thought [no clothes], she gonna learn more about him... Winkmy feelings...Embarrassed may be Krishna will not take advantage of the situation Day Dreaming

anyway.. while reading my mind was begging tht they shouldn't come to their senses soon and let them continue and enjoy eternity... why can't they do it???? neither of them compelling, its their wish too.. so no sin... hahaha...
 
Thanks Dhans... this is forya...Hug



  Thanks dear Big smile  

   yes, its their wish ...but pratigya would be hysterical n shattered after that ... she is already terrified at what happened now Embarrassed   

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
amazing Tongue you write such an fantastic description , love it 
Too good, love this os, they came so close.. but restricted themselves Embarrassed
Look forward to next partWink

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
awesome lovely romantic update dhanya Embarrassed now hoping more romantic flick on a way Embarrassed update soon dhanya

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushi96

amazing Tongue you write such an fantastic description , love it 
Too good, love this os, they came so close.. but restricted themselves Embarrassed
Look forward to next partWink
 
   Thanks dear Big smile  soon
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Part 2

                                                'what?! U good for nothing idiot! Who told u to do such stupidity?...' yelled gayatri into the phone... she was in her room , preparing to sleep , when angad had called her to ask whether she heard any news from Mumbai... she had told him about the failed murder attempt on krishna n angad has cursed revealing to his mother that it was his plan... gayartri was angry n frightened ... 'I want him dead ma!' angad shouted into the phone, cross... 'I know, beta...I know... but we need to be careful...! what if he finds out?...u know very well that i won't be able to save u if he gets any proof against u!...' hissed gayatri ... 'but ma..' began angad , but gayatri talked over him ..'no! let him come back from Mumbai... we will have to device a fool proof plan... r u sure that man Shankar don't know u called n alerted him of krishna's arrival?'... asked gayatri , tensed ... 'what?' gasped angad , fear gripping him...'is Shankar alive?' he asked, panicky... gayatri gritted her teeth ...'yes! I don't know but krishna didn't kill him... oh son! Don't u try any more stupid things...here I am taking all sorts of risk n careful steps to ensure that we become the rightful owners of this whole property n business n there u r, spoiling everything!... i repeat, angad! Not a toe out of line...!' she threw her mobile to the floor in frustration...

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                                                  Skathi was pacing his room, angry, just back from the jamuni bai's place ... he lost the girl to him! Again!...always!... no! he won't let that worm enjoy her night n day!... his men had brought him news that krishna is now in Mumbai, for some new gold deal n some party thrown by politicians n  their business dealers ...n that he had taken pratigya with him!... ofcourse ! he can't keep his hands off her!... jealousy n anger attacked him even more as he remembered the way krishna had mocked him while dancing with her in the sangeet... no! he won't let him win this time!... to hell with all the stupid plans of his father n that idiot minister!... he won't let that worm enjoy that girl for one more sec... !wasn't she supposed to come to his bed! Fumed sakthi... he took out his phone dialling one of his best man, victor ...'I want u to find out more about this party tmw...  once u gets all the details, I will tell u what to do...' he hissed into the phone, his eyes glinting in malice ...

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                                                 Pratigya sat precariously over the bed, pulling the sheets more tightly against her, rubbing her ankle to soothe the pain... she was feeling really uncomfortable... she adjusted the AC time n again, but cannot ease the feeling of being naked , that too when she was aware of the fact that he was just a door away from her... what if he decides to come to her? She thought frantically ... fear n apprehension prevented her from falling asleep n also the dread about him visiting her in her dream again... she was sweating profusely even when the room temperature was normal n her hands were paining clutching the sheet over her with all her might, her eyes trained on the door, her ears alert of any sound... what would he be thinking now? She thought , fidgeting with one end of the sheet... the uncomfortable feeling was increasing n she looked at krishna's shirt lying inside the still open cupboard in loneliness... she remembered clutching at his collar n pulling at his shirt along his left shoulder inside the lift n blushed automatically ... oddly she found that looking at his shirt eased her uncomfortable feeling... she stood up n walked towards the cupboard , the fingers of her right hand slowly caressing over the shirt... the material was smooth n before she knew it she had taken it out , slowly gliding her fingers along the collar , her mind full of the incident inside the lift... she hugged the shirt to herself, caressing her right, injured cheek with one of its hands, remembering the way his fingers caressed her cheek, easing her pain...she snuggled her face more into his hand , relishing the feeling , a stupid smile over her lips... she was feeling completely relaxed , the fear n tension leaving her ...

                                               she looked up to see her reflection in the mirror n blushed shyly ... she noticed that the sheet covering her body was now completely soaked n clung to her body, maintaining the uncomfortable feeling ... she felt the touch of his shirt over her cheek was far better than the feel of the sheets over her... she looked back at the reflection , a shy smile on her lips as she hugged the shirt more to herself, her body blossoming into goosebumps as she felt his hands around her again... it felt too good...she raised the material to her nose n inhaled deeply, identifying his scent even through the general smell of the cloth n wardrobe...she shivered at the feel of his scent again , images of him pushing into her n trailing kisses down her neck assaulting her... she closed her eyes, a small sigh leaving her lips as she unconsciously rubbed the hand of the shirt down her neck... all the sensations were too much n she need to feel him more, all over her... she looked up at her reflection again n shyly unclenched her left hand from the sheets draped over her... she looked away in coyness as the sheet fell n fumbled with the shirt , putting it on with trembling hands, not once glancing at the mirror , until she finished buttoning  all the way down to the half of her thighs, blushing furiously , relishing the feel of the material over her...of him!...she could feel her body humming in shyness... she looked up , hugging herself n stepping out of the sheet now pooled under her feet ... her eyes twitched in coyness as she saw the image of her , clad in nothing but his shirt... she bit her lips, her breath coming as gasps as she saw that the material didn't reach her knees , but just half of her thighs... she has never seen herself in such length dresses , even girlish ...n as she had rightly thought the material , the feel of him , eased the uncomfortable feeling which she was feeling secs ago...she looked curiously at her hands , which were completely covered by his large hands... she giggled girlishly as she raised her hands n pulled the hands of the shirt upto her elbow level , laughing slightly at her image...

                                                                 Krishna changed into casuals again, running a comb through his hair , his face screwed up against the images now attacking his mind... n the sensations ... no! ... don't think about her!... he threw the comb away in frustration... suddenly he remembered the album... oh! Where did he keep it? Before he knew it , he was looking around for it ... he barged out of his room into the hall again, his eyes frantically looking all around the hall...he remembered bringing it with him to the room...where was it? He walked towards the entrance , his eyes darting along the ornamental stand near the door...there it is! He felt an odd happiness brimming him as he took the album , a slight smile on his lips, n turned ... the stretch of wall near the entrance caught his attention as his brain supplied him erotic images of her writhing in his arms against the wall , as he was licking down her neck ...suddenly he was feeling hot all over , as he unconsciously licked his lips... damn! He won't be able to look at that space from now on without thinking about her! , he thought kicking in frustration at the couch... his eyes fell on the dinner tray n he was suddenly feeling really hungry... he kept the album on his lap as he sat down pulling the tray towards him over the tea table... he was about to open the cover when the strangest thought came to his mind... has she eaten anything?... no! why r u bothered if that...she has eaten or not? Why do u care?...I don't know!... suddenly his appetite seem to have lost, gone forever!... he looked up towards the closed door of her room in frustration n anger... he don't care! ... he just don't care! He told himself as he made to open the cover again , but found that his hand stopped midway... he almost roared in anger as he stood up n walked towards her room, his fists clenching ... ... no! KST! What r u doing? Since when did u think of others , especially things like...no! ...she is not just a thing! She is ...her! ...I don't know! He screamed at her mind as he felt his hands knock at the door, n his mouth call her name...'pratigya?'...

                                                  Pratigya jumped as if she had received an electric shock, the light laughter dying in her lips, her head whipping around to look at the door , fear n shock gripping her...she hugged herself , his shirt  more on to her unconsciously n backed away towards the mirror in consternation ...it was only then she saw the sheets lying under her feet on the floor... if the sheets r on the floor, then ...then...what was she wearing? She looked down over her body, horrified ... her horror turned into terror as she found herself in his shirt...  when did she put this thing on? Oh god! What's happening to her?... she snapped her head up to look up at the door again as krishna called her again, impatient ...'what...what do u want?' pratigya stuttered , cursing herself for asking such a stupid question... krishna groaned as he stared at the door...wrong question ! he wants her!! ...no! ignore her!!!... he took a deep breath ... ask it! Just ask it... ! how to phrase such a question, he wondered ... he cleared his throat... ..'did u...i mean, did u eat anything?' he stuttered ... why the hell u r stuttering , KST? ... pratigya stared at the door in complete surprise ...'er...no!..' she croaked , her voice high pitched due to tension... 'I mean yes!...i ..I ate at malini's house !...' she stammered , her voice still high pitched ... 'right!' krishna gritted his teeth... there! I told u not to ask! Mocked his mind... why r u adamant on making urself a fool! He walked back to the couch n flopped down on it, pulling the tray to him ... he found that he felt a lot lighter after knowing that she had eaten...why though?... he shook his head so as to get rid of an irksome fly as he started eating ,his mind on the happenings some moments ago...

                                                   Pratigya stared at the door a bit more , her ears straining to decipher any sound coming from the other side of it... she was feeling a strange happiness ...he asked her whether she had eaten ... ! he ...no! what r u thinking? Why r u feeling happy that he asked u ? No!...she closed her eyes , hugging herself more only to snap open her eyes again n turn to stare at her reflection ... she looked oddly beautiful , she thought , her fingers caressing along her upper arms over his shirt...no!...what r u thinking? Take it off...now!...she retrieved the sheet from the floor n stared unbuttoning the shirt from her neck , disgusted at herself at the kind of thoughts she was having n the kind of things she was doing...but...but...she found her hands stopping midway... why do u want to remove it...? it feels so good... she found her lips curving in a shy smile ...what r u thinking pratigya? its his shirt!! ... I don't know, it feels good, her insane part said stubbornly... but u r practically nude below ur thighs ! snapped her sane part... she wound the sheet around her waist , covering herself properly ...she sagged to the bed , afraid to sleep , caressing her ankle...the pain seemed to ebb away a bit... fear returned as she contemplated on what to wear the next day... u must ask him! ... u can't go around naked or in ..in his shirt infront of him! ...u must ask him... ! ok! She took a deep breath, steadying her suddenly ragged breathing ...she stood up n walked towards the door, amassing all her courage... omg! What would she tell him...? that she has forgotten to pack her things ...no! she can't do that...! what will he think of her? ...she caressed the door pane , tensed...really pratigya? u r such a fool?  what would he think when he knows that she is sitting nude inside the room...no! she will never do that!... as if he wants more reason to ...no! he will be attacking u with a new vigour! ... but...but ...he stopped!...she inhaled as the thought occured to her...

                                             why did he stop? ...she mind felt heavy as the question exploded in her mind...if he only wanted ur body, if he wanted to use u for his pleasure , why did he stop?... Surely , her injured ankle is nothing to him! ...n his eyes n voice when he was asking her whether she was feeling pain? ... they looked so...caring...NO! u fool! Snapped her sane part ... he hit u remember! He injured u, hurt u to unthinkable proportions n u r thinking of such a simple injury to ur ankle! So what if he stopped!... maybe...maybe...he don't want the night ruined by u crying or... or... but why would he care? Countered her insane part... why would he care if she is injured ! or crying? What difference it makes to him? ...u r just a body to him, rn't u? she heard herself asking in confusion ... i don't know! Screamed her sane part...just don't think about him! He is dangerous to u!...that's it... ! ...but her insane part frowned in confusion ...

                                                        Meanwhile krishna had walked towards the door also, his fingers trailing over the door pane... he had tried to get rid of her images in his arms  all the while he was eating but just couldn't... his mind kept replaying the bit where he had managed to get his mouth down to the start of her cleavage , desire burning him... he wanted to see the rest , feel the rest , taste ...all of her! ... he almost pounded on the  door when her painful cry reverberated inside his mind when she had hit her ankle ...he stopped ... his mind exploded ! he stopped again !!! why did he stop then? Why did he stop now? Why the hell did he stop ravishing her when he heard her cry in pain? What's her ankle has to do with fulfilling his burning need for her? ...his mind reeled back to the occasions when he had stopped in the middle of taking her as his whenever he saw her face pained, whenever she was injured , tired  ...why, KST? What's wrong with u?  just use n throw her away! Why r u bothered about whether she is crying or laughing? ... whether she is injured or not? What's happening to u? ...I don't know...! ...wait! why would u want her again n again after discarding her as a mere maid? U r loosing ur mind, KST! ... he screamed in his mind, barely stopping himself from pulling out his hair...how is her ankle? No! U don't want to know!!!...he turned away from the door n walked to his room angry at himself, his one hand still clutching the album... at the same time, pratigya had turned away from the door too, her steps heavy as her mind swirled in confusion, unconsciously pulling his shirt more n more to her ...

           Hope u like it Embarrassed
 
 


Edited by dhakarn - 28 October 2013 at 3:03am

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Good update dhanya.

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Wonderful updateClap
Hope Shakti doesn't do anything wrong with PAngry

Love how there hearts are so connected hope one of them realizes soon that they are in love.Day Dreaming


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