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Aks13

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Posted: 09 December 2013 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
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pls update De do kuch nahi to teaser hi De do

Nooo !!!
plz don't say that
Fir ye teasure queen sach much teasure degi aur update k liye wait karwegi Ouch

Kuch na sey kuch milna tou achcha hai meri sherni... Wink LOL

Koi insaan ko gold aur diamond k andar kisi ek ko pick karne k liye bole to wo kya pic karegi ????? Tongue

Yaar pehley gold tou ley tabhi tou usmey diamond jadvayegiii... Wink LOL
Swetu key new work tumhe dekh kar par ja meine abhi vaha comment kiya hai...tell me u r with me or not on that... Wink LOL

Meine uski update ki comment me already mention ki hai
I also replied ur comment too already Wink

Yep I knw n already gv my reply... Tongue

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Riya.S.007

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Posted: 10 December 2013 at 3:48am | IP Logged
I sm following this from the prologue. I hate violence against woman but still I liked this.

Which irked me most was arjun's "whose baby u carry?" What the f**k u meant arjun? Are u impotent that u can't produce baby? U are raping her from past months still think she having sex with sameer? Bloody bas***d. I understand his pain but that part is too much. And now he will abort this baby. He is totally turning negative.He can't love her. Its plain inhuman. Wish I could kick his ass. Asshole!

U are awesome writer. Please show Riya standing against him.

hunny1993

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Posted: 10 December 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Update soon

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Posted: 10 December 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
awesome upt
cont soon

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Posted: 10 December 2013 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Plzzz upadte soon

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Posted: 10 December 2013 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
Amazing part di! Aww arjuns outpour was so emotional brought a tear to my eye! 
Omg he doesnt want baby...what shayad baby is causing too much harm to riya..
Please continue soon xx

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Posted: 12 December 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Awsuuumm Piyu! Read all parts in one go! Really liking the evil Arjun! Sorry fr late nd short cmnts!! really bussyy!! Thanxx fr pm...Continuee Soonz!!

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Posted: 12 December 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged

TEASER PART 12


Hellow Diii H r u..?? I miss u so much..
Di:-ohh my chhute is missing me...
.
To ab time mil gaya tumhen apne frs se..
Arjun:-Dii how could i forget u...Aap kaho to abhi aa jata hoon apke pass..
.
Di:-Noo arjun i m just kidding ,i know my bhai loves me loat ..any way new year wish nahi karoge..
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Arjun:-esliye to phon kiya hai..Happy new year dii,Bus ek baar final exam finish ho jaayen ,phir main hamesha aspke pass rahunga..
they talk loat of thinks,
.
After taking with her di arjun passing the corridor of the hotal room...
Sudenly he heared one girl scream...
.
Which is coming inside from one room..
Arjun ignored n again start walking..
.
Again he heared her s screaming...
She screaming n begging for leave..
.
Without any further delay..
Arjun walked near the door..n start knocking..
Arjun:-open the door,who was inside..
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one boy yelled..Stay away baster...We r enjoying here..Dont distrubed us..
Arjun sense somthink wrong..
.
He still heared her scream..
He kicked the door..N rushed inside..
his eyes widend in shock..
Sees the veiw in front of his eyes..
.
One girl is strugling on a bed..Few boy stood around the bed n one boy try to force himself on her...
.
Help me..She crying for help...
Arjun yelled angery :-leave her right now..
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other wise its not good for ur life...
He pulled the boy away from her..N give one hard punch on his face...

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PS:-NEXT PART IN BLOG...Or may be the same thread ups ...





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