Ariya Dark FF:My Bleeding Heart*T2#link pg139 - Page 80

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Posted: 10 years ago
I sm following this from the prologue. I hate violence against woman but still I liked this.

Which irked me most was arjun's "whose baby u carry?" What the f**k u meant arjun? Are u impotent that u can't produce baby? U are raping her from past months still think she having sex with sameer? Bloody bas***d. I understand his pain but that part is too much. And now he will abort this baby. He is totally turning negative.He can't love her. Its plain inhuman. Wish I could kick his ass. Asshole!

U are awesome writer. Please show Riya standing against him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome upt
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part di! Aww arjuns outpour was so emotional brought a tear to my eye! 
Omg he doesnt want baby...what shayad baby is causing too much harm to riya..
Please continue soon xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsuuumm Piyu! Read all parts in one go! Really liking the evil Arjun! Sorry fr late nd short cmnts!! really bussyy!! Thanxx fr pm...Continuee Soonz!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

TEASER PART 12


Hellow Diii H r u..?? I miss u so much..
Di:-ohh my chhute is missing me...
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To ab time mil gaya tumhen apne frs se..
Arjun:-Dii how could i forget u...Aap kaho to abhi aa jata hoon apke pass..
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Di:-Noo arjun i m just kidding ,i know my bhai loves me loat ..any way new year wish nahi karoge..
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Arjun:-esliye to phon kiya hai..Happy new year dii,Bus ek baar final exam finish ho jaayen ,phir main hamesha aspke pass rahunga..
they talk loat of thinks,
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After taking with her di arjun passing the corridor of the hotal room...
Sudenly he heared one girl scream...
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Which is coming inside from one room..
Arjun ignored n again start walking..
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Again he heared her s screaming...
She screaming n begging for leave..
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Without any further delay..
Arjun walked near the door..n start knocking..
Arjun:-open the door,who was inside..
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one boy yelled..Stay away baster...We r enjoying here..Dont distrubed us..
Arjun sense somthink wrong..
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He still heared her scream..
He kicked the door..N rushed inside..
his eyes widend in shock..
Sees the veiw in front of his eyes..
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One girl is strugling on a bed..Few boy stood around the bed n one boy try to force himself on her...
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Help me..She crying for help...
Arjun yelled angery :-leave her right now..
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other wise its not good for ur life...
He pulled the boy away from her..N give one hard punch on his face...

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PS:-NEXT PART IN BLOG...Or may be the same thread ups ...





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Posted: 10 years ago
Lvly teaser so finaly dii u giv us flash but
who is that girl????
cant waittt dii update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome...teaser diii...
Finally thoda fb mile ga...
Yayyy...excited 4 fb...
Continue soon...
Loved d love between arjun nd his dii...
Aww arjun saved that girl...
Nice...
Bt use laga k vo log galat kar rahe he to use bhi riya k sath ESA nai karna chahiye...
Bt eagerly waiting 4 more fb...
Continue soon...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome teaser dr...!!!!
So my FB queen is back...😛
Continue soon...!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Whr r u hunny bunny...????? Missing ur dhamkis yaar...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting teaser..
I think the girl is riya..
Looking forward for another flashback..
Continue soon..