RiMa OS- MY HEART WILL GO ON... - Page 2

Hey kaviya, welcome to the world of writing, am happy for you.. It was you first os and it may seem simple but writing an os this much clear is very tedious for beggines, i bet no one would gave any doubt reg any happenings in the story, it was as clear as crystal..     And about the story loved the dream where you have beautifully portrayed it.. Loved all parts, our little maya was also so understanding it seems.. But the best was the dream for me

  ovely os kavya ,👍🏼very emotional ,rula dhiya 😭,but tumne meri rk maardhiya , murderer😆 ,like rishbaa moments ,nice writing dear ,keep writing.

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Nice OSEdited by cool_sri - 10 years ago

It's beautiful..I was expecting RK from the beginning never realised that he is no more until I reached the flashback.. It was lil sad but very nice. Great for first attempt !! 

THANKS TO ALL THOSE WHO APPRECIATED MY OS...

I'M GETTING LATE SO I'LL REPLY TO ALL THE COMMENTS INDIVIDUALLY LATER...

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN...

Originally posted by: meenji22

very nice os

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Lovely OS

very touching OS 😭 I like it

Originally posted by: rima4ever

ita a very good touching heart wrenching os

but sad as rk has died i feel so bad