sHALEEN ss : Teri Meri Love Story UPDATE PA 9PG 17 NOV 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm.. after lot of thinking i start this..
 
 
Thx to my Buddies PInkerbell & Piya... they finally nail to Caffin.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
 
 
 
PART 1
 
 
He just look at Him , & comes to Corrider & update his Tweet..
 
 
 
" Great Feeling... OMG he is tooo CUTE.. Muhha to him... "
 
within a minutes  he receivce lot of tweets..
 
 
"Who? "
 
" whom are u talking abt Shaa?"
 
" Plz tel us na?"
 
 
" Plz we are waiting 4 ur ans?"
 
 
"Hey ans us plz..."
 
 
He smile at that & open his  Camera & see just cliking pics of him .. he is so tiny , so cute... She give him best gift ever on this Diwali... 
 
 
 
After half hour he check his Tweet A/C..
 
 
 
"Hey Congratulations New Daddy... Eager to see Him" His one of frnd tweet him..
 
 
 
" I want to see Him , plz... can i come ?" His one of the long last Feamale frnd ask him
 
 
" Sure u can come to meet  him..." He replays his Female frnd
 
 
" Thx Bandar, realy Great Diwali Gift..." Shaleen ans his frnd..
 
 
 
Within a minutes he receives lods of msgs..
 
 
" What daddy??? but ur not married na?"
 
 
" How can it possible??" ๐Ÿ˜ญ
 
" U brock my Heart...๐Ÿ˜ญ when u r married?"
 
 
" Who is that Lucky girl??"
 
 
" Plzzz tel us otherwise w are faint here..."
 
 
" Congrats New Daddy in Town... plz post baby's pic..."
 
 
" Heartious Congrats.. hows Baby.. it Son r Daughter??"
 
 
 
" Thx all , but can't post his pic , he is too small for that , let him  enjy the wrld with his Parents ๐Ÿ˜Š " Shaleen replies & comes in room..
 
 
She just open her eyes & look at him..
 
Shaleen comes near her & seat beside a Chair..
 
 
He just hold her hand & kiss her palm
 
"feeling better now ???" he slowly ask her
 
 
She just nods
 
 
"Gosh im damn worried abt you , jab vo Shanta Bai ne bola tha ki tumhe pain ho raha hai , mai to soya bhi nahi just shoot se aaya & aagya aapke paas.." he said in one breath..
 
 
She smaile & forwards her hand , he bent down but she tell him "  come closer na  " 
 
 
He  fully bent down to her.. now his head rest on her shoulder.. she just careesing his hair..
 
 
She kiss on his ear.. " Ghar jaao & aaram..."
 
 
She can;t complete her sentence bcoz Shaleen immeadtly get up
 
 
" Manali are u mad? yaha koi nhi hai tumhare paas , mai kaise? and ha Mom& Dad sham tak aa jaayenge... aur ha mujhe koi Nurse vagara.. u know na i dn't like it.. mai hue na.. vaise bhi i have Hoilday Tomorrow.." He just starts yelling on her..
 
 
" U know what thst why I Luv U.." she says with tierd  smile.. He immeadtly seat next to her & caressing her hair softly..
 
 
" Tumhe hamesha kaise pata chalta hai shal, that i need u?" she ask him..
 
 
"Shush..." he  says & withing a minutes she agian drifted to sleep..
 
 
 
IF U LIKE THGEN PLZ COMMENT OTHERWISE  STORY CONTINUE NHI HOGI..
 
 
 
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 9 years ago

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DivineDarkness thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ah ha Mannu...ahem ahem
Nice start... continue soon
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Wow yr mannu !!!!

bilkul different angle se likhkha hai

Bravo !!! bravo !!!

plz go ahead & update soon
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mind blowing update..
title superb hai.. piya's suggestion of title supern..


waiting for more..
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Unres-
mujhe nahi pata tha..
manu ko dhamki deni bhi aati hai...
janab kiska asar hai kahin mera to nahi๐Ÿคฃ
waooo grate start..
shaa finaly father ban gaya vo bhi babu boy,
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Ohye hoye romance n care loved ittt
poor female fan dill toot gaya sabka...lolll(me to)
Update soon wanna to read more...

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 10 years ago
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Aage ka kahan h...awesome update.
continue soon..
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Originally posted by: pihu_angad

Aage ka kahan h...awesome update.
continue soon..


The same here manu baki ka kahan hain..
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Posted: 10 years ago
De u r fab no doubt in tht 
Awesome ,mind blowing  starting 

Update soon

Thanx 4 pm me
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nice start
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wow manali ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...
 
great starting๐Ÿ˜‰...u n sha๐Ÿ˜‰...not bad !
 
sha hs got a baby๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
 
continue soon