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Hilarious update..
Neha ne jhuth ke pahad khade kar diye.. LOL
Dono ko pati patni hi bana diya.. Shocked ab kaise rahenge dur jab room share karna padega.. ROFL
Full of Gussa, fights, egos but atlast they agreed for their frnds..
Sudhir ji CBI officer...Shipra ji ki excitement nd memory problem, Neha ke plans..kya mast family hai... LOL LOL
Loved it to the core..
Dekhte hai aage aage kya hota hai..
Cont soon..

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Posted: 30 October 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
vry nice preview. updt soon dear

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Posted: 30 October 2013 at 11:48pm | IP Logged

Part Three

Ram and Priya stayed whole day in room only, they didn't went out of the room fearing from new set of unknown questions of Shipra n Sudhir.  Shipra did asked them to come out but they refused saying that they are tired and want to rest. Both were busy with their works. Neha knocks the door and gets in the room.

Priya: Neha tum, come sit

Neha sits beside Priya on bed while Ram was sitting on a chair.

Neha holding her ears: sorry guys, maine bahot badi gadbad kardi

Priya: it's ok Neha... I am sorry too, rudely behave karne ke liye

Neha: tumhara gussa jayaz tha toh sorry mat bolo aur thanks itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi help karne ke liye

Priya: Vikram is my only friend toh uske liye kuch bhi

Neha extends her hands: friends

Priya shakes hand with Neha: yes, friends forever

Ram: nayi dost mili toh mujhe bhul gayi

Neha: tujhe koi bhul sakta hai kya

Ram: bhulna bhi mat

Neha: dinner karne chale?

Priya: sorry yaar, agar tumhare ma papa ne koi sawal kiya toh mai jawab nahi de paongi

Neha: toh kya hamesha room mai rahogi?

Priya: sirf aaj raat, kuch waqt chahiye mujhe, kal ka breakfast sabke saath karungi

Neha: ok...fatty tu?

Ram: mera bhi wahi jawab hai jo Priya ne kaha

Neha teasingly: tum dono pehli bar kisi baat pe agree kar rahe ho

Priya: pehli nahi dusri

Neha: pehli bar meri pitayi ke liye agree huye the, right?

Ram: sorry yaar, gusse mai tujhe hurt kardiya

Neha: common fatty...agar tum dono ko kuch chahiye toh mujhe batana pls, gud ni8

Ram n Priya too bids her good night and continues their work. Neha sent dinner in the room itself. After winding up their work, they decided to sleep but a big question: how they'll sleep on same bed?

Priya: i'll sleep on bed, aap kahin bhi sojayie

Ram: kahin bhi matlab?

Priya: matlab farsh pe ya couch pe

Ram controls his anger as it'll not serve him anything. He calmly questions Priya, "tumhe lagta hai mai couch pe so paonga? Agar mai couch par comfortable hota toh mai khud wahi so jata"

Priya thinks for some time and finds his reason to be genuine, so she agrees.

Priya: theek hai aap bed pe sojayie, mai couch pe sojati hoon

Ram: thanks

Priya settled down on couch and starts reading the book.

Ram: Priya light off karo

Priya: kyun?

Ram: kyunki mujhe sona hai

Priya: toh soyie na kisne rokna hai

Ram: mai roshni mai nahi so sakta toh tum light off karo

Priya: mujhe book padhna hai, mai light off nahi karungi

Ram: raat ko book kaun padta hai?

Priya: mai padti hoon...Aur book padhe bagair mai nahi sone wali

Ram: tum light off kar rahi ho ya mai karu

Priya: koi light of nahi karega, adjust n compromise

Ram: mai compromise nahi karunga

Priya: ek deal karte hai hum

Ram confusedly: kaisi deal?

Priya: agar aapko bed par sona hai toh aap light off nahi kar sakte, agar light off ki toh bed par nahi so sakte

Ram: yeh kaisi deal hai? Mujhe nahi chahiye koi deal, light off karo

Priya: mai aapke liye bed sacrifice karu aur aap mere liye light on nahi rakhsakte...How mean you are?

Ram to himself, "kis manhos ghadi mai maine Neha ki help ke liye haan ki"

Ram: theek hai, light off nahi karunga

Priya gives winning smile: thank you...Good night

Ram irritatedly: good night

Ram covers himself fully with duvet and dozzed off. Priya, who was engrossed in her book,hears some noises. She looks in  her surrounding to find the source of noise but couldn't find one and then her eyes fells on Ram and yes it was the sound of his snores.

Priya to herself, "hey bhagwan, ab yeh bhi jhelna hoga mujhe? Pata nahi Vikram tumhare chakkar mai aagey aur kya kya jhelna hoga"

Priya puts cotton balls in her ears and sleeps on couch.

Next morning, Priya joins Sharmas for breakfast. Neha was late riser so she was missing. Ram  was in room, after bathing he was cleaning  the mess created by Priya and grumbling too.

There, on dining table, Priya was again interrogated by Shipra and Sudhir.

Sudhir: basically kahan se ho tum?

Priya:mai lucknow se hoon

Sudhir: aur Ram?

Priya was confused now k what she should answer as she herself don't know.

Shipra: aap bhi kya ajeeb sawal puch rahe hai

Sudhir: mai toh bas yunhi

Priya thinks, 'koi toh maturely behave kar rahe hai'

Shipra:  beta tum dono pehli bar kaha mile the

Priya slams her head n then replies, "ji hum pehli bar mere ghar par mile the"

Shipra: wow! Tumhe pehli nazar mai hi pyar huya tha?

Priya was losing her patience and praying to  god to rescue her n God sent Ram as her help.

Ram; good morning everyone, kya baatein horahi hai?

Priya: hamare baare mai baatein horahi hai

Ram confusedly: hamare baare mai kya baatein kar rahe?

Priya: hamari shaadi ka discussion chal raha hai

Shipra: mai Priya se puch rahi thi k love marriage hai ya arrange marriage

Ram n Priya at the same time,

Ram: Love marriage

Priya: Arrange marriage

Sudhir n Shipra looks at them suspiciously.

Ram explains immediately: actually arrange hi hai, engagement ke baad hame pyar hogaya toh huyi na love marriage

Shipra: toh aisi baat hai

Sudhir: par beta news mai toh kabhi Priya ko nahi dikhaya aur na tumhari shaadi ke baare mai bhi bataya

Ram smiles sternly: good question

he was thinking what to reply.

Priya: actually uncle i am very private person isiliye media ko yeh news nahi mili aur isiliye shaadi bhi kafi simple tareeke se huyi

Ram was impressed with her intelligence.

Priya added: dadi ke theek hone k baad hum reception mai announce karenge hamari shaadi ko

Shipra: reception kab hoga?

Neha who joined them replies, "kal hai"

Ram n Priya were relieved now since Neha will handle everything.

Neha: kya ma kitne sawal puchogi inse

Shipra: mai toh bas inki love story puch rahi thi

Neha: mai bata dungi aapko baad mai

Ram: mujhe ek important file check karni hai toh mai chalta hoon

Priya too uses this opportunity to escape from the scene.

Priya: wo file mere paas hai, mai deti hoon aapko...Excuse us aunty

In the room:

Priya: yeh humse agar roz aise sawal puchenge toh hum pagal hojayenge

Ram: pata nahi aagey kya kya hoga

Again they confines themselves in their room n get busy in their respective works. After sometime, Ram starts moving out of the room with his car keys.

Priya: kahin ja rahe hai aap?

Ram: kuch der ke liye office ja raha hoon

Priya: mai bhi is natak se thoda break chahti hoon...Akeli jaongi toh uncle-aunty sawal karenge,so can you please drop me at nearby park?

Priya was lookinp at him with hopes, Ram thinks for sometime, "ok, chalo"

Neha enters the room asking, "kahan jaane ki baat horahi hai"

Ram: is pagal khane se kuch waqt ke liye dur jarahe hai hum

Neha laughs: ab tension ki baat nahi, maine ma ko tumhari love story suna di hai

Priya: hame bhi bata do taki future mai koi gadbad na ho

Neha: story ye hai, tumhe Ram ki dadi ne mandir mai dekha, unhe tum pasand aagayi,then tumhari engagement huyi phir tum dono ko ek dusre se pyar huya and dadi ki health ki wajah se jaldbazi mai shaadi huyi aur tumhara reception dadi America se wapas aane par hoga

Ram: saans toh le Neha

Neha takes a deep breathe: ma na kabhi kabhi bahot excited hojati hai, sorry for the troubles

Priya smiles: it's absolutely fine Neha

Neha teasingly: kya mai tum dono ke beech haddi bansakti hoon?

Ram: saaf saaf bol na

Neha: tum dono ke saath chal sakti hoon

Priya: Nehaaa...Tum bhi na

Neha laughs: sorry...Chale

Three of them were passing by hall,Shipra stops them.

Priya murmurs: not again

Shipra: kahan  ja rahe ho tumlog

Ram: Priya...Priya ne Mumbai nahi dekha na toh usey Mumbai dikhane ja raha hoon

Shipra: arey wah, ye toh bahot acchi baat hai...Neha tu kahan ja rahi hai?

Neha: in logo ke saath jarahi hoon

Shipra: tu nahi ja sakti

Neha:  kyun?

Shipra: kyunki Ashwin tujhse milne aa raha hai

Neha irritatedly: kaun Ashwin?

Shipra: tera hone wala pati

Neha: oh, Ashwin aa raha hai

Priya whispers:  Neha tumhe apne fiance ka naam bhi nahi pata?

Neha whispers: oho mai konsa us se shaadi karnewali hoon, mujhe kya karna hai use jaankar...Tum dono jao abhi

Ram n Priya bids bye and leaves from there.

Ashwin Gupta is fiance of Neha to whom she met hardly twice or thrice. He was choosed by Neha's father as he was all goodie good person. He runs a small business of clothes in pune and well settled their itself.

Neha: ma kab aaraha hai Ashwin

Shipra: wo nahi aaraha hai

Neha angrily: mujhe jaane kyu nahi diya

Shipra: taki woh dono akele kuch waqt bitaye, nayi nayi shaadi huyi hai unki, saath ghumne de unhe

Neha goes back to her room grumbling on her mother.

Vikram call's Neha on her phone to enquire about RaYa.

Vikram: Neha Ram aur Priya toh theek hai na?

Neha angrily: mai kya unki jasoos hoon,jo mujhe pata hoga?

Vikram: aise kyun baat kar rahi hoon? Tum upset ho kya?

Neha: haan, pata hai mai Ram aur Priya ke saath bahar ja rahi thi aur ma ne mujhe jaane nhi diya

Vikram: kyun?

Neha: kyunki wo chahti hai k mai undono ke beech mai haddi na bano, unki shaadi huyi hai toh unhe saath mai tym spent karna chahiye

Vikram laughs: accha hua tum nhi gayi

Neha: ab tum bhi

Vikram: Neha , Ram office aaraha hai aur rahi baat Priya ki I am sure wo kisi park ya orphanage jayegi aur tum dono jagah bore hojati

Neha: phir toh accha hua main hi gayi

Vikram: accha mai rakhta hoon..bye

Neha: bye

So neha n Vikram  soch rahe hai k dono alag alag raste jayenge, so what do you people think, woh pura din saath spent karenge ya as decided apni apni manzil par jayenge.

I have thought of some titles, please help me with it

1.Ajab prem kigazab kahani

2.Ram milaye Jodi

If u guys can suggest some other titles please do suggest.

 



Edited by peeyara - 31 October 2013 at 12:52am

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 12:43am | IP Logged
yaar masthi baare updt hai
i enjoyed it
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Thank u Nazeem for the superb update.
Ajab prem ki gazab kahani sounds better.continue soon yaar.

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Very interesting story...lyked it very much...i think the first title is better...continue soon...thnx

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vry nice updt..n i think ram milaye jodi accha hoga.n thanks for pm

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