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_celestial_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged

Hello frnds Tongue

I'm new 2 this forum. It's my 1st attempt in writing a poem. I have written this poem when I was in 9th.LOL

This is a poem about our mother Earth. I wrote about the way we behave 2 Earth n how Earth cares us. I don't know if this is a nice poem. U have 2 judge it. So pls read this, hit like if u like it n comment ur views.

Still She Receives No Good! Cry

It's the first cry of a new born child

that rises our mother Earth with joy.

Like, the feelings of a loving mother,

she enjoys and greets the beloved with

her twinkling smile, everlasting...


 She presents him with everything

he wishes for; holds him tight

with her affectionate hands and

battle upon foe, thus leads him along success.

She plays with him like a pal,

showers handful of beauty,

thus, reinforces the bond among them;

like a perfect mother, cares and loves him,

adds up a lot of creations to entertain;

still she receives no good...               


When little needs grew up,

it becomes piles of greed,

all imploring to our mother Earth.

Now grown up to a gentleman,

in need of a patch of land to sustain life,

looks upon her with a lifting hand.

The eternal smile shone at him

still she receives no good...

Ecstasy emerges when

he could succeed his dreams

and present them before the nation.

Earth knew that a handful of joy

meant a massive grief

But, controls and joins in his cheerfulness.                                                                               

When needs became greed

gradually, one upon other,

heaps of greed all over again.

Does she receive anything?

Yes, now she received something

showers of suffering from them.

She received the never ending cruelty,

still with that twinkling smile.

she received and received and received

which she never wishes for.  


Loads of greed and tons of pits

made for each other's everlasting wits.

A few warnings she made,

"Thunder and Lightning all around you,

Awake People Awake"                                                                                     

ailed she with great grief.

No response came from them

Nonetheless the only choice, suffer

she received and received and received

which she never wishes for.                                                                                            

She cried, yelled and begged

all went unidentified by them.

There grew the nature angry

Cannot see her suffering

Showers heaps of disasters on to them

those calamities they suffered

again they look upon her

she helped and cared her infants

Still she receives no good...                     

-          Meghna Sasi

Thanks 4 readingEmbarrassed

Edited by .megs. - 11 October 2013 at 11:27pm

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ArshiAms IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
yeahh m 1st

ohhh wowww amazing re..love it..
keepup ClapThumbs Up

Edited by ArshiAms - 12 October 2013 at 3:05am

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cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Lovely poem:)
Keep writing:D

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Sunny_Bliss IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 27452

Posted: 11 October 2013 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Nicee one megs Smile Thumbs Up

n very much true Ermm Unhappy

n a gud one for a first try  Clap

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Saru... IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10402

Posted: 12 October 2013 at 12:04am | IP Logged
U wrote this?Shocked its awesome..too good
First attempt itna acha hai to ...u will rock as the time goes by..
proud of uThumbs Up

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QuietlyLoud IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5486

Posted: 12 October 2013 at 12:21am | IP Logged
wow impressive stupid meghu Thumbs UpClap
you should write more often!Thumbs Up

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Liarzstayaway IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 12:22am | IP Logged
wohooo awesumClap

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_Maggie_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Awesome Poem Dolly
Aww Mother Earth Embarrassed

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