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ViSa ts FEATHERS OF LOVE- !!LAST PART 3PAGE 7 12/10- completed

coolbakes_Jalad Goldie
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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 9:51am | IP Logged
hi to all those who know me and those who dont i am coolbakes.. a huge arshi fan and now i like ravua and visa as well... i wrote a lot of stories on arshi and guess few of u might know me!!
i wondered why not wrote one on ViSa... but i dont wanna write if not many would like it! i will post the start below and if i get a good response i will post the rest as well!!


Vikrant walked in loosing his tie as he heard the sound of laughter in his usual quiet home hit his ears...

well he was slowly getting used to this .. its been happening ever since she had walked into their lives... but something had always stopped him from being a part of it...

he tip toed quietly to see abhi hugging sarita from behind his arms wound around her neck and laughing hard as she kept cracking jokes and rocking him away!

if a stranger had seen they would not guess she was not abhi's real mother...

He remembered his taunts on her about how she was betraying him and his son.. but was she really?? his heart asked his mind!!

her words came striking down his ears" a wife may hurt but never a mother "... in his anger he had brushed the truth in it but seeing them now somewhere he felt he was missing some puzzle...


 TO BE CONTINUEDDD

IF U GUYS WANT!!! hit the like and drop ur comment!!







Edited by coolbakes - 11 October 2013 at 7:53pm

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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
That's an awesome start.
Continue soon.

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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 10:05am | IP Logged
its Awesome..

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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Nicely done. Keep it comin'.

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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
awesome
conti soon

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super awesome start cont soon

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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
yes do continue..

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it was a lovely start..please do continue Smile

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