New FF:- The Eclipsed Sun UPTD Ch3 on Pg7 (8/11)

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Posted: 10 years ago
Heylo Arjunians

This been a long time since I have been actively participating in the Forum.
Lighting struck, and I opened my Word File to pen down something after a long time.

Yeah, I know about my long forgotten previous works. Most of them will be discontinued. I haven't added an official note to it yet. Soonish I will.

And I m very well aware of my "Updating Kissaas" also.🤪

So keeping my focus on one story only, I will update one update only after the next chapter is ready with me.😛

About this story, all I would like to say is that "Lips sealed"😛

Only thing I would like to say is that...

"Mere ek hi commitment pe vishwas karna, ki mere kissi bhi commitment pe vishwas matt karna"😆

Regards
Mitthu❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
The Eclipsed Sun

Prologue...

 

She glanced at the file one more time.

Every detail, every evidence, every statement had been memorized. Studying the file once more would change none of it.

But yet, it was studied as if this time a missing blooper would flash infront of Her eyes.

Nope!

It didn't.

She slammed the file shut and hugged it. No, not dearly.

Closing her eyes shut, she slumped on the sofa. Revising every detail again.

Again nothing.

She turned her head to glance at the clock. 1 am, it read. It was early for her to sleep. But again tomorrow is not a normal day.

She smirked at her mentor's words, "It's time to get you back in action."

He cared for her.

And it was to keep the respect of his wishes that she gave her nod. Although she never understood the reason behind his faith on her.

The Eclipsed Sun.

He called her that.

She brought the file infront of her eyes.

I m done with you. It's time to move on.

Yes. She admitted finally.

The case is closed.

Shanaya Kulkard is dead.

And nothing can bring back the dead. That very thought pierced her heart. This was something which she really wanted to NOT happen. But no-being or nothing is above the destiny.

Neither is she nor was Shanaya.

She switched off the table lamp, removed her spectacles and resided to bed.

Its going to be a new day tomorrow.

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To be continued...

Do tell me if this should be continued😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm gonna kill you first, you have the habit of starting something and then disappearing😛
You better stick to it and update it😉
Btw interesting start, though who is she? who is Shanaya?
Eclipsed Sun?
hmmm too much of mystery, please continue😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
hmmm yehkya tha? Itnaaa chhotuu sa?? Jaldi post karna =)
waise marne wale ke file kaun read kar raha tha?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Tina2603

I'm gonna kill you first, you have the habit of starting something and then disappearing😛

You better stick to it and update it😉
Btw interesting start, though who is she? who is Shanaya?
Eclipsed Sun?
hmmm too much of mystery, please continue😉


Tun, thats why I have already kept the next part ready.
And all set to write chapter 2 tomorrow😉

Sab kuch abhi bata du kya?😛

Varna aage nahi padhna?

Dheere dheere dekho hota hai kya.😆

Thwanku!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Sakuu

hmmm yehkya tha? Itnaaa chhotuu sa?? Jaldi post karna =)

waise marne wale ke file kaun read kar raha tha?


Yeah Prologue tha.

Chapter 1 will be longer than this atleast.😛😆

Aage aage sab kuch reveal ho jaayega!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...


Tun, thats why I have already kept the next part ready.
And all set to write chapter 2 tomorrow😉

Sab kuch abhi bata du kya?😛

Varna aage nahi padhna?

Dheere dheere dekho hota hai kya.😆

Thwanku!😃

I dont trust you, dheere dheere you can go MIA😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey thanks for the PM hun.😛
I really enjoyed the starting😉...do pm me when you update it.😳