Rishbala OS: Engagement Trilogy 1: Mohabbat Ho Na Jaye - Page 2

Its awesome.. I am just imagining all the scenes from the begining.. God its too good.. I like the ending.. Especially rishab kiss 😆

Mahobat ho gai...hayee...to your os...
loved it...amazing idea uper se usse bhi amazing story writing...muaha...loved it..

a v v v well written os.loved da way u used da lines mohabbat ho na jai.i read da whole  os with so much concentration dat i was lost into it.rt frm madhu introduction till rishabh agreeing for da marriage ,da whole journey was a treat to read.thanx fr pm.

Nice os n u have update the perfect someone also
Curious to read that
Plz pm me one send me the link nt able to find it

nice update. can u plz pm me ur next updates

just one word...WOW!!!👏⭐️

just loved every bit of it. i didn't find ending was rushed out. it was perfect for me.👏
just loved this RK...i mean all the other RKs of other stories are heros with mighty power who can do anything but i like this RK not perfect but with flaws having human emotions of self pity, anger...all very natural in his case...still standing out n different from everybody.
i like that song too...omg! you like that song that much that you made whole new OS for it😆
n plz if you have time than right this engagement triology also.

Wow! This is seriously good stuff hun..
Keep em' coming :)

I loved it! :)

❤️

xxx

That was wonderful...but I won't comment more if you do not write a second part of this OS with a proper love scene between Rishbala...puhleeezzz

Loved the OS, role exchange ? Madhu like RK and RK like Madhu?

WHAT A LOVELY STORY