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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anomaly.

ress

Ahem, Ahem

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ARandKJFan

Aditi! :O
OHMYGOD!
You write? Yes I doROFL
RES!
UNRES!


Again, thanks for blackmailing me Tongue Ah! AnytimeLOL
I love the concept of this OS.
No love, just plain friendship <3 Mere se bas yeh hi expect karna. Love isn't my cup of tea exactly.
First of all, I like this guy. He's kinda similar. I'm an extrovert, yet I love spending time in the library.  Tu sample piece haina isiliyeLOL
The way you've written their story is really nice and also easy to relate too.
And yes, I can lie like her too LOL Voh to even I can do. Whats the big dealROFL
How you've incorporated his relationship with his parents is really good too.
Great stuff <33 thank you. Ask you SB and my beti to unres ROFL


Chalo beti ne toh tareef ki agar Maa nalayak nikli tohROFL
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 8:15am | IP Logged
This is ur 2nd OS I read and again I was so deeply immersed in it.. Its so real and relatable Embarrassed
Do give me links to ur other works too Big smile
I loved reading something aftr such a long time..

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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neha_bbsr2005

This is ur 2nd OS I read and again I was so deeply immersed in it.. Its so real and relatable Embarrassed if you like these kinds of works the surely you'll like my new drabble series I am planning to start in few days.
Do give me links to ur other works too Big smile  Sure, few days till i open my gallery, will straight away give you link to that.Embarrassed
I loved reading something aftr such a long time.. Awww. thats so sweet.Embarrassed

BTW Whats your home forum here?LOL
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Posted: 19 June 2014 at 3:03am | IP Logged
RESS
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Posted: 03 July 2014 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Wowww, this is so beautiful <3

I dunno the characters but I enjoyed this so much. The emotions, your style of writing yaaar *Claps*

Superbly written and described. I could see the parts like in motion in my mind

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Posted: 04 July 2014 at 8:25am | IP Logged
This is awesomeee. All the feelings...what he is going through, it is perfectly described.

P.S. Organic chemistry is my least favourite part of chemistry.

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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 8:13am | IP Logged
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Aditi, i'm glad i found this Big smile I was stalking this corner when i saw your name and then i knew that this is a must read Smile

WOW! You penned down everything so beautifullly Heart I'm amazed dude Wink Once again, a brilliant quote. Thumbs Up Write moree Star And always pm me Tongue I would love to read more from you Smile 


Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 06 July 2014 at 10:04am

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