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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Awesome ... loved it

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MrMrsChiping.

buddy you r way more talented to me..you know studies pressure always bring our inner writer our personal experience:P
beautifully written no doubt..and unique one too:D

I loved it the way you expressed the desaprate need of frnd:(
-your di

Thank you di. Means a lot coming from youHug. And I is no good writerEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zona_malik

Awesome

Amazing

Superb :)
Thank you.Smile

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..nams..

i wont review until u review mine! Evil Smile
a revenge is a revenge Angry
Fine.Stern Smile Give me all the links.

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovely7010

res
unres..

wonderful one!

loved it...

you've portrayed all the emotions so well.


Mera lamba vala comment kahan hai?Angry

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -FrozenRain-

I know why this is dedicated to HAvri  and all I can says is she deserves every bit of your dedication...

About the rest all I'll say is its beautiful,Simple  



Thank you diSmile

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -shenz-

Look who's here...
Me..

Initially I was like.. Ab ispe kaunsa bhoot chad gaya?
Then I looked at the Non-Fan-Fiction part.. That made me like.. Fine... A refreshment.. heheheLOL

So its the story of friends... Oh thats really true... when we are away from friends.. we just cant bare the pain.. We miss them so much that its something that cannot expressed...  I know Cry

The way a friend can soothe you.. with just their mere presence.. is known to you.. when you are apart...  Absolutely. can't agree moreBig smile

These feeling and emotions were well described by you..  thank youEmbarrassed

I never knew you were this mature... Hatts off to you Adi... Tune mujhe mere friends ki yaad dila di... Roola diya na mujhe.. What sould I consider it as?Embarrassed


Thank you so so much di Hug

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShonaSparkzz

This beautiful dear Thank youEmbarrassed
Your work with your own characters has elevated the level of your writing skills I know, it did wondersLOL
congratulationsClap
You described their bond of friendship beautifully You know why, don't you?
 I liked Nikhil's pov concerning his parents 
how he cared for them from the bottom of his heart but would refuse to accept because of his male ego and the pain it brought to him
But it was the consequence of their doing
Neglecting the care he tried to show
not being for him when he needed them
it was obvious 
there is so much that a person can take and he had enough of it  I know, even I felt pity for him.
And how shreya's had been his strength and broken the cocoon he created around himself
was heart touching Bas voh sab hogaya, kaise even I don't know.LOL
 
Hoping to read more original stories ...Smile 
proud of u my mishti mirchi ( bengali style meh WinkLOL)


Gosh Shona, what would I do without your reviews! You detailed insight has actually helped in improving my writing skills.LOL

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