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Aisha1996

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Posted: 03 December 2013 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Awesome OS
Loved it :)

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Posted: 04 December 2013 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
awesome os Smile

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Beautiful!! U r great at writing!! If dis was ur early creation den i wud love to read ur works wholeheartedly!!

D way u've portrayed d emotions is just so good!
D guy is suffering from complex! His parents dnt understand him! He finds light in d tunnel in his friend! His life changes! Rather his way to look at things changes! N wid his friend's presence,for good!
Nw he is an extrovert!, d friend of ol! Helping hand for 1 n ol, bt deep down he misses d one who made him who he actually is!!

I think u n ur frnd share a grt deep bond which is reflected in d os!

May ur frndshp last forever!!

As i said i wud love to read ur further works so plz pm me wen u update!!
N ya! It was a treat reading dis1! Do continue writing such stuff!

Edited by kreya204 - 01 February 2014 at 3:40am

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ARandKJFan

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Aditi! :O
OHMYGOD!
You write?
RES!
UNRES!


Again, thanks for blackmailing me Tongue
I love the concept of this OS.
No love, just plain friendship <3
First of all, I like this guy. He's kinda similar. I'm an extrovert, yet I love spending time in the library. 
The way you've written their story is really nice and also easy to relate too.
And yes, I can lie like her too LOL
How you've incorporated his relationship with his parents is really good too.
Great stuff <33



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Awesome

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Posted: 07 April 2014 at 2:14am | IP Logged
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Wonderful OS!! Clap Clap

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