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Thats.me.Guni Goldie
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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Beautiful os.
Luvd it.

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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Awwwsummm <3

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dazzlingmanavi Goldie
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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
really awsm
superb

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LuvAly_KriYansh IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
amazing...

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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 5:17am | IP Logged
gosh it was damn beautifull!!
great job!

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Posted: 14 October 2013 at 2:01am | IP Logged
awsm.!

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Posted: 17 November 2013 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 02 December 2013 at 2:46am | IP Logged
This beautiful dear
Your work with your own characters has elevated the level of your writing skills 
congratulationsClap
You described their bond of friendship beautifully
 I liked Nikhil's pov concerning his parents 
how he cared for them from the bottom of his heart but would refuse to accept because of his male ego and the pain it brought to him
But it was the consequence of their doing
Neglecting the care he tried to show
not being for him when he needed them
it was obvious 
there is so much that a person can take and he had enough of it
And how shreya's had been his strength and broken the cocoon he created around himself
was heart touching
 
Hoping to read more original stories ...Smile 
proud of u my mishti mirchi ( bengali style meh WinkLOL)

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