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One Shot - Without You (Page 2)

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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Look who's here...
Me..

Initially I was like.. Ab ispe kaunsa bhoot chad gaya?
Then I looked at the Non-Fan-Fiction part.. That made me like.. Fine... A refreshment..

So its the story of friends... Oh thats really true... when we are away from friends.. we just cant bare the pain.. We miss them so much that its something that cannot expressed...

The way a friend can soothe you.. with just their mere presence.. is known to you.. when you are apart...

These feeling and emotions were well described by you..

I never knew you were this mature... Hatts off to you Adi... Tune mujhe mere friends ki yaad dila di... Roola diya na mujhe..

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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 1:43am | IP Logged
everything is defined so well...superb
loved it..
thnks a lot for the pm..:)

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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
I know why this is dedicated to HAvri  and all I can says is she deserves every bit of your dedication...

About the rest all I'll say is its beautiful,Simple  


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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Rreally awesum

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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Nice Os Smile
well penned

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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 4:39am | IP Logged
loved it ... <3 <3 

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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 6:11am | IP Logged
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that was superb and fabulous well start... loved it... do continue soon and pm me  

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