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heya peeps..!!
lo me agayi mera 1st ever OS lekhe..
acutaly OS nhi hai Two Shots hai..
hope tumloge ko pasand aye...
this OS is a challege given to me by ronikaseth
Mysterious Girl hope u like it
And m S***** fr delay
aab meri bak bak band aur ye lo 1st part

~*~*~

YOU ARE THE ONE




"Rey I want a promise from u..that after I leave the college u will never fall in love with any other girl" said taani while leaving the college to rey.
Rey promised her and taani left the college.

~ * ~ * ~

It's been a month now that taani had left the college.
Everything was back to normal for the college but for lousian it was not normal as neha also left the college few days after the taani left.
And vickey was missing his Kaggu to the core.

~ * ~ * ~

"OMG..!! I can't believe it...u r back...??"
A random girl screamed excietly...by looking at 3 girls nd 1 boy.
The news of someone's return spread in the college as a wild fire.
Louians were in canteen and discussing about their new dance concept. There were a group of people sitting on the table beside louians they were also discussing the same that someone's back.

Lousians were confused and only one thing was coming in their mind that is
"who is back..??"
Swayam got up from his sit and went near that people and ask "hey guyzz..!! who is back..??"
The girl from that group spoke "OMG..!! swayam u don't know neha, vishakha, shivam and kriya are back in the college"
After hearing it lousian were shocked rey became numb listening to kriya name.
At that time all 4 came in canteen giggling all the way.
Kriya nd the 3 saw lousians shocked face...but they didn't care too talk with them and just passed by them and sat on the table.
Neha asked kriya with concern "kriya fine u na..??"
Kriya looked at her and gave a weak simle and said "ya guyzz m fine..!!"
"Ohk guyzz..wht u all 3 want to eat tell me" said shivam getting up from his place
"neha wanting orange juice"
"dude I don't want anything" said vishakha
Kriya was lost in her thoughts nd didn't listened that wht shivam was sayimg. Shivam puts his and on her shoulder and say's "princess u sure na u fine..??"
Kriya said "ya shivam m fine"
Lousian were shocked to see that all of them ignored them as if they don't know who r they and to see the 3 of them bond with shivam.
Rey was getting jealous by seeing kriya and shivam together.
Vicky got up from his sit and went towards neha and said
"kaggu howz u..??"
Neha just looked up at him and said "vicky u not calling me kaggu anymore."
Saying this she went away to girls locker room and behind her kriya nd vishakha also went.
Vicky was broken by hearing the reply from his kaggu.
He just true around and went to boys locker room.
"hey guyzz"
Shivam went towards the gang while waving his hand and was about to say something bt was inttruted by Sharon
"guyzz lets leave."
Saying this Sharon started to move and was followed by the gang.
The gang was sitting in rehalsal hall now.
Rey went to fire exit as he wanted some time to be alone.

~ * ~ * ~

GIRLS LOCKER ROOM

Neha came there running and was crying.
Kriya came and put her hand on her shoulder. Neha turn around and hugged her and was crying badly.
Kriya broked the hug and cupped her face and wiped away her tears and said
"neha why did u behave like that with Vicky..??"
Neha looked at kriya for a while and said
"they did so bad with u..and still neha talking with them..NO..!!"
"magar neha isme Vicky ki kya galti hai...?? Vicky toh khudse tujhse baat karne aaya tha na"
Kriya tried to convince her.
"no neha not talking to them"
saying this neha got up and went to wash her face.

~ * ~ * ~

FIRE EXIT

Rey came in fire exit with all sort of different emotions.
He was frustrated, angry, jealous, annoyed, happy at the same time

REY'S POV

Kyu..?? kyu..?? kyu..??
Kyu aayi tum wapis baatcutter...??
Why did u came back..??
Pehle mujhe chodke chali gyi mujhe bina bataye and now u came back again and that also with tha shivam.
Magar mujhe kyu problem horahi hai kriya aur shivam ko pass dekha ke
Me toh abhi kriya se pyaar nhi karta na me toh taani se pyaar karta ho.
Then why this jealousy..??
God please help me kya me abhi bhi kriya se pyaar karta ho..??
Toh fir taani..??
No I hate kriya...she used me..
How could I love her no I hate her nd she too hate me
I HATE U KRIYA

POV END

~ * ~ * ~

REHARSAL HALL

"guyzz kriya is back..!!"
Said rinni and looked at all
"ya she is back with that jerk shivam"
Said Sharon in anger.
"but guyzz neha ne Vicky ke saat rudely kyu behave kiya..??"
Nilesh spoke up
"yup guyzz there must be something neha ne Vicky say rudely baat ki vishakha ignored us as if she don't know who are we"
Said simmi
"haan yaar ye sab uss kliya ke wajse ho raha hai"
Said amar.
All where confuse to the hell and were letting out there confusion out
All were talking except swayam he was still in the shock bcoz he saw his bestie after all 1 year and his more two friends vishakha nd neha but they ignore them and more over they all 3 were with shivam his biggest enemy.
Sharon noticed that swayam was not speaking a word and went towards him. Swayam looked up and gave a weak simle as if telling her that he is fine.

~ * ~ * ~

the whole day went away with full of confusion for the lousians.
There was many question revolving in their minds.

~ * ~ * ~

Do hit like tab and leave back ur reviewsSmile

last part on page no. 13




Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 16 February 2014 at 1:23am

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Originally posted by ronikaseth

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updat fast
other wise i m gonna kill u


u took my challenge more dan 2 daysAngry

plzzz
updt fastCryCry

kauna janaam ka badla le rahi hoConfused

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 6:14am | IP Logged
reswa
unres
nyc one abhi...
hate mr.reyaansh n his so called gf Angry
loved our awesome threesome weakling DIVA's n shivam's entry...
louians ko zor ka jhatka lagaa Big smile
dint lyk d way neha behaved with vicky...
i miss kaagu-babuCry
y d hell is rey jealous of kriya n shivam's closeness AngryAngry
miss kriyam Cry
jaldi update karooo...


Edited by Princess_Devil - 05 October 2013 at 10:18am

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Ohho. . .os. . .gud. . .
Chal jaldi post kr.
Unres. . . . . . .
Awsm os yaar. .
Wow. .d 3 weaklings Diva R Back to colg with Shivam. .wow. .
N r ful-to ignoring the gang. . .and humari gang ko laga shock pe shock. .wow. .nt bad . .mast yaar. .waiting 4 d nxt part. .update soon.


Edited by Madhukumari - 09 October 2013 at 11:06am

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awesome start
loved it
update next part soon


Edited by anjali22 - 05 October 2013 at 8:11am

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Wowww abhi I loved d start Clap
Kriya back wit shivam vishaka and neha Embarrassed
All were shocked Wink
Now m waiting eagerly for d next part Wink
Update soon Smile
And sowwie this like button s not workin Cry

Edited by aishu3003 - 05 October 2013 at 4:24am

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wah wah abhi... kya os hai...Clap
loved they way of kriya's entry that too with shivam...!!! ..Smile

louians ko shabak shikna chahiye...

well loved it to the core..Hug
amazing concept..Big smile
update it soonSmile


Edited by sumimita - 06 October 2013 at 1:01am

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