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Posted: 10 years ago
Teaser for chapter 9:-
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page 40+... as if that is a challenge for me 

AsYa going for honeymoon

Manali

Yay

 
AsYa are already romantic before honeymoon

pata nahi baad mein kya haal hoga

eagerly waiting for the update


luv u Mina Di

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Chapter 9:-

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Awesome
Brilliant
Cute
Dazzling
Enchanting
Flawless
Great
Honorable
Incredible
Joyous
Kool
Lyrical
Melodic
Nice
Organized
Precious
Quotable
Remarkable
Shiny
Terrific
Unique
Vibrant
Wonderful
X
Youthful
Zoetic

can't think anything related to X... you tell me and I'll add it...

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"Aap aise kyun dekh rahe hain mujhe?", she asked.

 

"Bas aise hi! Kyun? Apni biwi ko dekhne ki permission nahi hai kya mujhe?", he asked.

 

"Aapko permission ki zaroorat kyu hone lagi! Agar mera aap pe haq hai to aapka mujh par haq hai!", she replied sweetly shifting closer to him.

 

Asad opened out his arms for her. She smiled and shifted into his arms.


this scene was so cute... 


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Asad dropped a soft kiss on her hair.

 

"Main tickets book karwa deta hoon! We'll leave day after!", he said.

 

"Okay!", she replied and dropped a kiss on the crook of his neck. He turned to her and caressed her face. He dropped a kiss on her forehead, they her cheeks.

 

She closed her eyes feeling her husband shower kisses on her face. His lips on her soft skin felt blissful.


so many kisses 😳


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"Mr. Khan? Seriously?", he asked with a smirk.

 

"Haan to.. Aap Mr. Khan se kya.. Mr. Farooqui ban gaye hain?", she asked with a pout.


so Zoya 😆


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"And main usse Raabert kyun bulati hu.. Wo to bohot lambi kahani hai. Actually ek din Raabert ghar aaya tha.. matlab.. iss room ke window se hi aaya tha, but you were not at home and I was with Tamatar in the hall. And uske baad when I heard something fall in your room, I walked in and saw him sitting on the bed. Uske baad I spoke to him and cleared all our misunderstandings and we sat and watched a movie Zanjeer' and we were enacting the scenes! Najma was Lion, Ayaan played Raabert and I played Mona!", she squealed in excitement in one breathe.

I love Zoyaan only as Mona-Robert i.e. friends 😊

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"Mona darling? Bhaijaan so gaye kya?", asked Ayaan from outside the window in a hushed tone.

 

Zoya giggled at Asad's weird expressions as he heard Ayaan's question. She signalled Asad to stay quiet and close his eyes. Asad nodded and followed the instructions of his crazy wife.


so cute 👍🏼


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She first unwrapped the gift that Ayaan got for both of them. It was a picture of the wedding day where Ayaan, Nikhat, Nuzzhat and Najma stood along with Asad and Zoya. It was beautifully framed.

 

Asad smiled and his eyes welled up.

 

"Asad.. Don't cry!", said Zoya wiping away the drop of tear from his cheek.

 

"I sometimes wonder ke hum sab aise kyun nahi rah sakte.. Sab saath mein!", he wondered.

 

"Kuch sawaalon ka jawaab nahi hota Asad and if there are answers, those questions better remain unanswered!", replied Zoya and unwrapped the other gift that Ayaan brought for Zoya.

 

It was a beautiful treasure box with a message.




wow... this was my fav part ❤️


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"Asad! Thank you for coming into my life and completing me!", she confessed.

 

Asad smiled and kissed her forehead, then her eyes, nose, cheeks and a soft peck on her lips.

 

"You made my life colourful with your presence and I know that this rainbow would last forever!", he whispered huskily.

 

"Asad? This doesn't seem like you! Kiski line churayi?", she asked with a giggle.

 

"Ummm.. My colleague Mrinalini was typing a story and I heard her say this line out loud!", he replied.


correction... this was my fav part 🤗


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Wanted to do a simple comment this time


something different


hope you like it


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I LOVE YOU BIG SISTA


NOW LISTENING TO MITWA... ISHQ PE ZOR NAHI

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Teaser for chapter 10:-
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She smiled to herself and so instead of wearing her night suit, she wore Asad's shirt. She came out and saw Asad standing out at the balcony. She tip toed to Asad and slipped her arms around his waist, raised her mouth to his ear and whispered, "I'm back!"

"Not when you are there to hug me!", she replied genuinely and buried herself into his broad chest.
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Totally loved these lines

I can't wait for the update now

page 102..ok... but send out pms tonight only

So loved this one

Can't believe Heartbeats is nearing its end

*sigh*

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I LOVE YOU BIG SISTA ❤️

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Chapter 10:-
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fav scenes first :-
Asad stood at the reception checking into the room while Zoya clung on to him feeling cold. Once the procedures were done, the bell boy led them to a suite where the balcony faced the snow capped mountains. It was a mesmerizing view.

He silently walked to her and when he got close, he shook his hair and water droplets flew onto her face. She opened her eyes.

Zoya shook her head and got out her clothes and went to the bathroom. She took a nice long hot shower and wiped herself. She turned to her clothes and noticed Asad's clothes. She picked up Asad's shirt and held it open. It smelled just like him and she felt butterflies in her tummy.

"Should I?", she wondered.

She smiled to herself and so instead of wearing her night suit, she wore Asad's shirt. She came out and saw Asad standing out at the balcony. She tip toed to Asad and slipped her arms around his waist, raised her mouth to his ear and whispered, "I'm back!"


"Aren't you feeling cold in this?", he asked.

 

"Not when you are there to hug me!", she replied genuinely and buried herself into his broad chest. He hugged her possessively. He then scooped her up in his arms and took her to the bed. He gently lay her down and closed the balcony doors to keep it warm.


Soon Asad's hand curved around Zoya's waist and circled her navel, suggestively. Zoya let out a giggle.

 

"What?", asked Asad.

 

"That tickles!", she whispered.

 

"Well, it's not my fault that you are ticklish!", he replied, rubbing her skin more. He brought her closer with his other hand.


"We could go for snow fighting, yak ride.. or umm.. river rafting, skiing!", Zoya suggested.

 

"Well.. I have a plan! We could do all this tomorrow and then, stay in this room the rest of the days!", replied Asad.

 

"Mr. Khan! Aap kitne besharm ho gaye hain!", complained Zoya as she hit him on his chest. Asad let out a laugh.


"Do you want to start a family?", she asked.

 

"Yes I do!", came an honest answer.

 

"If you do.. Then so do I!", she replied and dropped a kiss on his forehead.


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You know na its hard for me to comment on 18+ update


so just bear with a short one today


I totally loved it


I am going to Manali... AsYa honeymoon in Manali


Wow


it was awesome


Do give a sightseeing teaser before I go


I'll be able to connect


😉


or how about I enjoy and give you feedbacks (WA toh hoga hi)



NOW LISTENING TO "MITWA... ISHQ PE ZOR NAHI"


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Now I'm done consolidating my comments! 😛

Back to listening "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"  ❤️

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I wanted to consolidate all my posts but then god knows how many posts I needed to res

I-F would have banned my account 😆

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Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
And I am done 😊

@ Ayra

Thx for waiting 🤗
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Its my turn to res! :D
Mahi - Anything for you  🤗
Unres

First of all...Congratulations on the new thread!!🥳
Manali!! 😃 Loved the update!
Ghar baithe baithe Manali dekh liya maine!! Superb description👏
Loved Zoya's antics at river crossing...😆Na Na karte karte Asad also gave in!😉
and the Vashith water springs😲..Asad ordering right away they wont bathe in there...😉😆.
Sulphur-Rose water line was funnny😆😆
and our Architect Asad appreciating Architecture😆

Zoya and her worry about getting up at 5 in the cold😆..Poor girl she was so tired after a long day of sight seeing! Aww!! She snuggled into Asad's arms and fell asleep 😳😳

p.s- Mrina, looks like you had  fun vacation with family..Loved the pics😊
p.p.s- Mahi, Why did you not enjoy your vacation?😕
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Its my turn to res! :D

Mahi - Anything for you  🤗


❤️

Luv you for doing this
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Updated all comments
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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Updated all comments

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Will check them! 😳
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Woww😊...awsome😊...loved the detailed description of their sightseeing🤗...I had visited manali when I was 4 yrs old so barely remember anything😃...update soon😊...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update
Asya sight seeing in Manali was really great
Loved