Saraswatichandra

Reunion in the rain Samud OS

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Reunion in the rain


Kumud stood shivering in the temple.Though her eyes were closed tears rolled over her cheeks.

"God,why are you punishing me like this?Why I have only pain these days?"

She opened her eyes only to get shocked to see Saras.

"Saras!How come you are here?".

"I did'nt come here to disturb you Kumud.I just came to pray".

"God hears only good-hearted people's prayers".

It pained Saras' heart.

Kumud noticed the dark sky.

"I think it's going to rain now.I need to go back before it starts raining".

Saras remembered Kumud dancing in rain when she felt being loved by Saras.

"Earlier you used to love being in love.Then now why are you going away from rain?"

"That time rain was the symbol of happiness.But now the rain appears to be tears".

Saras felt upset as it was because of him that Kumud finds pain in rain.

He said in his mind,

"Even in rain I can see only your tears which are caused by me.But I will wipe your tears Kumud".

Saras put one step forward,but his leg got slipped due to the wet slippery floor and he fell down.

"Saras!"Kumud ran towards him and helped him to get up.She saw his hand bleeding.Without second thoughts she tore her saree's pallu and tied it over her hand.

Cool breeze of love touched them.Saras could'nt help himself from pampering her face with his eyes.Kumud who looked up saw his eyes being fixed on her.She came back to her senses and moved backward.

She thought,

"Why do I still care for the man who cheated me?"

"Kumud!"He called her.She looked at him.He was looking at her with painful eyes.

"I am sorry Kumud".

Kumud's eyes got teary.Suddenly she managed herself not to become weak.

"After wounding my heart you don't deserve my pardon Saras".


His heart was scattered into various pieces.

"You don't have a heart.Then how will you understand what a woman undergoes when her man does'nt come to the wedding place?"

"I had come there Kumud".

Unknowingly he said so.

Kumud was shocked.

"But the Inspector who cheated Kumari attacked me with his goons.I fell unconscious".

Kumud could'nt believe it.

"No.You are lying".

"I know that you can't believe me.But this is the truth.Believe me Kumud.
When I came to know that my mother's suicide was due to my father's extra marital affair with my step mother whom I respected I just lost my control Kumud".

Kumud was really shocked.

Kumud was reminded of the payal she got from the entrance.She remembered how she felt being called by Saras while travelling in the car to her husband's house.

She saw his tears flowing down.

"I said that I can't marry you.But did you think that I can stop loving you?"

Kumud lost herself in his tears.

"Saras!"

She forgot her current status and ran to him.He circled his arms around her waist and brought her closer to him.
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

It started raining.That moment both of them could'nt find any trace of pain in the rain.They could see only pure love in the rain.

She started shivering when rain drops fell all over her.Her wet saree which was hugging her sensitive skin made her shiver with cold.

He saw it.He wiped the rain drops from her her forehead,her cheeks,her nice and then her lips.When he touched her tender lips she moved away from her.But he held her hand brought her close to him.They both looked at each other's eyes deeply.

He removed his coat and covered her with it.
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

"Saras,you will feel cold without the coat".

"No Kumud.If you are alright why would I feel uncomfortable?We both had already become one body Kumud".
Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kumud remembered that they had melted into one pool of love long ago.

His fingers fell on her wet head.

"Kumud,by folding your hair you are folding your happiness and beautiful dreams of love.When I am near you I won't let that happen".

He removed her bun and let her hair open.Her long tresses started glowing as if rain drops decorated it like small diamond stars decorate the sky of fairy land.His fingers pampered her lovely hair.She closed her eyes only to forget her recent pain and get immersed in this blissful moment with her man.
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Saras cupped her face in his hands.

"Kumud,open your eyes.Let me see your beautiful eyes".

Slowly she opened her eyes.Rain drops fell on her eyes.Her eye lashes fluttered.

"Saras,why do you want to see my eyes?"

"To see your feelings for me",he replied.

"You don't know how I feel for you?"She asked.

"I know.But I want to know whether your grief had vanished from the eyes.If so that means you have forgiven me".

"Saras,look at my eyes and tell me what you feel now".

He looked at her eyes deeply.

He smiled emotionally.

She smiled with tears in her eyes.

"Yes Saras,I have forgiven you".

They both became so emotional that they shed tears.

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

He lifted her up in his arms and walked in the rain.They kept looking at each other.

He sat under a tree keeping his beloved on his lap.

He caressed her face.

"Kumud,now you understand me.I understand your marital life's truth also.Then why should we suffer like this Kumud?Why can't we forget everything and move on?"
Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kumud's heart beat fast and she got up from his lap.

"No Saras.I am married.I can't cheat anyone.And I can't break my parents' faith in me".

"Kumud...you are married only for name sake.Your husband is an animal.If your inlaws and parents know the truth they themselves will tell you to leave Pramad".

Kumud was in dilemma.
"No Saras!That's a sin".
She walked forward.He pulled her close to him staring at her eyes.

"I won't let you go Kumud.Because if you go back it's the hell of thorns which is waiting for you there.When I am alive I won't allow anything to hurt you.I hurt you.I can't let you suffer anymore".
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Kumud burst into tears.

"Kumud,I love you.I can't live without you",Saras confessed.
Kumud became so emotional that she did'nt know how to react.

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho



His tears fell down.He wiped her tears."Don't cry Kumud.This is not a moment to cry.This is a beautiful moment...I got my Kumud back after a painful separation.Though the separation was short it felt very long."

She wept ,"And I got my Saras back".

He smiled emotionally.She smiled after a long time forgetting the tear drops which irritated her eyes.

She buried herself in his chest.
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

The rain drops poured upon themselves marking a new beginning of love which was hidden for sometime.
Kumud removed the coat and held it above like an umbrella for both of them.They saw an unknown umbrella flying.Saras caught it and held it above them while Kumud kept the coat in her hand.Her saree touched his chin which gave him a feeling that her skin pampered him.


They smiled at each other with a sweet flour ...A reunion of love under the umbrella.


The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
its beautiful
i read it  before liked and then thought will comment araam se ...rolf

its very romantic with mix of bollywod songs

i want this to happen ...and i think it will when once this pramad thorn is out
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb os jasmine..beautifully written ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww Jasmine Lovely OS. (:
You Should Write More Saras& Kumud Stories.


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Posted: 10 years ago
super cute OS
really sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written jasmine and thanks for the pm.
And please All the writers continue with the FF 's and Os..
Coz ur work is better than the shows these days.
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Posted: 10 years ago
So beautifyully written, so full of love and so much needed.  The song you have chosen is so perfect for the setting.
Thanks for the pm.
Love you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
its amazing 
beautiful romantic reunion .
i want this to happen in show too 
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely yaar๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
pls continue to write more
Edited by keerthi008 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow amazing os๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š..soo beatuifully written๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..loved itโค๏ธ