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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Hi,
 
Welcome to WAS (Write a scene) contest - after a long time.
 
Rules:
 
1. You have to write a short story (scene) connecting the 3 given pictures
 
 
2. The scene has to be continuous
 
 
3. You may rearrange the pictures as you wish
 
 
4. It can be written in Hindi/English/Hinglish
 
 
5. Entries are to be submitted before : 13th Oct 2013 5PM.
 
 
6. Entries are to be posted on this thread  as replies with ENTRY NO : x (x- is yor entry no) mentioned at the top.
 
 
7. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3435662 is a previous contest. You may check this for the format and how to create a scene etc.
 
 
 
8. No replies on this thread, except your entries. All discussions are to be held in the General Discussions thread or you may PM any of the previous participants for doubt clarification.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
Entry 1:

Don't ask me what I was doing here. I have no idea. LOL But hope you guys like it.



Daya sir and Freddy are eating dinner at Daya sir's house when Daya sir gets a call. He picks up.

Daya sir: Hello? *listening* Lekin abhi? *listening* Acha thik hai. *listening*

Freddy's face is getting worried as he hears this. Daya hangs up.

Freddy: Kya huya sir?

Daya sir: Pata nahi. Abhijeet ka phone tha.

Freddy: Kya kaha Abhijeet sir ne?

Daya: Hume phauran bureau bulaya hai. ACP sir ko kuch baat karni hai.

Freddy: Toh chalo sir.

The 2 leave Daya sir's house.


In the bureau, Abhijeet sir, Daya sir, and Freddy are looking worried as ACP sir is pacing without saying anything.

Daya sir: Kya huya sir?

ACP sir: Daya tumhe nahi pata ke kya huya hai?

Daya sir: Nahi sir. Huya kya hai?

ACP sir: Kuch aisa huya hai jo nahi hona chahiye tha.

Abhijeet sir: Lekin kya sir?

Freddy: Sir kuch toh bataya. Main pareshan ho raha hoon.

ACP sir: Freddy pareshan toh main bhi hoon. Yeh kaise ho sakta hai?

Abhijeet sir: Lekin kya sir?

Daya sir: Kuch toh bataye.

ACP sir: Main kuch nahi kahonga. Tum log phauran jao aur khud pata karo ke kya huya. Shodin Hall. Main, Freddy, aur Salunkhe peeche aate hain.

The duo leave.


At Shodin Hall, the duo are getting out of the car and discussing what could have happened.

Daya sir: Kya lagta hai Abhijeet?

Abhijeet sir: Dekhte hain. Agar sir itne pareshan the toh zaroor koi baari baat hi hogi.

Daya sir: Chalo dekhte hain.

The duo close their doors and walk into Shodin Hall. The hall is dark.

Abhijeet sir (calling out): Koi hai? Koi hai?

Daya sir feels around for a switch and finding one turns it on. The lights turn on and a whole group of dedicated CIDians yell out: Surprise! Happy 1000th episode!!!

The duo break into smiles and ACP sir, Freddy, and Dr. Salunkhe walk in behind them also surprised. ACP sir realizes that the call he got about the mass suicides was fake just to get them to come to the surprise party.

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 ENTRY 2 :
(wrote it while discussing about the episode and the precap on the EDT of Rahasa Dweep IV Wink)
 
 
 
 
 
 
At Daya's house...
 
Daya having dinner after a tiring day. The doorbell rings.
 
Daya : (Checking the clock) Poune-baaraa!! Itni raat ko kaun aaya??
 
Daya opens the door...
 
Daya : Arey Fredy, tum? Tum itni raat gaye yahan kaise?
 
Fredy : (worried) Sir, aapka phone shayad lug nahi raha hai...
 
Daya : Tum aise khade kyun ho? Andar aao!!
 
Fredy saw that Daya was having his dinner. So he came in and sat beside Daya as Daya ate. Fredy refused to eat anything.
 
Daya : Achha bataao, kya baat hai?
 
Fredy : Sir, humein Bureau jaana hai!!
 
Daya : (shocked) Bureau?!! Abhi kyun?
 
Fredy : Sir, Abhijeet Sir ka phone aaya tha... Urgently bulaya hai!! Aapka phone nahi lag raha tha, isiliye Abhijeet Sir ne mujhe aap ko saath lekar aane ke liye kaha hai!!!
 
 
Just then Daya's phone rings and Abhi tells him to reach Bureau immediately.
 
 
Both, Daya and Fredy, hurry towards the Bureau in Fredy's car.
 
 
 
*     *     *
 
 
 
 
 
 
ACP and Abhijeet already present in the Bureau. Daya and Fredy enter to see the Seniors walking up and down the Bureau in anger and disappointment.
 
Daya : Errr... Kya hua hai Abhijeet? (Abhijeet remained silent) Sir? (ACP too didnt speak)
 
Daya and Fredy confused... After a while...
 
Abhi : (angry) Yeh log kya samajhte hain? Ki woh humein kuchh bhi karne ke liye kahenge aur hum karte rahenge?!!
 
Sensing Daya and Fredy's confusion, ACP makes it clear...
 
ACP : Humaare "Guptcharon" se pata chala hai ki humein phir se Jungle aur paani mein bhejne ka irada hai unka!!
 
Daya : Kya?!! Phir se??
 
Fredy : Arey Baap re! Mujhse nahi hoga Sir yeh...!!
 
ACP : I know Fredy, I know..!! Kisi ko nahi karna hai yeh...
 
Abhi : (determined) Hum ab chup nahi baithenge Sir!! Kuchh na kuchh toh karna hi padega!!
 
 
 
Daya : Haan Abhijeet! Ab bohot ho raha hai yeh!!
 
Fredy : Lekin hum kya kar sakte hain Sir?
 
Abhi : (with sparkling yes and a mischievious smile) Mere paas ek plan hai!!
 
ACP : (a bit worried) Abhijeet, chal kya raha hai tumhaare dimag mein?!! Jo bhi karna hai bohot soch-samajh ke karna!!
 
Daya : Haan Sir! Aap uski fikar mut kijeeye... (to Abhi) Abhijeet, pehele plan toh batao!!
 
Abhi shares his plan with everyone. Everyone agrees with him. All leave the Bureau. Abhi offers to drop Daya on the way. Daya offers to drive to his house. As both sat into the car...
 
 
 
 
Daya : Tumhara plan toh perfect hai Boss!! Hum gayab ho jaayenge... Yeh log humaara kuchh bigaad hi nahi paayenge...!! (angry) Jab TRP's down ho jaayenge na, tab pata chalega inko!!
 
Abhi : Haan!! Jab tak hum khud koi kadam nahi uthaayenge iske khilaaf, yeh aisa hi chalta rahega!!!
 
Daya : Lekin haan, sab ek saath gayab ho gaye toh unhein hum pe shaq ho jaayega...!!
 
Abhi : Theek kehte ho Daya!! (thinks) Theek hai, pehele main nikalta hoon yahan se... Phir ek ek karke, tum, ACP Sir aur Fredy bhi aajana... Aur Salunkhe Saab ko bhi bata dena (winks) Chhuttiyan manayenge (laughs)
 
Daya : Lekin hum jaayenge kahan?
 
Abhi : Uska bhi intezaam ho jaayega... (winks)
 
 
END
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by neha_dna - 06 October 2013 at 7:23pm

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                   ENTRY:3
(This is my first attempt in any WAS contest,so if there's any mistake than plz avoid it.)
 
At Daya's house.

Daya: arey Freddie, tum is waqt yahan ? sab kuchh theek toh hai na?

Freddie: sir meri  life me kuchh  bhi  theek nahi  ho  sakta.

Daya: accha  aao pehle baitho yahan, kuchh  loge?

Freddie: nahi sir mujhe  kuchh  nahi  chaahiye.

Daya: ab  batao  kya  pareshaani  hai  tumhaari?

Freddie: sir  wo  meri  wife...

Daya: ab  kya  farmaan jaari  ker  diya  tumhaari  wife  ne?

Freddie: sir  usne mujhe  dusshera  me  3 dinon  ki  chutti  lene  ko  kaha  hai.

Daya: 3 dino  ki  chutti!

Freddie: haan sir  wo  darasal  meri wife  kaafi  samay se mayke  nahi  gayi  hai  aur Is  bar usne  soch  liya  hai ki  wo  dusshera  ki  chhutti  me mayke  jaayegi, wo v mere saath

Daya: accha?

Freddie: sir  usne  to  dhamki  v  di  hai  ki agar  maine  chhutti  nahi  li to  wo  mujhse  ek  mahine  baat                                                         nahi  karegi. Aur sir aapko  to  pata  hi  hai  ki  hame  tyohar  me  ek  din  ki chhutti  v  kitni  mushkil  se  milti  hai.

Daya: ab  kya  Karen  Freddie hamara  kaam  hi  kuchh  aisa  hai.

Freddie: sir  main  manta  hun  lekin  thoda  waqt  to  family  ko  v dena  chaahiye  na?  aakhir  wo  v  to  hamari hi  zimmedari  hain .

Daya: hmmm   ye  v sahi  hai  to  tum  ACP  sir  se baat  kyun  nahi  karte?

Freddie: mmmain ! arey  baap  re  nahi  sir ,aap  to  jaante  hi  ho ki  unke  saamne  meri  bolti  hi  band ho  jaati  hai,haan  agar  aap  ya  Abhijit  sir  unse  baat  karo  to  wo  zaroor  maan  jaayenge.

Daya: achha  theek  hai  main  aaj  unse  baat  kar..(mobile  rings, Daya  picks  up  d  phone)

Daya: haan  Abhijit , bolo... achha?  Par  tum  ho  kahan  is  waqt?  ...achha  theek  hai  main  thodi  me  aata  hun...arey  nahi  yaar  isme  pareshaani  ki  kya  baat  hai. Tum  wahin  ruko  main  aata  hun.

Freddie: kya  hua  sir?

Daya: arey  wo  Abhijit  ki  gaadi  kharaab  ho  gayi  hai  raaste  me  aur  aaj  taxi  waalon  ki  hartaal  v  hai Isliye  mujhe  jaana   hoga  use  pick  up  karne  ke  liye,tum  aisa  karo  tum  bureau  pahooncho, main  Abhijit  ko  le  kar  aata  hun,phir  ACP  sir  se baat  karke  dekhte  hain, kya  hota  hai.

Freddie: sir  aap  pakka  baat  karoge  na ?

Daya: haan  baba, ab  tum  jao, Abhijit  mera  intezar  kar  raha  hoga.

Freddie: theek  hai  sir..

Abhijit: achha  hua  Daya  tum  aa  gaye  varna  main  to(Daya  interrupts)

Daya: lekin  tum  is  restaurant  me  kya  karne  aaye  the, ye  to  tumhare  ghar  se  kaafi  door hai? Kahin  Dr. Taarika  ke  saath  koi...

Abhijit: kya  yaar  Daya, tum  v  na, hamesha..

Daya: arey  boss  main  to  mazaak  kar  raha  tha..

Abhijit: actually  wo  mera  khabri  hai  na  Mahesh, main  usi  se  milne  aaya  tha. Wo  yahaan  waiter ka kaam  karta  hai.

Daya: to  kya  bataya  usne?

Abhijit: Daya  bahut  badi  gadbad  hone  waali  hai .

Daya: gadbad??

Abhijit: haan  Daya , Mahesh  ne  bataya  ki  usne  restaurant  me 2  logon  ko  baaten  karte  suna  hai ki  wo  dusshera  ke  din  koi  bahut  badi  gadbad  karne  wale  hain.

Daya: kya?  Kaun  the  wo  log?

Abhijit: pata  nahi  yaar, Mahesh  ne  unka  peechha  v  kiya  tha  per wo  kahin  gaayeb  ho gaye. Lekin  use  shaq  hai  ki  ve  zaroor  kisi  aatankwadi  group se  jude  hue  hain..

Daya: Abhijit  phir  to  hame  jald  se  jald  ye  baat  ACP  sir ko  bataani  hogi.

Abhijit: meri  baat  hui  unse  phone  per,wo  bureau  me  hamaara  intezaar  ker  rahe  honge.

Daya: to  phir  chalo  jaldi se.

Abhijit: haan  chalo..  (both  sit in  d  car)

 

ACP: haan  abhijit  kuchh  pata  chala  un  logon  ke  bare  main?

Abhijit: nahi  sir,lekin  Mahesh  ko  poora  shaq  hai  ki  ve  kisi  aatankwadi  sangathan se  jude  hue Hain  jo  dusshera  ke  din  saher  me  badi  tabaahi  machaane  wale  hain.

ACP:kya??

Daya: sir, phir  to  hamen  jaldi  hi  kuchh  karna  hoga, kyunki  navratri  shuru  ho   chuki hai  aur dusshera  me  kuchh  hi  din  bache  hain.

Abhijit: lekin  Daya  hame  to  ye v nahi  maalum  ki  ve  kis  aatankwadi  group  ke  liye kaam  kar  rahe Hain  aur  ve  karne  kya  waale  hain..

ACP: Abhijit  maalum  nahi  hai  to  maalum  karna  padega. Kyunki   jab  desh  ki  surakshaa  khatre  me ho  to  hum  yun  haath  per  haath  rakh  ker  nahi  baith  sakte. Aur  waise  v  dusshera  buraai  per  achhaai  ki  jeet ka  prateek  hai, aise  din  hum  unke  napaaq  iraadon  ko  hum  kisi  v  kimat  per Kaamyaab  hone  nahi  denge.

Abhijit: haan sir, aap  bilkul  sahi  keh  rahe hain.

ACP:toh  phir  jaldi  se undono  ke  sketch  banvao  aur  saare  log  lag  jao  kaam  per, kyunki  hamare   Paas  waqt  bahut kam  hai. Mujhe  ministry  me  v  khabar  pahunchaani  hogi.

Abhijit  & Daya: yes  sir..  (Daya turns  nd  suddenly reminds)

Daya: arey  Freddie  main  to  tumhaari  chutti ki  baat  karna  hi  bhul  gaya, main  abhi..(interrupts)

Freddie:rehne  do sir  mujhe  koi  chutti  nahi  chaahiye.

ACP: chhutti??  Kise  chaahiye  chhutti?

Freddie: kkkisi  ko  nahi sir , wo  mujhe  chaahiye  thi  sir  lekin  ab  nahi  chaahiye.

Daya: lekin  Freddie  tumhaari  wife..

Freddie: sir  wife  ko  main  samhaal  loonga, aur  zyada  se  zyada  kya  hoga, wo  mujhse  ek  mahine     baat  nahi  karegi, chalega , lekin  is  waqt  maasoom  logon  ki  jaan  bachaana  zyaada  jaroori  hai.

Isliye  chhutti  cancel.

Abhijit: arey  wah  Freddie  ye  hui  na   baat ! to  ab  lag jao  duty  per.

Freddie: o. k. sir..

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ENTRY 4:


Daya sir is relaxing at home early after a tiring day, and about to have some refreshment when the doorbell rings. He opens the door and sees Freddy sir there.

Daya sir - (smiling) Arre Freddy, tum yahan, iss waqt?

Freddy sir - (tense) Sir... aapse zaruri baat karni thi sir!

Daya sir - (growing serious) Accha? Kyun, kya hua? Aao, andar aake batao.

He leads Freddy sir into the house. The latter takes a single look at his dining table and gasps in shock. Daya sir is obviously surprised as there's nothing remarkable on the table.

Daya sir - Arre, kya hua Freddy? Kya hai wahan?

Freddy sir - Sir... aapne kahin woh fruit juice toh nahin piya?

Daya sir - (suspicious) Abhi nahin, par peene jaa raha tha. Kyu, kya...?

Freddy sir - (gasps) Sir! Thank God main time par aa gaya! Warna pata nahin kya ho jaata! Sir, uss juice mein zeher hai sir!

Daya sir - (shocked) Kya?!?!

Freddy sir - Haan sir! Ye zeher Tropicana ki factories mein milaya jaa raha hai aur...

Daya sir - (realizing) Ek minute... ek minute. Kya kaha?

Freddy sir - Tropicana factories mein sir! Dr. Ghanchakkar badla le raha hai Tropicana se kyunki unhone uski special Fruity Booty flavour ko accept nahin kiya! Isliye usne saare juice mein aisa chemical mila diya hai ki peene waala ek mutant banana ban jaayega!

Daya sir remains quiet for a while, then sighs and puts a hand on Freddy sir's shoulders as he leads him to the dining table.

Daya sir - Yaar Freddy, idhar aao zara, baitho mere saath.

Freddy sir - (still in a shock) Aise kaise sir??? Aap nahin jaante, aaj shaam ko Nikhil aur Pankaj woh juice peekar bade-bade kele ban gaye! Abhi unhe horticultural department mein preservatives ke saath rakha gaya hai...

Daya sir - (sighing) Freddy, jaanta hoon apne schedule mein bada pressure hai, par yaar jab director "CUT!" bole toh asli duniya mein waapas aa jao!

Freddy sir - Huh? Sir...

Daya sir - Nikhil aur Pankaj theek hain... maine khud hi unke banana costumes order karwaaye the. Aur sirf woh hi nahin, agle episode mein hum sab log mutant bananas honge, aur Dr. Salunkhe ke antidote invent karne tak waise hi case solve bhi karenge. Bhool gaye Singh sir kya bole the aaj subah?

Freddy sir - (remembering) Oh, haan! Sorry sir, main toh bhool hi gaya tha...

Daya sir - Koi baat nahin Freddy, hum sab ka kuch aisa hi haal hai. Ye sab daanav-daitya waale episodes karne ke baad reel aur real ke beech difference hi nahin dikhta!

Daya sir's phone rings and he attends to it.

Daya sir - Hello... oh, good evening sir! Accha... issi waqt? OK sir... hum aate hain. (To Freddy sir) ACP sir ne turant bureau aane ko kaha hai. Chalo.


Duo and Freddy sir arrive at the bureau to see ACP sir looking unusually somber. Duo exchange meaningful glances, and all three of them approach him.

Daya sir - Good evening, sir. Kya hua? Aap pareshaan lag rahe hain?

ACP sir - Haan Daya. Ek khabar hai... ab buri hai ya acchi, khud hi sun lo. Abhi thodi der pehle Singh sir ka phone aaya tha.

Duo and Freddy sir wonder what new fantasy stunt is in store for them now.

Abhijeet sir - Kya kaha unhone, sir?

ACP sir - Plans thode change ho gaye. Suna hai Scottish Airlines ke tickets 80% kam ho gaye hain ek hafte ke liye, isliye hum logon ko Scotland mein ek special episode shoot karna hai.

Duo and Freddy sir - KYA??

Daya sir - Kaisa episode, sir?

ACP sir - (sighing after a brief pause) "Giraftaar Loch Ness Monster." Monster pe khoon ka ilzaam lagta hai aur humein usse begunaah saabit karna hai.

There's pin-drop silence in the bureau for 2 minutes.

Abhijeet sir - Loch Ness Monster? (chuckling) Ye... ye mazaak hai na, sir?

He fruitlessly checks the calendar to see if it's April Fool's Day.

ACP sir - Kaash mazaak hota Abhijeet. Par ye dekho, Tingu baba ki dukaan se Loch Ness Monster ka costume bhi order karwa diya hai.

He points to the corner where a giant deflated rubber doll of Barney the Dinosaur is kept.

Freddy sir - Par sir, seriously, Loch Ness Monster? Hum log toh Mumbai CID...

ACP sir - Ab kaun samjhaaye unhe, Freddy. Channel waalon ke orders hain! Suna hai iske baad Salunkhe ek time machine invent karega aur hum sab long Pliocene era mein chale jaayenge. Wahan aadi-manav murder case investigate karenge.

Everybody is stunned.

Abhijeet sir - (desperately) Matlab sir, ho sakta hai woh Fruit special cancel ho jaaye?

ACP sir - (sighing) Nahin, apna "CID Phal-Phool Rahasya" series World Fruit Day par broadcast hoga. Aur haan, Singh sir bole sirf bananas rakhenge toh boring hoga. Ye dekho list, tum sab ko kya-kya mutant fruit banna hai. Costumes order kar di hain.

They see the list:

ACP - Blackberry
Abhijeet - Apple
Daya - Mango
Freddy - Orange
Purvi - Grapes
Rajat - Plum
Sachin - Cherry
Shreya - Strawberry
Dr. Tarika - Pear
Nikhil - Watermelon
Pankaj - Pineapple

...and are left speechless.

ACP sir - Chalo ab tayyari shuru kar do! Agle hafte Scotland ke daldal mein hi camping karni hai.

He dismisses them. They don't hear him out of shock for two minutes until he's forced to shout and convey his message. They gradually leave, still stunned.


As Daya sir starts getting into his car, Abhijeet sir approaches him.

Abhijeet sir - Yaar Daya, kya hai ye? Jungle mein darinda maan liya, zombies maan liye, haathi ke size ka bhediya maan liya, jungle mein Jhingalala Hulu bhi kar liya... par Loch Ness Monster? Aur woh bhi Barney the Dinosaur? Aur phir sab ko aalu-tamatar bana denge??

Daya sir - (slyly) Boss, tumhara hi toh dialogue tha, karna padta hai!

Abhijeet sir - (with a small smile) Woh toh hai. Ab bhi kuch karna padega.

Daya sir - Accha? Woh kya?

Abhijeet sir - (sly smile) Mass bunking.

Daya sir - Huh??

Abhijeet sir - Hum sab ke tabiyat achaanak rahasyamai tareeke se kharaab ho jaayegi.  Singh sir se bol denge unn fruit costumes se allergy ki wajah se hua hai. Mauke ka faayda uthake issi pe episode bhi banwa denge, ek CID-Adaalat crossover. Hum log toh hospital mein lete hi shooting kar lenge, aur phir "recover" hone ke baad leave leke sab vacation pe chalte hain.

Daya sir - (grinning) Kya baat! Daad deni padegi, boss. Waise vacation kahan manayenge?

Abhijeet sir - Aapke ghar mein. Ready rakhna sab kuch humari mehman-nawazi karne ke liye.

Daya sir - (laughing) Jaisa aap kahein. Chalo, jaldi se Freddy ko milkar batao apne plan ke baare mein. Warna woh aur baaki sab kilt aur bagpipes leke Scotland jaane ki tayyari shuru kar denge.

Both of them laugh heartily.



Edited by DemonStar - 12 October 2013 at 1:00am

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Entry 5:

(This is my first attempt in WAS and after watching Abhijeet sir falling from the waterfall scene. I got really emotional and wrote this. Sorry if it is not meant to hurt anyone's feelings.)



At Daya's home Daya is having dinner and just the bell rings. Daya opens the door and it's Freddy.

Daya: Aree Freddy tum yahan aur woh bhi iss waqt? Aao Khana khaoge?

They come and sit at the dining table

Freddy: aree nahi sir, khana vana nahi chahiyee...

Daya: kya baat hain yaar, itne naraz kyun lag rahe ho...

Freddy: Sir aap ko pata hain naa iss baar team Satara jaa rahi hain

Daya: haan pata hain, par tumne toh chutti le rakhi hain naa tum naraz kyun ho? (phone rings) Hello, haan sir, okay amin aata hoon

Freddy: kya huva Sir?

Daya: ACP sir ka phone tha abhi bureau bulaya hain Chalo Freddy



In the bureau ACP sir, Abhijeet, Daya and Freddy present

Daya: baat kya hain sir?

ACP: tum logon ko toh pata hain naa... tumhe do din mein satara jaana hain

Daya: haan sir pata hain... Par huva kya hain?

ACP: Daya mujhe kuch khas sutron se pata chala hain ki Aditya ko wahan kisi jharne se girna padega!

Abhijeet, Daya, shocked

Daya: kya?

Abhijeet: par sir yeh toh

Freddy: Yeh toh zyatti hain sir...

Daya: haan sir agar Aditya ko kuch ho gaya toh...

ACP is speechless in some time he says

ACP: Iske protest mein... Main Salunkhe, Feddy aur baki sab iss sab ne iss series mein participate karne se inkaar kiya hain...

Daya: Main inn writers ko abhi Dekhta hoon sir... Jo chahenge who likhenge kya?



Daya moving forward towards his car

Abhijeet: Daya, ruko yaar meri baat toh suno...

Daya: Nai yaar tum yeh scene nahii karoge...

Abhijeet: scene likha jaa chukka hain sab tay ho gaya hain yaar... Main manage kar longa... Aur B.P sir ne kaha hain meri safety ka pura dhyaan rakenge.. don't worry..

Days is still angry. They both open the door of the car to sit

Abhijeet: (with a tensed expression) iss mein thoda khatra toh hain but I will manage... (smiles) Aur tum ho naa... Chalo ab hotel chalte hain... Freddy bata raha tha iss chakkar mein tumne khana bhi nahi khaya.. Aaj yeh dinner meri taraf se... They smile and sit in the car



Edited by Sonali. - 13 October 2013 at 7:08pm

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 7:18am | IP Logged
ENTRY 6
11.15 p.m.,
Restaurant parking

Daya : Maza aaya na Boss aaj restaurant mein khake? Kitna lajij khana tha..
Abhijeet : Haan bilkul lekin aur jyada maza ata agar bill tum pay karte toh.
Daya (with a naughty smile) : Boss, mere liye toh itne dino baad hum dono ko eksath waqt bitane ka mauqa mila yehi bohot hai.
Abhijeet : Hmm.. Tumhare wajah se hi aaj kal hum dono saath waqt nahi bita pate.
Daya (hurt) : Kya baat kar rahe ho Boss?
Abhijeet : Kyun sahi toh kahe raha hun.. Tum hi aaj kal 24 ghante Shreya aur Nikhil ko aapne saath lekar ghum te ho.
Daya : Abhijeet tum bhi? Kam se kam tum toh samjha karo. Main thodi unhe aapne saath leke ghumta hun. Wo dono hi humesha mera saath gum ke jaise chipke hue rahete hai.
Abhijeet (bursts into laugh and wink) : Kaun sa gum se chipke rahete hai? Fevicol ya Dendrite?
Daya : Are yaar yeh battese dikhana bandh karo.. Main toh tang aa gaya hun inse.Kabhi kabhi sochta hun ke tranfer leke kahin aur chala jaun.
Abhijeet : Haan yeh thik hai. Kardo application transfer ki uss DCP ke pass jaa kar.Kamse kam Shreya aur Nikhil se chutkara toh mil jayega tumhe.
Daya : Abhijeet, tum sach mein chahte ho ki tum logo ko chor ke? Ek minute ek minute..kahin tumhare dimag mein koi aur chakkar toh nahin chal raha hai?
Abhijeet : (let out a smirk) Aab tum sari baatein yahin khade hoke karoge kya? Ghar nahi jana. Chalo gadi mein baitho.
Both sit in the car and set off for their homes.
8.15 A.M.,
Next to next morning,
Daya's residence

The doorbell rings and Daya comes out after having a shower ready for going to bureau. He opens the door and finds his dear Freddy standing there with a bright face.
Freddy : Good morning Daya sir.
Daya : Are Freddy tum..itni subah subah. Aao ander aao.
Freddy : (bit hesitate and speak) Umm..wo kya haina Sir ki meri wife kal raat ko mayke gayi hai toh subah ka breakfast khud banane ka man nahi kar raha tha. Isliye socha ki..
Daya (laughing) : Freddy bas itni si baat. Tum bhi naa. Chalo baitho maine abhi khana shuru nahi ki hai.
Both take their chairs and start eating. Suddenly Daya's phone rings..he sees Abhijeet's name flashing on the screen
Daya : Good morning Boss..haan bolo..acha..kuch bataya..nahi, acha thik hai. Main ata hun. Freddy, haan wo mere sath hi hai..abhi aa rahe hai hum dono.
9.05 A.M.
CID Bureau

Daya and Freddy enter and see ACP sir and Abhijeet present there already with tense face. ACP sir is walking here and there agitatedly.
Daya : Kya hua Sir.. Abhijeet ne abhi abhi phone karke bataya aapne humlogo ko emergency taur par bulaya hai.
Abhijeet : Haan Sir aab toh bata dijiye. Daya aur Freddy bhi aa gaye hain.
Acp (agitatedly) : Pata nahi yeh DCP saab aapne aap ko samajhte kya hai. Jab jo marzi ayein karenge.
All get confused.
Freddy (in a worried tone) : Kyun sir aab kaunsi nayi musibat khari kar di hai unhone?
Acp (more agitatedly) : Kaal raat mujhe unka phone aaya tha yeh kah kar ki unhe Shreya aur Nikhil ne jo transfer application bheja tha wo unhone accept kar liya. Aur toh aur aaj subah subah hi uske written orders bhi bhej dia hai,wo dekho pada hai mere table pe.
Freddy gets totally confused. Here Duo just have a glance at each other and let out a smirk. Freddy : Magar sir DCP sir aisa kaise kar sakte hain achanak?
ACP : Wohi toh samajh mein nahi aa raha Freddy. DCP ka toh kahena hai ki dono ne khud unke office jake application di hai. Mujhe toh iss baat pe hairani ho rahi hai ki inndono mujhse ekbaar bhi baat nahin ki? Kuch toh gadbad hai(applying his own famous left hand rule)..jarur hai.
Abhijeet (clearing his throat) : Ahh..chodiye na sir iss baat ko. Chitrole ko toh aap jan tehi hai na..ek baar unhone koi commitment kar li toh khud ki bhi nahi sunte..
ACP (shocked) : Magar Abh..
Daya (trying badly to supress his joy) : Haan Sir jaane dijiye na. Waise bhi humari team toh aab army brigade ban chuka hai.Do officers kam ho jayenge toh kam karne mein hi asani hogi na.
ACP wants to say something to Duo giving a suspicious stare at them but at the moment the bureau phone rings. Freddy picks it up immediately : Hello CID Bureau..kahan pe..haan..humlog aate hai abhi and turns to ACP sir : Sir Bandra ke ek Hotel mein do foreign tourists ke laash mili hai. Humein abhi chalna hoga.
ACP : Hmm..thik hai.. Chalo chalte hai phir.
ACP and Freddy move towards the main door. Here Duo just hi-five and burst into laughter.
Daya : Thank you Boss, thank you so much. Jaan chuti meri aab toh.
Abhijeet : Kya yaar Daya. Dost hai hum tumhare. Tumhare liye itna nahi karenge toh kis ke liye karenge. Aur phir mujhe Shreya se baar baar rumal nikalne ke dialogue bhi nahi bolne padenge. Aur agar thanks bolna hi hai toh next time hotel ka bill tum de dena. (Daya gives a shy, cute smile)Aab chalo jaldi. Daya nods in smile and both leave for crime spot.

Edited by ANGELICEYES - 12 October 2013 at 7:53am

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged

ENTRY #: 7

CAP: One



FREDDIE ring the Bell continuously but Nothing happened, then He knocked the Door, Same Result... Lastly tried to Bang the Door but Nobody coming to Open the Door, He looked Back found DAYA Deary Quillas so taken out His Cell and Dialing His Number, Nobody Picking Up either He placed His Ears over Door so hearing a Ringing Tone from inside... He takes a Big Sigh and taken Out a KEY and pushed it inside and after a Click Voice, He was moving inside...

DAYA who was coming at Dinning Side looking for something and found FREDDIE in front of Him so Ask Confusingly...

DAYA: Arry FREDDIE, Tum... Yahan... Aur Ander Kesy aayey..?

FREDDIE (moving with him): DAYA Sir, Main Kub say Doorbell baja raha tha, phir Darwaza bhi Knock kiya aur Aap ko phone tou Continously kr raha tha.. aakhir mein Aap Kay Ghar ki KEY say Darwaza khola hay...

DAYA (Shock): DII... (confuse) Kaun sii DII... (before FREDDIE correcting Him, He moving His head with) acha acha wo Jo Meri aur ANSHA ki Shadi waly Epi mein theen... (relax) wesay wo aak Tum ko kesy yaad aa gayein.. haan...

FREDDIE (who sat on Dinning Chair with DAYA takes a Tense Sigh and said with Loud tone): DAYA Sir, DII Nahi KEY... (showing) Chabi... 

DAYA (angry after looking at KEY): Ye tou Mery Ghar ki Chabi hay FREDDIE, Tumharay pass kahan say aayii...?

FREDDIE (sad): Sir, Aap ye Buruea...

DAYA (cutting in shock): kya Tum Europe ja rahy ho... (rash) Kaam kaun karay ga.. Haan...

FREDDIE really Pitty on DAYA, Before He say anything, DAYA Cell started Ringing but He did not Bother... FREDDIE gives Him the Cell after finding that DAYA did not Hear the Ringer... DAYA picked...

DAYA: Hello... Kaun.?

ABHIJEET: ain, DAYA... Aby kya Mera Naam Nahi flash ho raha screen pr...

DAYA: bolo bhi, (irritate) kya Ghaan Ghaan kr rahy ho...

ABHIJEET Shocked after hearing this and cuts the Call, He was thinking that after Yesterday Shoot FREDDIE Complained Him about DAYA as.

FREDDIE: ABHIJEET Sir, DAYA Sir ko na kuch ho Gaya hay...?

ABHIJEET (funny tone): kya Phir koi Daura par Gaya hay Ganjy Honay Kay baad...

FREDDIE: Sir, DAYA Sir ko Sunai Nahi day raha.

ABHIJEET look at Him in Shock either at that moment He pulled FREDDE Leg or telling Him that might be DAYA playing any Prank with Him but after dealing the Recent Moment, He was in Shock... He instantly SMSed FREDDIE to bring DAYA with Him at Bureau while He was telling all to ACP Sir in Call with Tension...

CAP: Two



ACP Sir Strolling In Anger before DAYA and FREDDIE arrival... He expelled out his Anger regarding DAYA as...

ACP (harsh): Mujhy tou Pehlay hee say Fikr thi... kuch na kuch tou Bura hoga DAYA kay sath... Ufff... Becharay ki Jaan Aik Musibat say Nikalti nahi kay Dusri Sar pr Khari...

ABHIJEET: haan Sir., Itni Mushkilun say tou Usy AC DUCT PHOBIA say bahar nikala tha... Poori Garmi ka Season jahan AC DUCT dekhata, Bha Bha kr kay rona shroo kr deta... Phir RISHIKESH mein DHENCHU ko Apnay Locket ka Aadha Hissa tour kr Pehna diya aur kehnay laga ye Mera BHAI hay... Bachpan mein RISHEKESH mein Ganga kinay Kho gaya tha... abhi us Tension say Nikla Nahi tha kay... ISHQ WALY LOVE nay tou Becharay tou Bawla hee bana diya...

ACP (tense): haan aur is LOST ISLAND waly Epi nay tou bacha Kuch sub Cheen liya... kal JHINGA LALA HUM HUM kr raha tha...

ABHIJEET (tense tone): aur Sir, Kal kay Shoot kay baad tou Mujhy Gari say bhi Uterny Nhai day raha tha kay , Hath pakr kay bolnay laga... Tujhy Main chorun ga nahi...

ACP (after a second): agar FREDDIE Saheh keh raha hay ABHIJEET tou DAYA ko DR kay Pass lay jana Zaruri hay...

ABHIJEET: Jee Sir, warna tou...

FREDDIE with Difficulty taking DAYA to Bureau Where ACP Sir and ABHIJEET already Presented and in Tension... DAYA stand with FREDDIE and ABHIJEET glanced towards ACP Sir and initiated...

ABHIJEET: Sir, Aap khud batayein, sub ko Malum hay Kay Mujhy Height Phobia hay... Magar Mujhy hee Gira diya... Kya ye Scene RAJAT ya SACHIN Nahi kr Sakta tha..?

ACP: phir Un ki TRP kesay barhti ABHIJEET... Ye Log Na Humein Pagal bana kr Chorein gay...

ABHIJEET: Wohi tou Sir agar DAYA Nahi hota (looking at DAYA keenly but found nothing, look at ACP again in tension and completed His sentence) tou Mera Bachna tou Mushkil... (suddenly in Emotional tone) hain na DAYA, agar Tu Nahi...

ACP Turn and found DAYA did not Respond, All really in Tension, ACP and ABHIJEET discussed that before DAYA and FREDDIE arrival that they will not ask this to DAYA or about any Problem in Direct contact because it Hurts Him so just in Discussing, Keenly Observe Him and trying to find any Problem and if Yes, take Him Immediate to Doctor...

ACP: DAYA...

DAYA did not Respond again so FREDDIE Jerked Him who comes in Rash with...

DAYA: kya hua FREDDIE (to ACP) Jee Sir, Kahyey... (briefing) Sorry Sir, aany mein kuch Der ho gayii... Aik tou Ye FREDDIE na, bolnay laga DAYA Sir, pehlay Shirt badal lein... phir kehna laga kay Mochein Katwa kay aur Baal barha kr chalyey... itna Time bhi laga diya Saloon mein... itni Mushkil say Kuch Dhang ki Wig mili hay (to ABHIJEET) kyun Boss, lug Nhai raha na kay Main Wig pehna hua hun...

ACP and ABHIJEET exchanged Glance and ACP Nod in Positive, ABHIJEET taken Out DAYA for Immediate Check up...

CAP: Three



ABHIJEET trying to Open Car Door and DAYA open His Mouth in Ordering Tone...

DAYA: TAJ...

ABHIJEET Stunned, He looked at DAYA whose Eyes started Sparkling so trying to Hit Him but DAYA saved Himself after changing His Position... ABHIJEET Rash...

ABHIJEET (rash): Sahab nay Acha Drama Khela ... Behray Honay Ka... aur phir GAJNI ban kr aa gaya aur Mochein bhi... ain...

DAYA: jub Do Larkiyaan Tumharay Kaan Kay pass  itni Zor Zor say Ceekhein gi na tou Malum ho jayey ga... aur Wig utar dii hay, aur Mochein (wink) jaali...

ABHIJEET: Bako Nahi... Wesay kiya kyun...?

DAYA: Hum Next Series mein EPI mein Nahi Hun gay...

ABHIJEET (inquire tone): Hum Matlab...

DAYA (smiles): ab Main aur Tum alug alug thori hain Boss...

ABHIJEET: acha, wahan Forum mein tou GD nay wabal machwa diya hay... Us Ka tou khayal hay Kay Hum mein Dosti bhi Nahi hay...

DAYA (harsh): choro, Bekaar mein bak bak karti hay... Mujh say Narazgi hay na... Badnaam karti phir Rahi hay...

ABHIJEET (shock): ain ... Mujhy kyun...

DAYA: Us ki TRP Tactice hay Kay Badnaam na hon gay tou kya naam na ho ga... Dekho EK Comment say Forum mein DUO ko Back Karwa diya...   

ABHIJEET: hmm.. Aur Hum Next Series mein kyun Nahi hon gay..?

DAYA: Shart lagi hay.?

ABHIJEET: kis pr.?

DAYA: Kaun Bany Ka Acha Cook...

ABHIJEE (start Laughing with): Ohhh acha... Chh.. Chh... Hotel wala Order Nahi lay raha hoga... hain na...

DAYA (embarrass): Jee Nahi, aur Tum na... Bekaar kay Rumors Na phailao... Main nay bola hay na Main sub ko Apnay Ghar bula kr Khud Khana bana kr Khilaon ga ...

ABHIJEET (tease): magar is Dawat mein Biryani Ka Zikr kahein Nahi tha... aur Shahab Kay Liyey tou MAGGIE bhi Acha Khana hoti hay...

DAYA (Embarrass with): kya Boss...

ABHIEET: Wesay Shart lagi kya hay..?

DAYA : Usy Meri Blue Bhangaar Shirt aur Grey Joggers Chahayey...

ABHIJEET: Ain... Acha chal Blue Bhangar Shirt tou Samjh aati hay Kay WO Khud Pehan lay gi, Pr Joggers... (confuse) Us Ka Kya...

DAYA (angry): Kirayey pr chalyey gi aur...

ABHIJEET: haahaahah, Nice Idea aur ye AUR kya hay..?

DAYA: Meray Hair Stylist say Meray Baal Nikalwa Liyey hain... Hr Rent Kay sath 4 Baal ka Free Voucher bhi Customer ko milay ga...

ABHIJEET: hahahhaah... Zabaradst... Good... Wesay Teray Hairstylist Nay Teray Baal Rakkhy he kyun thy..?

DAYA (angry after sitting inside car): tou SALUNKHY Sir ki Wig mein kis Kay Baal Hr Saal lagtay hain...

ABHIJEET (look at Him in Shock and then Bursts Laugh with wink): jabhi Main kahun, Us Wig say Mujhy itna Apnapan kyun feel hota hay...

DAYA penetrates His Anger inside Accelerator while ABHIJEET still Laughing, Both Destination was Obviously TAJ...

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