Swaron OS- Repentance - Page 5

Originally posted by prateekdave7

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On a serious note its really hard to believe that it is ur first work..Kya kahu yar,Pehle chance me hi tumne toh readers ko hila ke rakh diya..😆Trully it was damm Aamazing work..The way u potrayed SwaRon as a characters,their emotions,their individual POV's,their love,their thoughts all of them was perfectly done..The flow of emotions,the intriguation of characters,their alternative POV's was really amazing to read..And that was beautifully n perfectly penned in the way of writing..Very well written..At the ending part,loved the lovely confession,their forgiveness and their promise to remain SwaRon forever..So,it was brilliant work..I just loved it and i really appreciate ur style,ur talent of writng..Well i am not watching D3 from since ages..So its little bit difficult for me to imagine SwaRon in this crucial state..But at the end..I just loved it..Padhne me maja aa gaya..Great work..

So now i am not gonna say boring line again ki do write more becoz i know u will surly do..😆So keep writing..

Thanx for PM and sorry for late..


Prateek

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Originally posted by varsh-mayur

WOWWW...y haven't i read this before?? I ts superbly awesome be it Sharon's pain her thought process...Swayam's concern...their longing for ech other,,just WOW...your simple words...wow you have ytouched my hear kashmi😊😊pls keep writing😊😊ek suggestion hai...make the font bold and cut it into shorter paragraphs...so that when you read it will be easy...its a comment i got when i wrote some story,...just passing to you😊😊thanks for PM...pls PM me further😊😊😊

Originally posted by swaron_pk

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Originally posted by Shilpa_SwaRon

Speechless 👏
It feels so awesome reading it again