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Hey guys thought I'd write a FF since I'm missing my ViSa so much right now Cry
Vikrant is burning inside but he is unable to understand why, he knows it's not his "ego" it is something bigger. When Sarita is with him, he is happy and he refuses to believe she loves Raj. But Raj was her first love. He knows Raj will not go away from her mind so soon. 
As he is sitting by the bar, his old college friend Mehak bumps into him. Vikrant is always very social and nice, he gives a big hug to her. Much to his surprise , Sarita looks amazed rather shocked from the opposite side of the bar. 
Seeing her shocked expression, vikrant decides to give her a taste of her own medicine . He whispers to mahek's ear that they will be really touchy to make his wife jealous. Mahek being the good friend agrees. 
Now vikrant is gripping her by the waist. He has a huge fake grin on his face. 
Sarita is annoyed , very annoyed. She doesn't care if vikrant is with a girl or 10 girls . It's his life and she knows it was a deal marriage. But she has to admit she doesn't like this closeness with this girl. This girl doesn't even look decent, she wore a skin tight dress with more than half of her body exposed. But it's okay, she knows vikrant likes such girls. She is happy that abhi has gone to bed , if he saw what his superhero dad was doing he would be shattered. Suddenly. Sarita realizes she has tears in her eyes. She doesn't like how vikrant is taking to that girl, she hates that girl and she hates mr. Akdu more. 
Sarita doesn't take crap from people. She goes and introduces herself to mahek and grabs vikrant's arms. 
Sarita : hi, I am Sarita , his wife. 
Mahek : oh you are the lucky girl who got married to vikrant ? Lucky girl. 
Vikrant is shocked , he knew Sarita would be jealous but she actually bothered to come here and introduce herself. 
Mahek : vikrant I never thought you'd marry a boring woman , I mean I bet she never even touched alcohol in her life and she wears suits. Should have married me , I would gladly leave my husband. 
Vikrant pretends to hold her by the waist and says : it's never too late. 
Sarita is appalled. She expected her husband to says something in her defense. 
Sarita : actually I drink , I drink a lot. 
She drinks raw vodka and vikrant is shocked. 
Vikrant asks her to stop but she doesn't. 
She feels dizzy and vikrant drags her to her room. Sarita is drunk and she admits she loves him but he is always doubting him. It's been a year since they are married but he still doesn't understand her and she cries. She says vikrant married her for a deal but she knows he is a good guy at heart.
Hearing this vikrant is happy, and amazed and he is on cloud 9. Sarita tries to kiss him as he doesn't want to take advantage of her when she is drunk what if she changes her mind tomorrow.
Vikrant tells her he loves her too and kisses on her forehead. He asks her to sleep. 
She slowly sleeps and vikrant just hopes she means what he said.

What do you think will happen when Sarita wakes up? Will she admit her love when in senses ? 
Like this post if you enjoyed reading , and would want updates on this FF 



Edited by ilovedhanjanird - 29 September 2013 at 8:40pm

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it was really nicely written!..please continue soon :)

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Oh i love it ... Plz do continue ...

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wow its very nice update superb mindblowing plz do update soon plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz do pm me when u update next part plz

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Plz do continue ...

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amazing part cont soon

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gud one...continue soon..

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