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FF *Ishqzaade* Chapter 27 updated on page150*THREAD CLOSED*

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TongueHello to all bhai and bandhus here...
After watching the suside segment on SBS, i could not stop myself from writing my fiction on this track...if any mistakes...do correct me...as its my first one...

JALAL: - kya kaha tumne...jodha begum...mehel se gayab hai...esa kaise ho sakta hai...
Soldier:- Gustakhi maaf shenshah lekin esa hua hai...eh sainik se khud jodha begum ko pahadiyo ki taraf jate dekha hai...usne unhe rokne ki bahut koshis ki per wo nahi ruki...

(jalal remembers all the incidence that happened in the court)

Flashback:
Mainavati:- humne tumhe ese sanskar to na diye the jodha ke tum ek vidhwa stri ke samman per kichad uchalo..
Jodha:- humara vishwas kijiye maasa, humse jo hua unjane me hui, hum iske liye shamaprarthi hai..hum subke samne mahmanga se shama mangne ke liye upasthit hai...
BANDHIS;- haan rani sa, isme jodha ka koi dosh nahi, humne hi usse mehel ke baagiche me khelne ki zid ki thi...galti humari hai ...
Mainavati:- jo bhi ho...jaise bhi hua ho...parantu paap to hua hai jodha thaare se...aur iske liye hum tumhe dand bhi dege...kyuki jawaisa ne hume iski zimmedari di hai...
to sun jodha...aaj ke baad hum tumhara mukh kabhi dekhna nahi chahege...aajivan ab tujhe ye mankar jivan vyteet karna hoga ke teri maasa is duniya me nahi rahi...
(this was the biggest punishment ever for jodha...she felt like someone has snatched the whole world from her...she fell on her knees)
Jodha:- maasa...esa mat kahiye maasa...hume apne apradh ka bodh hai...aap hume mritudand de dijiye parantu esa mat kahiye...and she started crying loudly...
(seeing this JALAL got melt)
Jalal:- rani mainawati...hum jante hai jodha ke galti bahut badi hai...mgar hume bhi ab lgta hai ke jodha ne janboojh ker esa nahi kiya...aap ek baar fir sochiye ...(and he scold the daasis for their act of forcing jodha to play holi in the ground...and tell them to get lost)

Mainawati:- nahi jawaisaa...jodha is rajya ki maharani hai...use apne sasural ki maryada ka khayall rakhna chahiye tha...hum use kabhi shama nahi karege...humara nirnaya atal hai...and she goes from their witout listening anything...(i know, mainawati can't be so rude but i just want to show a valid reason for jodha commiting suside)...

<jodha stands up and goes from their looking devastated without saying anything...jalal just watches her going and can sense her pain...
FlashBack over.

Jalal: - hume laga hi tha ammijan ke jodha begum koi galat kadam na utha de...isse pahle ki der ho jaye...hume jana hoga...hum khud unhe wapas layege...

Rukkaiya: - aap itne pareshan kyu ho rahe hai jalal, wo itni ahem nahi ke aap uske liye apna kimti waqt zaaya kare...marne dijiye usne...aapko bhi bhi chutkara mil jayega us kambakht se...

JALAL:- Ruqqaiyaaa...(shouting)...apni had me rehna sikhiye...ek aurat hoker aap kisi dusri aurat ke bare me aap esa kaise bol sakti hai...hum jante hai ke apni walida se bichadne ka khauf kya hota hai aur jodha begum is waqt kis takleef se guzar rahi hai...aur hume achi taraf se ilm hai ke hume apna waqt kaha aur kaise bitana hai...aapki salah nahi maangi thi humne...
Clap

(i always want this when ruqqaiya talk bad about jodha)LOL
Ruqqaiya gets shocked as jalal was talking with her like that was a new experience for her...she gets angry and goes from their...jalal leaves from there to find jodha too...Wink

P recap:-jodha is riding horse in high speed...and jalal sees her and tries to stop her...and some of the intense scenes...

Hows it?? please leave comment...Big smile
i am ready for all the critisizm and juta chappal...and please forgive the writing mistakes...Hug
waiting for your feedbackSmile

Index: -
chapter1- page 1 (The above one)

chapter2- page4

chapter3- page6

chapter4-page9

chapter5- page13

chapter6-page 16

Chapter7 - page 19






Chapter 11:- page 39

Chapter 12:- page 42

Chapter 13:- page 46

Chapter 14:- page 60

Chapter 15:- page 67




Chapter 18:- page 84


Chapter 20:- page 99 *aKDHA SR*Heart


Chapter 22:- page 117

Chapter 23:- page 124

Chapter 24:- page 130

Chapter 25:- page 138

Chapter 26:- page 144

Chapter 27:- page 150

LINK TO THREAD 2:- 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3928859


Edited by Pallavvi - 04 April 2015 at 3:16am

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Originally posted by aanchal_c

kool,do continue soon.
updated...Smile
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Originally posted by SShreShthA

yup continue soon...
thanks for commenting...updatedSmile
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