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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoyolo

Radsss !Hug
IshtaHug
Me likeyyy! Big smileBig smileBig smile
I m sooo glad u do

Hahah when I read the concept, it immediatly caught my attention. 
That's the kind of stories I really really like.
Whenever I saw such relationships between the hero & the heroin on TV (movie/soap) I was always like : "Awww...Day Dreaming".
hi5 galBig smileWink
This kind of love-hate relationships, in thrillers, the two individuals being enemies but at the same time attracted to each other, knowing very well that they're both playing a game revolving around power and ambition but at the same time unable to deny what they feel for each other ... uuufff! *faints*
just wait and watch!! its gonna be one hell of a roller coaster ride I promiseTongueWink
I don't know why but I can so imagine my Armaan and Riddhima in this one!
errr. .no comments...
Thumbs up for the 1st chapter, loving the hint of mystery in the story! Keep it up darlinggg! :*
thank u thank uHug Heart

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NonComposMentis

Radsy!! Hug
kiddooHug
I'm liking how this has started.
The mysterious death of a top Hollywood actress, interesting!
This was short, Radsy. :/
Make the next one longer!! :O
this was just a base girlie dont worry its gonna be a long chap 2

Anyway, back to chapter 1.
I like it.
i really, really like it.
It opens with a bang, seedhe plunging one into the events.
And the two leads seem interesting too! :D
The rule-breaker guy and the sassy lady! 
Niice! ;)
u are so gonna enjoy the journey ahead Kiddo mark my word on thatWinkWink

Update soon, okay? :)
Sorry for the late reply!
yes I willBig smile
Love always,
Mugs.


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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 11:52pm | IP Logged

Dan han, nothing can be impossible for this one.. urm to soon to say that.. will wait until he meets Rose.Tongue

And Rose, poor she.. but its her job... I was wondering if there is a twist like umm  I'll PM u thatWink

Plz check my previous comment..have unreserved it.Embarrassed

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3747787&PID=92737455&#p92737455

And that was a fine write.. interesting again..Clap

Keep writing moreStar

Thanks for the PMHug

Love & Regards
Sia


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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sankalp_prapti

Say it my terrible lazy or busy... I,..umm kick me oh yeh you can do that.!LOL

Sorry for the late!Ouch
no probs BabeTongue
The into was super dhansu.. oh my, if I should put anyone to envision these characters.. I'd put the BEST, as the concept itself!Star
whooaaa!!! now thats something!!
So far super good.. love the strong n self reliant woman.
does the woman remind u of someone??WinkWinkTongue
Thanks for the PM and the patience to waitTongue
Keep writing ...its interesting indeed.
yaaa sure will update soonBig smileBig smile
Love & Regards
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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sankalp_prapti


Dan han, nothing can be impossible for this one.. urm to soon to say that.. will wait until he meets Rose.Tongue
lol...thats the idea to make ppl curious abt their 1st encounterWink
And Rose, poor she.. but its her job... I was wondering if there is a twist like umm  I'll PM u thatWink
sure m waitingWinkWink
Plz check my previous comment..have unreserved it.Embarrassed

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3747787&PID=92737455&#p92737455
already checked and commentedTongue
And that was a fine write.. interesting again..Clap
thanks a ton honTongue
Keep writing moreStar
sure thingWink
Thanks for the PMHug
anytymHugHug
Love & Regards
Sia

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Radsy Hug
this was like OMG !!!!!!
totally what i expected form you A Strong writing and a fantastic storyline
Haven't even read 1st chapter and i guess i am already crawling in dan and rose ship
Damn both are strong willed , confident , competetive , ambitious !!!!
ohh i am soo gonna love this , Amazing 

chapter 1

What an amazing Kick-start already a murder case LOL
oh both dan and rose gonna be involved in it
i am expecting some amazing action scenes in further episodes
the way you wrote the whole thing was just soo increasing my curiousity
and you ofcourse know how much i love the spy thriller/love stories <33
lolz why do i have a feeling that rose gonna make dan's life a roller coaster ride ;) 
haha we will see

Radsy i soo regret commenting before
this piece is awesome !!!
i am soo gonna wait for next chappy
love ya :*


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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 10:26am | IP Logged
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Radsy Hug
this was like OMG !!!!!!
totally what i expected form you A Strong writing and a fantastic storyline
Haven't even read 1st chapter and i guess i am already crawling in dan and rose ship
Damn both are strong willed , confident , competetive , ambitious !!!!
ohh i am soo gonna love this , Amazing 

chapter 1

What an amazing Kick-start already a murder case LOL
oh both dan and rose gonna be involved in it
i am expecting some amazing action scenes in further episodes
the way you wrote the whole thing was just soo increasing my curiousity
and you ofcourse know how much i love the spy thriller/love stories <33
lolz why do i have a feeling that rose gonna make dan's life a roller coaster ride ;) 
haha we will see
dont worry loads of masala coming up..trust me u'd love Dan-Rose...they are fireworks togetherWinkWink
Radsy i soo regret commenting before
this piece is awesome !!!
i am soo gonna wait for next chappy
love ya :*

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 Chapter 2
 Destination...".Chaotic"
I switched on my TV and wasn't disappointed one bit , the news was spreading like Fire..I couldn't help but smirk when I saw the Infamous Nicky Benedict all over the place , at the same time I hated absolutely everyone for "Faking it" vouching for her goodness...making her look like some Warrior Princess..she was none of that..she was Shallow with nothing except that oh so pretty face...her death was justified in every way...whether people admit it or not!!
Who Am I you ask??
well for the time being u can call me " the Dark Prince"
sounds a bit Cliche? so be it..I don't care...just know one thing I strive for justice and achieve it too in my own twisted way
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Time is of great value I hurdled my team in and briefed them of the situation..they were all co-operative I asked my friend and partner Zach to take over DC and headed towards the aerodrome , a Duffel bag in my hand...I m usually traveling all the time so my essentials are usually already packed..."things are moving..moving very fast here" echoed in my mind as I boarded my plane and read the various paper cuttings and other notes I had jotted down so far regarding Nicky Case  as I took my seat..no one had seemed to occupy my adjacent seat yet, much to my relief I didnt want any distraction and that is when She came in,all the heads turned . I have to admit she was prettier than what she looked on tv...The Ace Journalist Rosaline Bradford...but I so didn't want her to sit next to me I rather wanted to concentrate on my work at hand.Plus the girl had the guts to give some nasty comments about me in an so called Page 3 party held in honor of a Freak teenagers are crazy abt these days some new teenage pop singer I was there only because my team had  been recruited for safeguarding the brat by his concerned parents
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It seemed to be a typically bad day for me I had to rush out as soon as possible...I just had the time to grab my already packed bag and leave and when I say say it was bad I really mean it, half way through I broke my sandal and I am supposed to be a public figure of sorts coz at the end of the day everyone watches news on TV these days..it was so embarrassing to walk ,rather run barefoot with ur broken sandals in ur hands and a dozen heads turned towards you...I wanted to scream aloud..."Cant I have some privacy" but couldnt...I made my way to the aerodrome and realized at Ihad almost missed the flight I ran like crazy only to realize that I was sharing my seat with the Hot Shot Dan - The PI I had so conveniently bashed just last week...What a start!!!


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