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Originally posted by joshyalbinaAlBz

Woah weird combo! am in lov wid d dis combo. .it wil treat to read aftr al diz cums frm ur mind nah. . .
GR8 yea. . Big smile

I m glad u liked the conceptBig smile

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Loved it Radsy...
The prologue is really interesting., eagerly waiting for the first part...Smile

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Originally posted by sajan_kisha

Loved it Radsy...
I m glad u doBig smile
The prologue is really interesting., eagerly waiting for the first part...Smile
will update right nowBig smile

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Chapter 1
The "It" Case

"Nicky Benedict. . the Hot Shot Hollywood Actress found Dead. ..Fans and the Industry equally  in Shock"
The Headlines/ breaking news/ whatever was spreading like a forest fire.
The news papers and tv channels were full of it, no one knew what of make of it.
No one knew anything for certain. Was is a Murder???
was it suicide??
what the hell was going on?? Why her??
"Nicky Benedict was considered the best of best!!
She had a reputation of not only being a great Actor but also a great human being..
All her friends swore she was.  .always the 1 st one to sign up for charity..
Working with NGOs for the betterment of orphans and Children in need
Her sudden demise obviously shook the whole world!!!
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I was sitting and sipping my morning black coffee when I heard the "NEWS" and was naturally attracted to it like a magnet,the Detective in me wanted to know minutest of details of the "Tragedy" . My 1st instinct was to board the 1 st flight to LA , reach "Hollywood" and spring into action!!
Easier said than done. .  .obviously it was gonna be a "high profile case" kept under wraps and secrecy . .everyone would be tight lipped and of course I was no longer in the "Inner Circle" . . I f u dont know what I m talking about then lets just say I m no longer an official cop , FBI etc. . I was though, a few years back, but I never liked the whole system, it was too much flawed and had too many rules!! I guess , the fact that I m quite an independent guy with a certain sets of principals and my own mindset n methods, that led me to leave the forces and start my own Private Eye, my reputation had always been great and thankfully it never deteriorated , rather went places when I started my own PI office down town , here in Washington DC .
Needless to say I have my own "inside sources" to keep me updated abt the various happenning and I called one of of them right after collecting and reading anything and everything related to Nicky Death Case, an old friend of mine John Goldsman answered on the 1st ring itself indicating 1 thing for sure, this was the "It Case" ,thats the term we all used for the " Highest Priority Case" we dealt with in the forces!!
"Dan, its a roller coaster ride out here.  .we all are definitely moving, and moving fast. . its a hell lot of' bloody ' business " he was quick and precise.
So its a murder case alright not that I doubted it one bit. I called my Secretary and asked him to call everyone for an emergency meeting, oh by the way did I forget to mention I own my own PI company.  . " The Delvers"
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I had just returned from my sister's place, had taken a well deserved break after ages,it was a relaxing weekend in Florida with Cindy, my elder sister and Tom and Betty my cute little Nephew and niece respectively. . I've always loved them and same is the case with them , they love and Adore their Aunt Rose, never in my wildest dreams did I imagine that I'd land up in a chaotic circle as soon as I reach back home!!
Why did Nicky Benedict have to die today Of all the days, I couldn't help cursing under my breath, as my boss literally barked on the phone that I was immediately needed in Hollywood to cover an exclusive for the Investigation of  " Nicky Case", wow such a warm welcome , nothing could have been better than this, I suddenly felt Sick , really sick coz I knew the next few days are gonna be Hell.  .why did I choose to come back so soon..why did this have to happen todays.  .My head was spinning like crazy..I booked the 1st Flight , oh great I didnt have to bother about unpacking too!!! I sighed loudly!!
Switched on the TV and caught up with the latest happenings.  .Cops were all over the place , I could see uniformed Cops from in and around hollywood, even FBI and what not ,obviously this was a Huge thing and I was definitely gonna be a part of it even If I'd have to break a few rules!! I needed exclusives and details no other Media ppl had yet...thats what I'd been trained for, that What I specialized in!!


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Rads awesome chapter.
A Murder n she want to know who did this.
Waiting for next chapter.
Waiting to see how much they are ambitious Embarrassed

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Originally posted by krazy4KD

Rads awesome chapter.
A Murder n she want to know who did this.
Waiting for next chapter.
Waiting to see how much they are ambitious Embarrassed

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m glad u doEmbarrassed

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Res!
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Radsy!! Glad to see you writing again girlie. ;)
I missed your work. Hug
First of all, loved the preview. I love thriller and action romances. Especially the bad girl meets bad boy type. Huge fan of those types of stories so it is a delight to read for me!
Now, coming to the part,
Dan is the bad guy huh? Rule breaker, typical bad boy. He even left the FBI because he couldn't follow rules.
I respect that he's a guy with high principles and his own set of rules, he should definitely not bend down in the near future. I admire these kind of 'I-Don't-Give-A-Shit' characters so I don't want that to change about him.
Can't wait for the guy to get on the crime scene. Waiting to see him in business mode!
Coming to Rose, two completely different personalities she herself has. I'm excited to know what exactly she works as. 
These two characters are so similar, both rebels and both self-confident people.
I can't wait to read their clashes and how these two accept the other!
Hope this comment made sense. :)
Continue soon!
Love,
Ananya. :)


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