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ragaya

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
hi dears,

am a big fan of ArShi FFs but have never written one. phir lagaa, apne AKA ka ek FF likhoon. It may all be a big flop in the end but tell me how it is...
This is a story that starts when Amit and Amita are in college. Amit is in his third year and Amita in her first year. Do they study in the same college? Do they bump into each other? Do the nerdy Amit and bubbly Amita get along? Keep reading to find out...

Guys, I will need someone to collaborate with me on this story. To provide their viewpoint and take the story in a mutual direction, to make it all colorful with photos, etc. ( I am very bad at that) So, please PM me if you can be so kind as to collaborate with this naacheezSmile

Prologue:
"Amita...Amita!Ab chalo bhi! College ka first day hai aur tu aaj bhi late hai. Tera na kuch nahi ho sakta" Preeti chided Amita who was barely listening as she rushed around trying to match accessories to her peach kurta.
"Kya, Preeti! Aaj college ka first day hai. Thoda toh dress up karna padega na. First impression toh sahi hona chaahiye. Achha sun, yeh red bangles theek rahengi ya yeh silver bracelet is dress ke saath?"
Before Preeti could respond, Aarti piped in,"Oye hoye, kaafi taiyariyaan ho rahi hain, Amita Patel? First impression kis pe daalna hai tujhe? Professors pe ya kisi cute senior pe?" she winked.
Preeti was flabbergasted! "Aarti, tu kaisi baatein kar rahi hai! Uncle, Aunty ya Atul bhai ne sun liya toh Amita pe curfew lagaa denge. College bhi nahi jaane denge!"
Amita, finally deciding to go with the silver bracelet turned around and responded, "Arre Atul kya mujhpe curfew lagaayega. Woh toh khud Kaajal ko college drop karne aadhe ghante pehle hi nikal gaya" She giggled.
"Oho!" Jigna exclaimed,"Yahaan tum logon ke chakkar mein main Himanshu se milne late ho jaaungi. Ab chalo bhi!"


At Shah mansion...
"Mummy! Mummy! Meri Economics ki project file kahaan hai? Maine kitni baar kahaa hai ki jab main room mein nahi hoon toh kisi ko mere room mein aane mat dena!" Amit was yelling from his room
"Aa rahi hoon" Phalguni responded,"Maine hi kal sabhi rooms mein bikhre files study mein rakhwaaye. Yeh lo, yeh blue waali file hi hai na?"
"Thank you, Mummy!" Amit hugged Phalguni and though she was annoyed with Amit for yelling, she could not help but smile. "Ab jaa, tujhe college ke liye der nahi ho rahi? First year mein toh aadhe ghante pehle hi jaata tha?"
"Arre poochho mat, Mummy! Yeh Batuk bhi na! Kabhi time pe nahi panhunchta!" retorted Amit looking at his watch.
"Galat! Batuk hamesha time pe hi aata hai!" exclaimed Batuk as he entered, "Aunty, kahaan hain aapke haath ki jilebiyaan and dhokla?"
Phalguni smiled and started to go to fetch them but Amit interrupted, "No, sir, aaj hum late ho chuke hain. Serves you right! Kal se dhokla-jilebi chaahiye toh time pe aaya kar. Ab chal jaldi. Jai Shri Krishna, Mummy!" He dragged the pouting Batuk out.


Did u like it? Do comment.

-ragaya Smile

Index
Note (pg 4)
Chapter 1 (pg 4) Pehli Mulaakaat hai ya Doosri Mulakaat hai?!
Note (pg 6)
Chapter 2 (pg 6) Chaandni Raatein
Chapter 3 (pg 7) Nayi Shuruaat, Naya Safar..nayi Takraar?
Note (pg 8)
Chapter 4 Mann mera bechain
Note(pg 11)
Chapter 5 Aaj na Chhodenge Tujhe!
Chapter 6A Khud ko kya samajhta hai
Chapter 6B Dheere dheere jiya ko bhayo re Saibo


Edited by ragaya - 21 December 2013 at 6:06am

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
Rags, wat a surprise! U didn't tell me u were planning this! :)

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 1:00am | IP Logged
hey ragas.. i liked it yaar.. saari character sketching ek dum perfect ki hai..amita ka ear rings match karna aur doosri taraf amit ka economics project file ki baat karna... Clap well done.. pls continue.. 

FF ki full form kya hai..?? 

and yaar, jab is FF mein romantic tadka daalna ho, tab muje batana.. wo shayad mai likh pauun... 

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Wow Great start really liked it ..
nice to see the the college  life of Amita and Amit..
Wating for your next part wo tho bahat interesting hoga 
A2 ka milna wow lovely...Big smile

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Loved the start..Good imagination...

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Wow starting is very interesting raga dear.Clap
Ff means dear.

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
WOW!!!! Ragaya Wat an imagination!!!... Muje bht bht accha accha laga... Jo character tmne kia Ek dam mast match h a2,k sath... Vry gud start...
waiting eagerly for ur next continuation...

loving it... agar romance ki jarurat h to Apni AMAN to hi na... wo rang me bhang milayegi...hihihi to aur maja aa jaega ...

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thanks for the compliment Urmi LOLLOL

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