I just loved the way u described how her respect and attraction for him had gradually changed to love and obsession along with the events associated with them . The life style she was provided was something which she hadnt ever dreamt of but at the same time she enjoyed his warmthness and affection without giving any hoots to the comforts and luxuries she had been bestowed with. She cherished every moment spent with him and treasure it as long standing memories.
Her observation of his moods and habits and her efforts in impressing him and at the same time unknowingly changing herself in this process was so relatable to a person who is in her adolescent/teenage.
His anger and her helplessness in making him understand her view point were written wonderfully. I just love the lines where u described that she was sure of only one thing now and that is him and his pain in seeing her cry for the first time and pleading her to stop and her reply was so touching.
Nani - Khushi's conversation was so endearing and her answers were so crisp and to the point thereby stressing her frame of mind to him and trying him to see sense. I just loved the last line and the line where she argues why she needs a better one if she has the best. Bang on
Sorry i am not able to quote those lines.
Emotional and a stirring the thoughts update and sorry for late unresing . Waiting for Wednesday
The banners are really good. Thank u Laavanyaji and Sarunfanatic Ji
Laavanyaji - U have really brought the essence of the story and the updates till now through this banner
and i just loved how u incorporated that bracelet in it. U have also put up some scenes there . Is this a hint to the forth coming updates Zehra ??
PS: I have some doubts. First how did Khushi land up in the brothel scene . Second , was she sexually abused there ?? Though i remember the doctor's and Lavanya's conversation at the hotel but still i am really unable to believe she wasn't abused at all as she was so beautiful enough . Sorry if i had misinterpreted. i am waiting for her past and the details about his love life to get unfolded.
Edited by arshifan91 - 23 September 2013 at 1:14pm