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*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love (Page 3)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
i loved this particular one.. it was just simple..and the hurt was expected.. however, the reasons are yet to be revealed..

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Oh Its getting extremely intersting.

















































good work...ClapClapClap

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Awesome :)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:20am | IP Logged
This was expected but wanna know more about his lovelies.khushi's pov with regard to arnav was very nice.awesome story.nice update

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Happy express.. Its all becuz of you that my study ruined brain works a littleWink

or else all these poems, discussions and reporting wudn't have been pssible!

But srsly, if i don't get along with engineering, News reporter would be my next option!

Now the update:

the thought of Arnav adopting Khushi never came into my mindShocked. You see, Single-minded focus on their Love story removes any such possibilities!

Khushi's feelings have been through all the stages of Love, and right now is at its peak called -obsession!
Understanding her feelings has been easy, because you have given quite an insight to her emotions!

'Arnav ' is for her, as Arshi is for IPK, one can't exist witout other!

Somehow, Khushi's well groomed feelings, don't put me to peace about her, i mean isn't it all maybe because he's been the guy who practically saved her and stood by her, was polite with her and brought everything like an Angel!?

Her feelings i don't doubt, never ji, just the depth of her feelings and devotion for him does!

Arthaat : something here seems unsettling to me! I guess, i'm going Mad, going overboar by working my negligent brain cells overtym!

Arnav's reaction was way calmer than i expected, because tis was all unexpected for him! And maybe because you didn't wrote his inner turmoil and thoughts! Angry.

Still seeing her cry, even i shock, brought him to his knees.
Something about his past, is left to tell! Surely! I can feel it..:P

his stiffness , his bluntness, was all a part of shock he received!



One more thing: Why Arnav never saId NO to her Ever?
I get it she was a kid and nan thinks its because of her hubby she is suffering, but is there more to this story!



Funny it reminds me of : Cheeni Kam, reffering to the age diffrnce!
I haven't seen the mvie though.



I guess Arnav would try and talk to her, he's seen intensity of her feelings in her eyes, but he's yet to see intensity of her resolution and depth of her feelings!



Won't he run away then? Taking her as a young infatuated girl? Thinking it might all go away with his absence?



P.S: oo daiyya ho kauno kissi bill maa to nahi chup gaya? Dikhat hi nahi! Apna badla lene to aaiye ke padi!

Edited by aashi12 - 22 September 2013 at 2:15pm
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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Aww? Can you express how one fell in love madly deeply insanely in any better way! Sweets wonderful!

How from one emotion it changed to another and eventually it was love!
and then how she cried! My god!n he couldn't take it a bit that she's crying! But you can't blame him, owing to the age gap he's bound to think as the love that she has for him isn't the love wala love!

But I'm sure she will makke him see sense!

Nk or mk no one other than Arnav, bas!

Cheers

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:26am | IP Logged
lvd it damn soo much

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Zehra, being late this time, I had just read part 3 of this SS & was abt to comment on it when updated chapter 4...now can I resist that? I'm just loving the way u r writing this story...Arnav's reaction to Khushi's wish was somewhat expected...but what I absolutely loved reading was how u wrote Khushi's gradual change in feelings towards Arnav & her realisation of the same...that part was wow...I'm really keen to c how this proceeds now & how u pen it down

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