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*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love (Page 137)

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Gosh it must be really hard for him the way shes behaving.

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Amazing..heart wrenchng update...
Each nd evry word u wrote abt the arshi emotions touchd my heart...nd the way u write always make me easier to visualize...nd feel it...u r a fabulous writer lazyji...:)

khushi ohh god this girl...cn't be able to imagne the depth of her feelngs fr arnav...
Watevr it may be..attractn, infatuatn,love,obssessn...her feelng is all abv of these...
Never thought she ever gnna askd smthng like dis...



"Khuda ek pal usse mera banade
itna chahte hum usse koi bata de
har pal dekhu sapne usi ke
na jaagu mujhe aisi neend sula de..."

Nd i cn feel arnav innr termoil...ofcourse he has his own reasn for nt resiprctng her love or marry her(hope in ur next update we going to knw the same)...
Nd jst by nt findng her in her room hw he searchd fr her..hw he panicd jst of a mare thought if she has dne smthng to herself..and all..clearly states he do hve feelng fr her...ab woh kis tarha ki hai kya hai aap hi bata sakte...
Wil be eagrly waitng fr arnav pov...:)

omg the last part left me intrigued dat whethr he really want to cmply her demand..???

Loved the update...:)

Edited by Asiyamajeed - 04 October 2013 at 4:21am

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Do update next soon...lazyji..:)

i knw current u r workng on Li...bt kya karey dil hai ke manta hi nai...:-P

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Next chapter, next thread Embarrassed 

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged
very interesting, intriguing update...well written...continue soon..Smile

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Superb Update...

Loved it to bits...

Continue Soon...Smile

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Awesome

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Read all the parts in a go!
So it goes like ki Khushi started developing feelings for arnav since day 1! Well its natural for teenage girls to have develop feelings for someone who is really nice & affectionate towards them! I loved the way you have given one chapter completely explaining her feelings! Her journey of falling in love with him! It was all so realisticSmile 
And arnav's behavior is Kinda justified. He cares for her like a family & he would've never expected her to fall for him! But behaving harshly with her would make things even more worse, then they already are! But I think arnav shouldn't have said that what she feels for him is mere 'infatuation'. Giving a tag to her feelings...hmm...!
And now comes a stage where she wants love from him...she wants him to make love to her! And since he can't see her so unhappy, he is ready to give her that too? Is he sure he is NOT in love with her?Shocked
Waiting to read his POVSmile

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