Ariya OS- To Phir Aao....... - Page 5

Posted: 10 years ago

😲😭 😭 😭

Goodness! This is so painful

I say never ever go to your love's wedding come what may Why did she go at all? Dear me!

Now she is gone.He will remain in pain forever.And the childhood friend bore the brunt of it all for no fault of hers😲

Very beautifully written.Emotions were captured very nicely.

Good job,Riya😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by riyasarkar007


kamino lobb u re...kitna kaam karwaoge mujhse? main bechari nanhi si jaan😭

me and mummy is going to post a funny os...keep waiting


hhahaha tu aur nanhi se jaan...!!🤣🤣
waiting waiting waiting waiting
Posted: 10 years ago
yar really emotional.. I cried reading it.. Loved it..
Posted: 10 years ago
uff...
what an os yaar...
I truly loved it...
it was so emotional nd senti...
u made me cry...
hats of to u..
I jus loved it...
Posted: 10 years ago
Really emitional 😭

Feeling pain in my little heart 😭

Posted: 10 years ago
awsm...itlitreally made me cry.
Arjun's PV nd all feelngs are perfectly written.
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by devildiva21


res😈
*edited*
kamini rulane ka pura intezam karke aayi hai...!!!!😭😡 i lobb u...!!!
haila devil ke ankhon mein ansu?

shit that was some os yar awesome...!!! 
too good.. and very emotional...!!! 😭 😭
fell like crying after reading this..
thank u😕

arjun's pov was so beautifully written...!!! 
thats true.. jab apka koi apna aap ko chod ke jaata hai.. tab uski value pta chalta hai.. wo kya lgta tha...!!!
felling so bad for him/... he doesn't know ki he loves her or not but he knows that she was the reason of his happiness,of him being alive...!!
fb was lovely...!!!!and a  very apt song 😳
haan i asked to ishu and she said use kahin to hogi woh song...it is more better😳

and the last part ... gosh😭 😭
loved the os...!!
superb...!!!
P.S. missing riya😭
why missing? i am still here😆








Originally posted by khemanisarita


wow
great os
love it


thank u




Originally posted by lizadavidmm


Na muni na...
ye padhna mere bas ki baat nahi hai😡
i am scared and shocked


Originally posted by rocking_gal


Can i kill you!!!!
you made me cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nooo!!!!
i hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YYY????
what the???? dont hate me u can lobb me😆


Originally posted by lizadavidmm


hatt!!!
kya likha hai ye????//
mere dil ar dimag ki  band baj gai
itna senti------------maine aadha hi padha hai ab tak
aur himmat nahi hai aage padhne ki😆
mat paro...thankx for comemnt


Originally posted by Mishti_k5


  Rj senti kab sai krna shuru ker diya 😭

It is wonderful,amazing,mind blowing dr

Me totally senti ho gae me had tears 😭

True yr impt.tab pata chalti jab vo aap k pass na ho 

👏👏Claps 4 u👏👏👏

Thanx 4 pm me
glad u liked it


Originally posted by Leki


God Ri what hv u done... Shit im crying!!!! I vl kill u Ri
u are always ready to lobb me...this time direct killing???

Originally posted by Payal_156


well i m crying after reading dis
one of my fav song
very well written
beautiful
amazing
lovely
thank u


Originally posted by zebbie0504


mere aakhon mein aasu aagaye while reading this.
sach mein,we realise the value of our near and dear one after we lose them...
😭
aww dont cry...thanks for commenting



Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by AnjuRish


like button nt working
sweetie u made me cry
aww thankx for commenting


Originally posted by Shivi1997


U make me cry 😭
so emotional
it was awsm
gr8
thnx dear 4 such a wonderful os
thnx 4 pm too
thankx for replying

Originally posted by Jaggu82


great to read and enjoyed a lot.
hanku

Originally posted by pinkerbell


super awesome and emotional update..
hated to see riya die ...

bt ur wrote it nicely
thank u


Originally posted by Aks13


OMG that's quite senti... 😭 😭

Wht happened to u??????

U made me cry!!!!!!

Arjun's POV was beautifully written...

Ri dead... 😭 😭

Yah its true that we realised worth of someone only whn thy left us alone...

Heart touching!!!!!!


senti atma entered my body and i wrote it😆 thankx for reply


Originally posted by Live-life


😭
Riii!!!! I didn't you could write something like this!! 
And yes bohot senti wala tha!!! 
I couldn't stop my self from crying!!! 
It was a great os!!! 
One of your best ones!! aND i LOVED the sonG!!!!! 
It just suited the situation very well!!! 😊
In the end I was literally crying like a baby!!! 
Couldn't help it!!! 😭
It's true...you don't realize someone's value until you lose them!! 
😭

But great job!!!!!!!!!
Way to go gurl!!!! 😆

Loved it!!! 👏i myself didnt know i could write smthing like this...it was supposed to be a trial😆

glad u liked it 


Originally posted by pihu_angad


very emotional..
thanku


Originally posted by prachi90


awsm...itlitreally made me cry.
Arjun's PV nd all feelngs are perfectly written.
thank u



Originally posted by hunny1993


Really emitional 😭

Feeling pain in my little heart 😭

aww dont cry...thankx for comment


Originally posted by aroojarain


uff...
what an os yaar...
I truly loved it...
it was so emotional nd senti...
u made me cry...
hats of to u..
I jus loved it...
glad u liked it



Originally posted by unishaz


yar really emotional.. I cried reading it.. Loved it..
thankx for reply



Originally posted by -Carrie-



😲😭 😭 😭

Goodness! This is so painful
everyone is saying same

I say never ever go to your love's wedding come what may Why did she go at all? Dear me!
love is blind...in this situation make her brainless too😆

Now she is gone.He will remain in pain forever.And the childhood friend bore the brunt of it all for no fault of hers😲
oh yeah that friend...i thought to wrote about her, but there would have been a 2nd part then, so skipped...sorry😛

Very beautifully written.Emotions were captured very nicely.

Good job,Riya😊    ahaan when the writer of the FF which i am following currently saying this, then i must have done liitle good😆 thank u
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Moumimon


toh eye rahi hamari rone ki wajah 😈

tyarrii assi hain😭
hahaha

UnRes*
kitna senti hain re riii😭
This is amazing yrr..loved it😭
I am missing Riya so much😭😭
baap re itne sare rone wale emos?


beautifully written arjun's pov😳
feeling so bad for him..my arru😭
flashback scene were awesome
arru???😆

Riya loved him so much😳
and Arjun too
but understand it later after loosing herself

Superb yrrr
Amazing.. lovely...


__moumi__

thank u momo




Originally posted by Jorja


Awesome fab amez os
thank u
Posted: 10 years ago
riya ur so bad u literally made me cry aisa koi karta h kya it was feeling as if d whole scenario was happng in frnt of my eyes really it was so heart touchng dat my eyes bcame red coz of cryng n now m feeling as if khass riya jinda hoti m missing her badly now :'(

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