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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:34am | IP Logged
hello evryone im writing my 1st SS on INSHI.it would consist f only 2-3 chapters.
Abhi tak koi title nahi socha hai to if anyone agar koi naam dhyan mein ho to pls do suggest.
N hope u all like it.agar na bhi aaye to bhi comment mein sach sach likhna dat wat u dont like n if any suggestions u wanna give u r most welcome.


Edited by designersaini - 08 September 2014 at 5:40am

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:39am | IP Logged


credit fr banner n title goes to PAULOMI

TERA MERA SAATH RAHE


This is d story f inshi.i hav moulded dis story
like i wanted as ila destroyed everything.
So bear wid it.dis story starts frm d leap.its a
leap f 5 years after d bt track.


Chapter-1


(mai jahan rahun,mai kahin bhi hoon...teri
yaaad saat hai)


a man sitting on d floor of his room holding
his beloved photo n staring at it as if
conveying his feelings to it.

(kahin to dil mein yaadon ki ek suli gadd jati
hai

kahin har ek tasveer bohot hi dhundali padd
jati hai
)

tears forming in his eyes blurring his vision

(koi nai duniya ke naye rango mein khush
rehta hai,
koi sab kuch paake bhi ye mann hi mann
kehta hai)


tears of drop fall from his eyes as he hugs
dat photo

(kehneko saath apne ek duniya chalti hai
par chupke is dil mein tanhai palti hai
bas yaad saath hai...teri yaad saath hai
)

tear r falling from his eyes on the photo
which he is holding.he hugged d photo tightly n
wept.

[dis person is none other than Rishi who is
holding his wife's photo i.e.,Indira,who is no
more
].

Jst then a small,cute 5-year old girl peep-in
the room 2 check out what his father is
doing.till den rishi wipes his tears as if he
knows dat his daughter is coming.that girl
wid her small steps slowly approach his
father who is facing opposite to her and she
calls-''boo...Papa''
Rishi- (acts as if he got scared at sudden
call) badmaash...papa ko dara diya.
Girl- (gigling)
rishi- achcha to ab hansi bhi aa rahi hai
papa ko dara ke
girl- sry papa...maine aapko daraya
rishi- aww...koi baat nahi.aur waise bhi mai
to mazaak kar raha tha.aap hanste hue
bohot cute lagte ho.papa apni nanhi pari se
kabhi gussa nahi hai
girl- sachi
rishi-hmm...
Girl- smiles...waise aap kya kar rahe the
rishi- wo..ab...k..kuch nahi.kuch bhi nahi kar
raha tha mai
girl- (looking at d photo of his mom in his
dad's hand n looking at him n in a sad tone
asked) mummy ki yaad aa rahi hai na
rishi- (nodding his head in a yes wid a sad
face)
girl- (to cheer up his dad's mood) papa
aapko pata hai mai kyun hans rahi thi aapko
dekhke kyonki jab aap darre the na to
aapne bohot funny face banaya tha
Rishi- achcha to mai tumhe joker lag raha
tha
girl- (giggling) haan (to escape d situation
she ran away from dere)
Rishi- ahana...ahana...ruko abhi batata hoon
aapko,bohot badmaash ho gaye ho aap (n a
smile appears on his face)

[dat cute girl's name is ahana,who is 5-years
old n is d daughter f none other den Rishi-
Indira.she is jst like her mother in looks but
all her traits r a xerox copy of her father.she
is a nanhi paro of Rishi)




Edited by designersaini - 02 December 2014 at 7:10am

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Oehoe finally..very gud very gud..shabaash..likho likho Thumbs Up

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Very nice seemaji..bhut acha h.. Clap Thumbs Up

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiksha050992

Oehoe finally..very gud very gud..shabaash..likho likho Thumbs Up
likh diya n ab true wala comment bhi de padhke.
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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiksha050992

Very nice seemaji..bhut acha h.. Clap Thumbs Up
haha...sachi mein bol rahi hai ya aweyein mujhe jhaad pe chadha rahihai.LOL.
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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
bahot mast hain di Big smile Hug
hum sachi comments hi denge

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ketaki19

bahot mast hain diBig smileHug
hum sachi comments hi denge

ok.thanks.
N title batao mujhe koi.ya phir aisehi rehne doon.
Naam daalne ke baad edit kiya maine.hehe...

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