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ye rastey hein pyaar ke..AK ..recontd!

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Posted: 15 August 2006 at 10:16pm | IP Logged

hi sweeties

i have decide to recontinue my this ff.....!

this is orinal ff...link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=118135

here are all parts of this fanfic ....!

YEH RASTEY HEIN PYAAR KAY

 

Aik dastan ya phir ik kahani….Angad or kripa ki. Do loog jo ik doosrey ko nahi jantey they . Angad jis ney kho diya tha kisi ko …….nahi janta tha kay koi or hai kahin is duniya main jo badal dey ga us ka nazarya , us ki zindagi or nai rahein khool dey ga zindagi ki…………..!

 

Zindagi ki rahoon main

Koi kuch khota hai

Koi kuch pata hai

Essa bhi mehsoos hota hai

Zindagi ruk si gye ho jessey

Magar phir bhi ik assra hai abhi jessey

Hai kahin koi humesha k liya tumhara

Jesey sagar ka nadya hai kinara

Bas dhoondney ki deer hai..

Dekho miljaye gye

Tum ko bhi  koi essa

Khoye hoi rahoon say hi

Nikaltey hein nai

RASTEY PYAAR KAY!

 

Main Characters:

Angad: A person who has lost his lovely wife Mishty a year befor. Whose life stop after her death….he is now like robot no feelings, no happiness, no tears, no motives….except business.

Kripa: A lovely girl young, energetic, love life want to live it in a special and meaningful way.

Mishty: No more in this world, she was wife of angad dead after three days of their married life.

 

PART:1

We see a guy in a hospital running wt a stretcher …..Then ward boys take a stretcher on which we see body of woman totally in blood …..took in O.T.Doctor coming towards O.T.

 

Guy:please doctor meri biwi ko bachalo please..

 

Dr.: MR.Angad relax we will ty our best please app bethya yahan

 

Angad: ji dr.

 

After an hour…………………

 

Dr:MR angad we are sorry…..hum mrs.mishty khanna ko nahi bacha sakey ….sorry!

 

Angad: scream …….MISHTY………………….

THEN SOMEONE  ALSO WAKE UP FROM HIS BED SCREAMING …….MISHTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

He is angad………….!

then we see a woman with a decent dresseing come in angad's room....give him glass of water pat his back.

 

Woman: angad betya kya howa ....kahin phir say to...

 

angad: kya karoon maa .....nahi bhool pata main mishty ko...

 

woman:angad beta kab tak....kab tak is terha raho gye ...tumey to bhadur ho na chahiya merey betey ho ....naina or dilp k betey ho tum!

 

angad: maa.........main koshish to kerta hoon na.........main kya karoon nahi hota mujh say

then he hugs naina.....his mother.

Will continue tomorrow.

 

PART:2

 

naina try to calm down angad who is crying like a baby. Dilip come in his room become sad when he see his only son crying in such a manner.

Angad is only son of dilip and naina . he lives in mumbai.dilip is industrialist and a business tycon. Angad had complete his MBA a year before. he got married with mishty but destiny is not always good as u want , so mishty died after only three days of their marriage. angad broked after her death. it seems as live stops for him , days passed a year have gone now but angad is at same position a difference was now he is very good business man, a person who was fun loving a year before now sees like mature person. he is only of 25 but reacts like a person of 40 years. no fun remain in angads life.

now a camera is taken to an other end of mumbai.(sorry i don know places) a beautiful house is shown ....then we see it focused on a woman ...doing some thing in kitchen...then some one come and hugs her from behind.

woman: kripa mujey pata hai ye tu hai

kripa: mamma u r very smart

woman: yes

kripa: ya off course after all mamma kis ki ho

a guy come over there .....

guy: meri

woman: shut up both of u ...tum dono ko lagta hai main smart hoon kyun k tumhari maa hoon

another elder age person come over there ...

person: sahi to keh rahey hein bachy gayatry.

woman: surya app nay hi in dono ko bigara hai ....yeh JOSH .......or ...KRIPA.... itney barey ho ker bhi bachey baney howey hein.

Suryaban is also idustrialist but was settled in dubai , a month back he shifted in india. Josh is elder son helping his father in business and kripa is younger one had complete Bachelours of business communication a month before, now she is trying to convince his father nad brother to let her practice before masters. but they want her to do [practice in another firm. Kripa is fun loving girl ,the main thing about her that SHE ALWAYS MAKE MISTAKES IN HER WORK. surya is dilip's friends , but after coming india naina , gayatry , dilip, surya josh and angad met several time but kripa never got chance.

kripa at dinning table....

kripa: papa

s: kya beta bolo

j: papa wo h boley gi jo ik haftey say bol rahi hai

s: or humara jawab bhi wo hi hoga jo pechley ik week say tum ko mil raha hai.

k: but main kiya karoon papa

s: mera pass ik idea hai ager tum chao to ...dilip k pass kaam kersakti ho kyun k abhi kal hi wo bataraha tha k angad ki assistant job chor chuki hai or usey is waqt ik assistant ki sakt zaroorat hai

j: wow papa is say achi baat kya hogi.

k: papa lakin main ney suna hai k wo bhoot strict hai

j: tumharey liya acha kripa tumhari internship achey say ho jaye gi ....dubai mey rah nahi paye to complete nahi ho saki ab acha boss miley ga to definately achi ho gi dear!

k: hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

gayatry interupts

g: chaliya ab to beti ka problem solve ho gya na ...to breakfast kerya ....

every one now busy in break fast. surya ban make call to dilip.

surya and dilip on phone

s; dilip kesa hai yaar

d:thik hoon tum sunao

s: maina bilkul theek thak

d: or suna kesey phone kiya

s: wo tu nay kaha tha k angad ko ik...

d: haan haan ...kyun

s: kripa ko practice kerni hai to main nay soocha k ...

d: arey to is may ijazaat leney ki kya baat hai bas tu kal bhej deta kripa beti ko main bata deta angad ko acha chalo theek hai us ko kal subha 9:00 bajey office bhej dena.

s: theek hai.

d: or suna

s: baqi sab theek hai main rakhta hoon phone abhi deer ho ri hai office k liya

d: chalo theek hai

s:bye

d: bye.

dilip who is also at dinning table along wt his small family inform angad:

d: angad

a: ji dad

d: beta wo surya uncle ki beti hai na kripa, wo tum ko kal as a assistant join kerey gi!]

a: kripa! ok dad.

d: beta abhi age ki kafi choti hai to ....

a: main samhaal loongaa dad u dont worry.

angad take his coat and leave the table ...feeling relief that now his burden of work is decrease. Not knowing what TUFAAN is coming from ommorow in his life ....which will make him forget about mishty ....first time in his life!

PART:3

A day passes ….whole day kripa practice hard to give first impression really very good on angad. She practices ……once for communicate in better way …..try not nervous but she was! Finally a day passed.
     
Next with bright shiny day kripa wake up, its 7:00 am sharp, she goes and take bath . Change her dress and wear a beautiful baby pink churidaar pajama kameez, bangles, long earrings light make-up …..Give her make-up last touch….! Looking like angle…she then go down stairs ….every one is already their at table for breakfast …kripa quitly take her toast …surya noticed her nervousness :
Surya: kripa betey nervous!!!!!!! Hmmmm

Kripa: yes papa…….i don know why but I am! Confused

Josh: its ok dear I know …tum at time nervous nahi ho gi …..infact angad ik bhoot hi cooperative lerka hai ….bas thora kam bolta hai!

Kripa nods and have her breakfast. Josh and surya leave for office …kripa in her BMW leave for angad's office. As kripa reach there , she become more nervous…but she once again try to be normal. She enter in office but life was busy …so she decide to move up through stairs …..she finally reach to 2nd floor. She go through reception ask about her and angad's meeting . receptionist tell her angad is waiting for her.

Kripa with confused and nervous feeling knocks at door .

Angad: come in

Kripa enter and see a guy who is busy in some files also with computer. She stands quietly.

Angad: ms. Sharma come and have ur seat.

Kripa more nervous now…..

Kripa: thank ….thank u sir.
Angad: its ok …so u want to practice here ur studies right .

Kripa : yes …yes sir

Angad at this sentence finally look at kripa ….kripa is stunned at his looks ….she is like gonna faint at angad's gaze and voice. And angad ….with plane reaction:

Angad: ok fine ….. dad told me about u .

Kripa: sir….

Angad: so from today u can start ur work.

Kripa: thank u sir

Angad: but before that app say kuch questions kerney hein.

Kripa: yes sir.

Angad: app yahan office kis terha aye hein!

Kripa: apni gaadi say LOL

Angad: I mean app stair case say aye hein ya lift say

Kripa: stair case

Angad: how many stairs u climbed

Kripa: sir may be 500
Confused
Angad: ms. Sharma I want definite answer

Kripa: sir I didn't count

Angad: they are 200

Kripa: ji …ok.

Angad: will u marry me! Wink LOL

Kripa: what…………………! Sir I have come here for job not for marrying you.

Angad: don worry I was just checking how much hyper u r!


Kripa was speech less. Don know how to react.

Angad: ms. Kripa sharma u need lots of training ……I love to train u.

Kripa: ok sir ….thank you.

Angad: its ok …u go and ur cabin is next to me.

Kripa leave and go in to her cabin, It is nice …with glass walls. She sits at her place , a secretary come and ask her about:

Secretary: ma'm u want to take somethink

Kripa: yes one hot chocolate

Secretary: ok ma'm.

Kripa as don have any work start play game at her cell . angad comes over there and look at her ….

Angad: ms. Kripa it is not ur home that u r playing wt ur cell.

Kripa: I …I am sorry sir ….but I don have any work.

Angad: did u asked me ?

Kripa: I m sorry sir ……….she start crying ……..angad get confused by her reaction ..

Angad: kripa ji please stop crying ….main app say essa kya kaha hai jo app ro rahi hai

Kripa cry more..

Kripa: waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Angad (thinks): what a tough job ….but I like challenges.

Kripa: sir …..i m sorry …..mujey actuallykoi daanta nahi hai na ……………..or app ney ….ap ney ………..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Cry LOL

Angad: ok ok ….u just sit

He give her tissue to weap her tears …..

Angad: app roo maat main app ko kuch files bhejwata hoon …..u have to make presentation ….by collecting data from them!

Angad leaves ….when he enters in his office find naina there .

Naina : angad kripa aye

Angad: haan mamma bilkul bachoo ki terha hai …..she is cute bilkul mishty ki terha!!!!!!!!!!

Naina was amused by watching smiling angad……….

Naina: kripa ……….mishty k baad pehli lerki jis ney merey angad k chehrey per muskurahat di hai ………

BUT ANGAD IS STILL UN AWARE OF THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

PART:4

Angad again get busy into his work. A knock is on o the door.
A: please come in

Kripa come in with a bundles f files which she even can't handle.Naina see this and gets in hurry up. She help kripa angad was about to but naina helped kripa.

N: arey yeh kya hai beta ……….she keep files at angad's table who is still confused about kripa wt so many files.

Kripa: wo actually aunty sir nay kaha k important files bhejta hoon taki tum presentation bana sako ….but jab ye nahi aye to main khud hi ye sab files ley aai ye sooch ker k files to sari important hoti hein …..isliya!

Naina: good thinking …..hmmm tum kripa ho na ….surya ban bhi sahaib ki beti

Kripa: ji

Angad: lagta nahi hai na mom ….kripa app ko bachelors ki degree kis nay di hai …app ka graduation clear kesey ho gya ……I mean u ….GOD …..tum ko sikatey sikatey main khud bhool jaonga …..

Kripa: but sir main ney kya kia

Angad: kripa u just leave main app say baad main baat kerta hoon

Kripa has now teary eyes …she is about to cry …..

Angad: ab please rona maat …acha sorry ….tum chalo main aaker tum ko samjata hoon kya kerna hai

Kripa: app ksesy boss ho bhai nay to kaha tha k acheyho aur app pheley hi din apney employee ko daant rahey ho ………she makes cute face

Angad cant stop smiling when he looks at her cute face. Naina was again confused by angad's behaviour ….but she is happy for this . thenshe look at kripa realize the fact that kripa is on who can make any one smile …..even he or she is like tough stone.

Naina: angad main chalti hoon tum kripa ko acey say guide kero …after all tumharey uncle ki betihai or kripa betey main ajj tumharey ghar aaon gi apni mamma ko bol dena
Kripa: ji aunty sure.

Naina leaves……kripa and angad left.

Kripa: sir main bhi jaon
Angad who is busy wt his laptop ….

Angad: haan ……kya nahi nahi abhi nahi ..abhi ruko …ik min.

Kripa: ji sir

Angad: tum ko sikhaney ki ik achi opportunity hai ….ik project hai …hum loo tumharey dad yani merey uncle k sath mil ker ik product launch kerney waley hein to ….to ye ik faida hai tumharey liya time hai k tum kuch ssek lo!

Kripa: ji sir.

Angad: ok fine

Kripa: sir ik baat kahoon ……..app bhoot achey ho ….itney strict nahi ho jitney dektey ho ………

Angad smiles ….at her.

Angad: thanks

Kripa: sir mujh say doosti kerengey!

Angad is like what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART:5

 

kripa: kya app mujh say dosti kerengye
angad is like what Dead

Angad: kya app itni jaldi dosti ker leti ho???

kripa: nahi.....haan lakin ager achey insaan miley to dosti kerlati hoon

angad: app ko kesey pata k ...main ik acha insaan hoon

kripa: well ager achey insaan na hotey to ...josh bhaya k dost na hotey or na hi misty k husband.........she stop ...and realize what she just said

angad's smiling face again become sad as before

Angad: tum mishty ko itni achey say kesey janti ho

kripa: wo meri cousin thi ye to app jantey hongye .......wo meri bhoot achi dost bhi thi ....meri koi bari behen nahi thi to main us ko di bolti thi ..........di thi meri wo!!!!!!!

kripa start crying ...bitterly ...angad this time control himself ...as if he also cry who will able to handle kripa .....angad goes to kripa and try to console her..........!

angad: bas kripa ...bas ab chup ho jao ...mujey dekho na....

kripa: haan angad merey dukh say bara dukh to app ka hai .....i m sorry .....

angad: nahi .....tum bhi to .....

kripa: angad mujey pata hai bhai nay bataya app misty ko yaad ker k bhoot rotey hein ....

angad: nahi essi koi...........baat nahi hai main ney khud ko samhal liya hai

kripa: jhoot dhang say bolna nahi atta app ko

angad: haaan ....yad kerta hoon usko ...us kay janey k baad main nay kabhi agey barney ki koshish nahi .....meri zindagi ruk gai hai .bas!

kripa: to app mishty di ko kasoor war samjtey hein .....haan! bolya....1 mishty di to kehti thi zinadagi jeeney ka naam hai aur app ney zindagi jeeni hi chor di kyun?

angad:; main ........wo

kripa: main wo kya angad ........app agar di say pyaar kertey hein to app ko apney app ko badalna ho ga.....samjey ........aur ager app meri baat ka maan lengey to hi acha ho ga ....ager app ko mishty di ki zara bhi fiker hai to app ajj merey sath chal rahey hein ...........!

angad: kahan ..........?

kripa; ik nai zindagi shoro kerney! ik nai sach or ik nai pal ko jeenay ................!

saying this kripa leave ....there she wait for him in basement when do not come ....she is about to leave when lift door open ....angad is there .......with a sad smile at his face!

kripa: mujeypata tha app ayengye ....magaer phir bhi ik pal k liya laga tha ki shayad nahi .....!

angad: ab chalein

kripa: haan...........

and they leave.

angad: in car merey barey main itna janti ho apney barey main uch bataogi!

kripa: main ........meri life bhoot simple or sweet hai ....ghar main raho to mummy , papa or bhai ko tang kero ........bahir jao to friends ko .....bhai jab bhi jahan bhi dekhey us say bhoot sari chocolates mango ....or jab bhai ka koi secreat chupana ho to to us ko bolo k koi achey say cuasine per dinner kerwaye .......hmmmmm thora sa ghamand dekhana .............or raat ko love stories apney glasses laga ker perna .............bas ye hai kripa sharma .....!

angad: good good ...to sab ko tang ker k app ko maza atta hai right .......!

kripa: haan its my hobby.........and u know what commonly bhai ask me

angad: ya

kripa: what?

angad: ye hi k tum kab bari hogi

kripa: how u come to know

angad: jessy app hein ...us per mera dil bhi ye hi chah ra hai

kripa laugh ....then they had day out ....while after about two hours ....angad and kripa heads back to office ...kripa take his car and heads back to home ....really tired .........when she entered .........mom guessed she is tired so she let her go and take peaceful sleep .....other wise in second option .............doosoroon ka peace chin jata !!!!!!!! LOL

angad also heads to his home.....when entered ...his mom n dad were surprice to see angad's face glowing ........

angad: hi dad hi mom

both :hello beta .....ajj tum bhoot khush dekh rey ho

angad: mamma ajj main nay itnay dino baad kisi ko doost banaya or wo bhi bhoot achi lerki ko

naina: kripa

angad: yes mom ........

naina: haan bhoot hi pyaari bachi hai

angad: pata ahi mom ...wo jitni ghamandi or ...nakhrey wali dekhtui hai na ...us k peechey wo ik sedi sadi lerki hai ...jo ik aam lerki ki terha sapney dekhti hai .....love stories perti hai ...or maza kerti hai .........!

naina: tum kahin bahir gye they ajj

angad: haan mamma we had a day out.........

naina: good ...ab tum jao thak gye ho gye

angad: ok om ok dad ...good night ......................!

naina: dilip ajj pehli baar angad ko ishty k baad itna khush dekha hai

dilip: naina jo lerki apney pehley din angad ko itna badal dey wo ...angad k liya kya meanings rakhti hogi ...or mujey lagta hai k ab humara angad dobara apni nai zindagi shooro ker chuka hai ....or ab nai safer main chahta k kripa us ki hamsafer baney!!!!!!!!!

PART:6

 

Angad is getting ready ….some one knocks at the door angad thinks its teddy their servant so says:

Angad: come in

A person when enters in the room find angad wearing trousers but with NO SHIRT at his dashing body…..i mean shirt less angad …a person screams and covered eyes wt palm. When angad turn back at screamed voice in confused and found none other then KRIPA there!

Angad covered his body wt towel. And shouts1

Angad: tum tum yahan kya keri ho

Kripa: main to tum ko bolaney aye thi

Angad: to knock nahi kersakti thi

Kripa: kyat ha main ney magaer tum ko hi sharam nahi aati shirtless ho ker kisi ko bhi apney kamrey anney detey ho!

Angad: acha to tum ko to samjna chahiya than a kii main teddy ko accept kera th

Kripa: haan haan mujey sapney attey hein right!

Angad: tum abhi kabhi merey kamrey niklo

Kripa: jar i hoon bolney ki zaroorat nahi hai

Angad: haan to jao na

Kripa leaves …but her duppata stuck in door …….she turns back ..and try to free her duppata from door .angad look it and help kripa and finally they come close ….their hands touched …….they looked in each other's eyes………..to be continued!

PART:7

They went office after this all mess. The day passed in sound manner. No fights because they had to work a lot on project.
Day passes like this …1 month gone angad and kripa come close but only as a friends …they start feeling about each other but didn't confess ! for some stupid reason that might they break their friendship!
Angad has a habit of writing diary …well the scene is like he is in his room writng some thing in his diary …..but feel sleepy and sleep after an hour………………..! naina come over there and see angad sleeping …and a diary is placed a little far from him …she picks it up and start reading!

"kripa- bhoot achi larki hai ….us k aney say phelay meri zindagi jessey tham gye thi ….magar us ney aaker mujey jeeney ka naya dhang sikhaya….pata nahi kyun mager ab u say door nahi jata ….jab wo pas hoti hai to ..duniya haseen lagti hai …or jab nahi to …her cheez ajeeb lagti hai ….i think ….shayed mishty k baa dab main …phir say………shayed kripa …nahi sach main kripa say pyaar kerney laga hoon…kripa I-LOVE –U………….main ab tumharey bagher nahi erh sakta…………!"

naina after reading this smile …..in morning when angad has gone for office she make call to gayatry:

naina: hello gayatry

g: haan naina bolo

n : main nay tum say jo kaha tha ..wo sach ho gya ……….

G: haan man bhi tum ko phone ker k ye hi bataney wali thi ….k kripa bhi ………..!

N: tum kripa say baat kero main angad say ………….

G: theek hai


Gyatry come in kripa's room …

G: kripa beti tum say baat kerni thi

K: ji mom

G: beta tumhara rishta aaya hai

K: mamma but main abhi shaadi nahi kerna chahti

G: beta bhoot acha lerka hai tum janna nahi chahogi kon hai

K: nahi ,…………..

G: kripa………..

K: mamma plz!

G: theek hai wesey tum soochna is barey main

K: dekhongi

Kripa as gayatry leave……..make a call to angad…1

Kripa: angad hello kripa here

Angad: haan kripa …kesi ho

Kripa: theek hoon …tum ko kuch batana tha

Angad: kya anygood news

Kripa: haan hai na ….mera proposal aya hai or mamma bhoot khush hai

Angad: tum bhi

Kripa( in anger): tum ko kya lagta

Angad: ye hi k khush ho

Kripa: haan sach keh rahey ho main ………main bhoot khush hoon ……………!

Angad(confused n sad): main bhi

Kripa: ok main rakhti hoon phone.

Angad: bye.

Naina meanwhile come in angad's room ….and try to talk him.

Naina: angad beta wo ………….baat kerna hai tum say

Angad: ji mom

Naina: ik lerki dekhi hai tumharey liya main chahti hoon k tum us say milo or shaadi ……….

Angad: (in anger): mom as u wish…………………..

Naina get confused ……she make call to gaytry ……..

Naina: gayatry angad kuch ajeeb sa react ker ra hai

Gayatry: haan mager mujey is ka reason pata hai ……….

Naina: what kya hai batao

Gayatry explain the misunderstanding between the two …and naina laughs …….

Naina: oh to ye baat hai

Gayatry chalo koi baat nahi ab hum loog in dono ko tang kertey …ab ye ik dosrey ko apni shaadi k din hi phechaney gye

Both mums laugh …………………………….

Coming: more tafree in the way!

PART:8

 

A bright sunny morning KK..angad coming down from stairs two gals who were previously sitting o sofa Kwhen see angad rushes towards him Khe also alo smile widelyK..

Gals: angadKKK.!

Angad: so my beautiful cousin sisters are here

Gal no 1: yo Kab humarey bhai ki shaadi ho aur hum na hoon

Gal no:2: ye kesey hosakta hai K.hmmmm

Angad with flat smuile : yaaaaaaa.

All three heads to dinning table Klet me introduce the gals. One is AALIYAK..angads aunt daughterK..and another one is PRENAK.angadKuncles daughterKthree of them are very close. Aaliya is also engaged wt kripas cousin PRITHVI K.and both are madly in love. While josh only knows aaliya not prenaKKKK..!

Angad: so shatan ki aunties watz up KK..!

Prena: angadK.aunty jatey samey bol ker gai hai k tum ko ajj apni fience say milna hai beach per KKK..

Angad: haan pata hai KK.saying this gets up!

ONE THING MORE BOTH AALIYA AND PRENA KNOWS ABOUT THE PLAN KAS WELL AS WELL JOSH AND PRITHVI ALSO KPRITHVI IS IN WAY TO KRIPAS HOUSE KKKKKKKK!

BACK TO THE SCENE:

Both aaliya and prena giggles

Aaliya:acha bhoot hogya chalo prithvi ko callkerti hoon

Prena: haan kerley werna tujey saans kesey aaye gi Kor tu maar jaye gi

Aaliya: shut up prenaKK..!

Aaliya makes call to prithvi

Aaliya: hi prithvi

Before prithvi could say any thing Kprena snatches the phoneKK.

Prithvi: hi beautiful K..jaan thanks God u make me call other wise main to aaj jata

Prena: kahan jatey jiju

Prithvi: prena tummmmmmmmmmm

Prena: haan main

Prithvi: arey meri maa tum kab sudrogi K.

Prena: jab merey betey tum ko aqal aajye gi

Prithvi: shut up or aaliya ko phone do

Prena:a cha na Kbut abhi tum wo angad-kripa wali baat ko discuss kero

Prithvi hum bhi angad kripa k sath beech per mil rahey hein ok

Prena: ok done or ab ye lo apni KKKKKJAAN ..say baat kero

Aaliya blushes all the way KKKKKand they had a romantic chat KKK.!


ON BEACH:

All gang meet firstKKKK..prithvi make prena and josh introduced to each other K.and they make plan .

So they worked and final results are infront of u KKK.

Kripa on beach walking lonely as all excused them selves ..same condition with angad K.but one thing strange is there Kboth deny for engagement Kdirect SHAADI KKKK..which is day after tomorrow!

Kripa see angad and stood there like an ice

Kripa: angad tum

Angad: kripa tum yaan kya keri ho

Kripa: main wo apney fienceKKKK.

Angad: oh to fience k sath aye hoK..haan bhai ab to tum ko hum yaad bhi nahi rehtey

Krpaƒangry) haan to is main bure kya hai Ktumhey koi farak to para nahi hoga

Angad hurt by her cold reply KKKKKKK1

Angad: haan mujey kyun fark perey ga Kmain tumhari zindagi main hoon hi kya Ksirf ik boss na KKKKKKKKK.

Kripa: main bhi tumharey liya sirf ik assistant hi to hoon na K.sahi kaha na angad khanna main nay

Angad: tum hamesha theek hi kehti ho kripa KKKKKKKK..

Saying this he leaves KKKKKKKK.he goes to hotel near by K.and hotel bar room Khe drunk almost countless glasses Kand totally in drunk condition leave again come to beach surprisingly kripa was thereKKKKK.!


Coming up:Most emotional scene of fan-fic till now KKKKKKKKKK

To be continued.



I WILL CONTINUE MORE IN HALF AN HOUR

 

 

 

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PART:9

Angad come to beach in drunken condition …..When he see kripa his anger become worst……!

Angad: tum …tum yahan kya kerahi …gye kyun nahi abhi tak ..yahan say..

Kripa: main kuch bhi karoon tum ko is say kya haan..

Angad: hai kyun nahi ho ga mujey kuch…kyun mehsoos nahi ho ga…….

Kripa: get a live angad …mujh say ya merey kisi bhi baat say kyun tum kuch feel kero gye ..akhir main hoon hi kon tumhari..

Angad: wah kripa sharma wah ….aye …sab loog tali bajao is kay liya ye hai kripa sharma …is ki adapt hai ye ….kay ye logon ki zindagi main interfare karey us badal ker rakh dey per phir jab kisi ko is ki addat perh jaye to chor dey sath …..clap man ….sab nacho taliyaan bajaoo …kripa sharma jesi mahan hasti k liya …………..he was claping …and tears were lowing from kripa's eyes……………..

Kripa grab angad's hand …

Kripa: kyun essa kerahey angad kyun……………………..?

Angad: kyun ….jesey tum nahi janti na …..arey pyaar erta hoon main tum say …..dam it ………mager tum ney mazak bana k rakh diya hai mera…merey pyaar ka……………..!

Kripa: mazak to tum ney banaya hai angad khanna …mera ….arey jis din say tum ko jana hai sirf or sirf pyaar kiya hai tum say ….mager tum ney kabhi meri mojoodgi ko mehsoos kiya ……..nahi na …..mazak kya tamasha bana ker rakh diya hai tum ney zindagi ko meri …………..mr.angad khanna!

Just then naina, dilip, gayatry and suryaban come there………….

Naina: mazak ….tamasha angad –kripa ….mazak aur tamasha to tum dono nay banaya hum sab ka ….!

Angad: mom !

Angad feeling bad because he is drunk and not feeling better while standing in front of parents …in such state!

Dilip: chup ik dum chup….arey ik dosrey ko neecha dekhaney ik dosrey ko degreat kerney k liya kisi aur ki zindagi barbad kerna chahtey ho tum loog!

Gayatry: chi kripa …tum meri beti ho sooch ker bhi sharam atti hai kesi sooch hai tumhari angad ko torture kerney k liya tum kisi or ki zindagi k sath …………….! Khilwar keri thi haan bolo?

Kripa: sorry mamma …main …hum …..nahi jantey they k hum ik dosrey ko bol nahi paye they actually!

Angad: is liya essa laga k kripa mujey ….ditch keri hai …aur kripa ko laga k main us ko ditch kera hoon is liya hum ney haan keh di !
Suryaban: ab essi galti per tum ko maaf to nahi kiya jasakta …na…….to tumhari saza ye hai k ab tum dono ko ik secrete pata chal jaye ……..aur wo ye hai k …..tumhari shaadi kisi aur say nahi ik dosrey say hi ho ri hai …………………………!

Saying this they all laugh ……………..angad kripa left behind ……….kripa cursing angad …………………..!

Kripa: chi angad …kitni pee rakhi hai …..

Angad: hmmmm ager nahi peta to hum ko humari shaadi waley din hi ye sab pata chalta …stupid………………..

Kripa: haan …mager tum ye sab …………….arey samhalo angad apney app ko ….

Angad fall over kripa and …hold him tightly ………some how they reach to angad's car ….she let him sit on passenger seat …and herself sit on driver's seat …she is about to drive when angad grabs kripa's hand …..bring his body close to kripa …and ug her tightly ……………………..!

Aangad: kripa ajj mujey samjh nahi arraha k mihty k is duniya say chaley janey per khushi manoo ya ghum …ager mishty hoti to shayad hum kabhi na miltey …mager ajj wo nahi hai …..to tum merey pass ho …meri ho ! kripa I love u a lot ….main tumharey bina ab nahi rehsakta ………saying this he sleeps ………………..

Kripa look at sky ……..and tears roll down from her eyes ….she is speech less …don know what to say ……thanks to GOD ……….or feel bad for mishty !

Coming up: kripa-angad engagement and wedding ……………………………….many ….hearth throb twist after marriage ……………………!


PART:10

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The engagement day:

every one is busy at khanna mension.naina is restless ...anga's dadi has also come to attend the engagement and wedding ..she is very jolly person. Angad loves her alot .prena and aaliya are busy in their self-grooming.naina and dilip is like;

naina: dilip wo flower waley ko bolaya tha ya nahi ...subha 10:00 bajey ka kaha tha it is now almost 12:00 what the hell itis dilip?

dilip: naina main bhi to faltu nahi ghoom raha na ...subha sa preparations main laga howa hoon ....arey wo karthick aur priya (his wife) bhi aagye hein ...to wo bhi lagey howey hein ........................!

naina: dilip phir bhi dekho na kitna kaam pending main para how hai .

dilip: oh ho tum tension mat lo sab ho jaye ga please .....

naina: huuu sab ho jaye ga ...

and they both again get busyin their work.

In gals room:

dadi: arey prena dekho na main kesi lag rahi hoon ...bilkul kajol jessi na ....

aaliya: nahi dadi app to bipasha basu dekh rahi ho

prena: haan john dekhey ga to orignal bipasha ko bhool jaye ga ...

all laugh

dadi: acha chalo tum loog tayar ho jao phir naina aaker danteygi

every one here busy in their own preparations.

NOW THE GROOM'S ROOM:

angad is all busy in in making his looks perfect his cousin rahul and first cousin karthick helping him in getting ready

karthick: angad kripa to ajj kaam say ge ...bechari pura waqt tujeyhi dekti rahey gi

angad: wo to hai after all i m angad khanna ...mujh per hazaroon lerkiyaan marti hein

rahul: haan but app ik peechey jaan gawa bethey .....kripa bhabi k

karthick: wesey yaar tum loog tragic moment zabardast tha i wish main bhi hota wahan ........naina aunty essey bataya k hum loog hans hans pagal hogal

angad chalo ho gya na ...kab tak embarased kero gye mujey ....

he got ready and he wearing grey sherwani ...looking hot .

FINALLY sharma's arrive prithvi and josh arewith kripa aaliya looks realy pretty when prithvi give her look ...she blushes...while josh and prena acts as they are by birth ...enemies ..............!

angad when look kripa he get freeze ..she is looking as angel on earth! she is wearing off-white sharara ...with heavy golden work and purple duppata ....!

kripa's eyes were lowered ....as she cant able to meet eyeswith angad keep shying and blushing .....which increasing her beauty........!

thats for the day will continue tommorow.........!

PART:11
Kripa is shying and blushing like a crazy angad continuously looking at her …and finally naina call both and announce the engagement;

Naina: ladies and gentlemen …ajj main aur merey pati apney betey angad khanna ki sagai app bhoot achey family friends sharmas ki ki beti kripa sharma say kerney ja rey hein , meri app loog say request hai k in k anney waley kal k achey honey ki dua karein.

Naina: angad kripa ko rig pehnao ….kripa beta hath agey karo …..

Kripa who is still not looking at angad ….finally look at him …her beautiful eyes are seem to be killing him ….! Angad totally goes mad about these eyes ….oo la la la!

Kripa once again looks down and slip ring angad's finger …..aand angad slip ring in her little beautiful fingers. AND ANNOUNCEMENT IS MADE FOR FOR ALL TO ROCKS THE DANCE FLOOR ……!

song palyed ..........my fav for such occasions!

YE KHUDIYAAN NASHEY DIYAAN KHUDIYAAN
E MUNDEY GALI DE MUNDEY …..
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO

MEHENDI LAGA KEY RAKHNA DOLI SAJA KE RAKHNA
MEHENDI LAGA KEY RAKHNA DOLI SAJA KE RAKHNA
LANEY TUJEY OO GORI AAYEN GYE TEREY SAJNAA
MEHENDI LAGA KEY RAKHNA DOLI SAJA KE RAKHNA
OOOOO HOOOOOOO

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
SEHRA SAJA K RAKHNA CHERA CHUPA K RAKHNA
SEHRA SAJA K RAKHNA CHERA CHUPA K RAKHNA
MEHENDI LAGA KEY RAKHNA DOLI SAJA KE RAKHNA
HOYE HOYE HOYE …………………..

URR URR KER TERI ZULFIEN KERTI HEIN KYA ISHAREY
DIL THAM KEY KHAREY HEIN AASHIQ SABHI KANWAREY

CHUP JAYEINSARI GHAR MAIN SHARAM K MAREY
BAHOON MAIN AAGYE HEIN PAGAL SHEHER K SAREY

NAZRIEN JHUKA K RAKNA DAMAN BACHA K RAKHNA
NAZRIEN JHUKA K RAKNA DAMAN BACHA K RAKHNA
LANEY TUJEY OO GORI AAYE GYE TEREY SAJNA

NAZRIEN JHUKA K RAKNA DAMAN BACHA K RAKHNA
SEHRA SAJA K RAKHNA CHERA CHUPA K RAKHNA


MAIN IK JAWAN LERKA TU IK HASEEN LERKI
YE DIL MACHAL GYA TU MERA KASOOR KYA HAI
RAKHNA THA DIL PE KABOO YE HUSAN TU HAI JADOO
JADOO YE CHAL GYA TO MERA KASOOR KYA HAI

RASTA HUMARA TAKNA DARWAZA KHULA RAKHNA
RASTA HUMARA TAKNA DARWAZA KHULA RAKHNA
LENEY TUJEY O GORI AYE GYE TEREY SAJNA

KUCH AUR AB NA KEHNA
KUCH AUR AB NA KERNA
YE DIL KI BAAT APNEY
DIL MAIN DABA K RAKHNA


MEHENDI LAGA KEY RAKHNA DOLI SAJA KE RAKHNA
SEHRA SAJA K RAKHNA CHERA CHUPA K RAKHNA


SHAWA OOYE SHAWA OYE SHAWA OYE ………..

Through out this song whole family especially angad and kripa enjoyed very much …..The colors of happiness can be clearly shown at their faces …..Their belongingness can be feeling ….the touch of angad o kripa during song, the way she blushes ….. like every girl she is nervous too ….and like every man …angad is protective look for her …that she can feel ….!

The party ends …kripa is in her room …she gets a call ….its angad there she smiles …and pick up!

Kripa: haan angad bolo

Angad: tum ko kesey pata main hoon

Kripa: Caller's id say ……lolz

Angad: ooh I thought

Kripa: science bhaaot agye barh chuki mr.khanna

Angad: ya ya ya

Kripa: phone kyun kiya

Angad : nahi kersakta

Kripa: hmmmmmmmm kersaktey ho

Angad: acha sab choro kal office aa ri hona

Kripa: angad ap pagal ho gye hein kya …2 weeks main shaadi hai mujey tayari kerna hai aur app ….GOD angad get a life

Angad: mujey nahi pata tum kali arri that's final

Kripa angad: but angad

Angad: jaan tum kal aari ho …I love u …right now missing u …and will see u 2morrow in office …feeling sleepy …have to see ur dreams …..and will full fill it after our marriage ….so let me sleep …kal anna …werna ……..ok her is a kiss for u ….he make a noice like kissing her ……and puts phone down …..saying …angad u r too gud!

Kripa:pagal hai! …and laugh ……………………

Coming up: kripa and have funny fight in office …wedding preparations …….A-K ….day out in shopping!    


PART:12

Angad makes call to kripa ….as he want to confirm that is she really coming in other case he decide to go by him self and pick her up!

Kripa is in her room getting ready for office as following our hero's instructions o come to office ! she receives a call on her cell phone …..(I don why fianc always make calls on cell even mine do the same thing) lolz

Kripa: angad I was accepting u dear

Angad: ya I know

Kripa hmmmm bolo

Angad: aari ho na

Kripa: kahan

Angad: office

Kripa(lying): nahi

Angad: kyun

Kripa: marzi

Angad: ok I promise u with in 5 mins tumhara decision change hoga

Kripa: angad meri baat to suno …..

Destiny he cuts the phone

Kripa: uff …ab ye kya kerney wala hai

On the other hand ….angad make call to her home …..and talks to her mom!

Angad; hello aunty

Gayatry: kon angad

Angad: ji aunty

Gayatry: beta ab tu tum mujey mamma bolo kripa ki terha

Angad: ok aunty …I mean mamma
Gayatry: haan beta kripa say baat kerni hai abhi us k kamrey mein connection deti hoon

Angad: mamma app say baat kerni hai

Gatatry: mujh say bolo!

Angad: mamma main nay kripa say kaha k office main kuch papers per sign kerwaney hein sath main shopping per bhi jana hai app ko pata hai 2 weeks main shaadi hai mager wo aa nahi rahi app bolya na us ko woo maan jaye gi!

Gayatry: u don worry beta main abhi ja ker us saybaat kerti hoon

Angad: thanx mamma tu main usey leney arra hoon

Gayatry:ok beta bye

Angad: bye

He cuts and say

Angad: angad ji tusi gr8 ho ….actually u rocks man!

Gayatry goes to kripa's room and start scolding her

G: kripa tum angad k sath office janey say mana kyun kiya bolo

K: mamma wo main to us say mazak ekr rahi thi

G: tumhey pata hai wo bechara kitna pareshaan ho gya tha

K: mamma mujey kya pata tha k wo itna seriously le ley ga is baat ko

G: dekho kripa ….angad pehley bhi bhoot dukh dekh chukka hai ab main chahti k tumhari waja say usey or koi ghum miley beta usey jitna hosakey khush rakho …..yahan tak k wo MISHTY ko bhool jaye !

K: ok mamma

Mean while she hears angad's car voice

K: mamma angad aagye hein

G: ok beta tum jao

K: ok mama bye

G: bye beta

Kripa go to angad open the door and sit in wt cute angry expressions angad grins ……1

Angad …..moves reverse ….finally they are on road ….kripa pretending to be angry and not talking to him!

Angad: kripa tum ney kya kasam khai kuch bhi na bolney ki

Kripa:……….

Angad: kripa chalo acha hai main thori deer sukoon say to   rahoon ga

Kripa:---------

Angad: koi mujh say baat nahi kerna chahta to is rishtey ka kya faida ok …..hum alag ho jaye gye

Kripa now turn wt angry expressions …..and scream

Kripa: chup ….! Kya kaha tum nay alag ho gye mujh say ….how dare u mr . angad khanna …talking like this ….s**t …..main ager tum say do mins baat nahi karoongi to tum rista toor gye …ik baat hamesha yaad rakhna …kabhi saney main essa maat soochna …..samjey …….!

Angad is motion less at this moment ….and finally speaks;

Angad: kripa main to mazak ker raha tha ….mujey kya patatha k tum itna ….i mean itna naraz ho gi I m sorry dear ! auur main tumhey kabhi nahi choronga I swear …..ok …..and they they hug tightly !


Ok I will continue tomorrow!
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PART:13

Kripa and finally part ….after a long hug….angad see tears in kripa's eyes he come closer to her and guess what he suck those tears wt his lips kripa close her eyes…..!

Angad: kripa main sab kuch bardasht kersakta hoon mager tumhari ankhoon main ansoo mujh say nahi dekhey jatey ….tumhari ik muskurahat mujey jessey ik nai zindagi deti hai …kripa tumharey ansoo mujey toor detey hein or tumhari ik pyaari smile mujey jessey duniya ka sab say bara sahara deti hai ….pata hai jab mishty chali gye thi too main toot gya tha ….main ney sooch liya tha k ab main kabhi apni zindagi khushe naam ki cheez ko aaney nahi donga kyun kay mishty hi meri khushi thi ….kripa tum …tum merey liya is liya sab say zayada maina (meaningful) rakti ho kyun k tum prhli lerki thi jis k wajah say na chahtey howey bhi merey chehray per meri hansi wapis aai ………….that why main tumharey chahrey per ghum nahi dekh sakta …….or main chhta hoon k tum hamesha yun hansti raho!

Kripa try not cry but she can not control and cry ……

Angad: kripa ye kya …..

Kripa: angad ye zaroori nahi k ager ankhoon main ansoo hoon to ghum k hi hongye ….kuch ansoo khushi k hotey hein jo beh jaye to acha hai

Angad smile and hugs her again…………………………!

Kripa: angad ager hum yaheen rahey to shopping nahi ker payegye

Angad: tumhey ghum ho ya khushi shopping nahi bholti na
Kripa: acha to tum ko mera shopping kerna bura lagta hai

Angad: nahi meri pocket ko bura lagta hai thori deer main wo khali ho jaye gi

Kripa: kanjoos credit card ya debit card nahi hai kya

Angad: job hi kharcha to mera hi hoga na

Kripa: koi shak

Angad: nahi

Kripa: to chalein mr khanna

Angad: yes ms. sharma

PART:14

Angad and kripa have a day out in shopping pranking jokes over each other………..!

Angad: wowwwww

Kripa: wow…kis liya angad…

Angad: kripa dekho kitni khoobsurat hai …

Kripa:kon hai wo larki or kahan zara main bhi to dekhoon

Angad gets an idea…………………………

Angad:choro tum jealous feel kerogi us say

Kripa:jealous ho gi meri sandle samjey….batao kahan hai

Angad: tumharey peechey

As kripa turn …she get shock to …….see…….a…..car…….standing behind her….angad burst in laughter…….and kripa get annoyed and try not to laugh at her own mistake………..!

Angad: kripa apni shakal to dekho purey 12:00 baj rey hein

Kripa: shut up angad ye kesa mazak tha

Angad:yaar main kab mazak kiya main nay to sirf ye kaha tha ……kitni khoobsurat hai…..he again laugh!

KRIPA: acha na galti ho gai ab chalein ….

Angad: haan haan why not

Kripa give him a dirty look…..

Angad:essay maat dekho loog kahengye itney handsome bandey k sath ye kya cheez jar i hai ……………..

Kripa:acha to main essi wessi hoon

Angad:haan na phir bhi dekho itni saari beautiful larkiyoon ko chor ker tum say pyaar kerta hoon

Kripa: wesey tum ko bhi dekh ker bhi loog kehtey hongey ….LANGOOR K HATH MAIN ANGOOR AGGYA ….

Angad: kab

Kripa:off-course jab main tumharey sath hoti hoon

Angad: confirm to kerwalo languor kon or angoor kon

Kripa:shut-up angad

Angad:ok ok ok …ab jaghra band …I think ab hum ko apney track per wapis anna chahiya ……………

Kripa:matlab

Angad: matlab ik beautiful candle light dinner date, ik dance orrrrrrrrrrr

Kripa: orrrr kuch bhi nahi

Angad: kripa don spoil the mood

Kripa: angad just wait for two weeks

Angad: acha dinner to kersakti ho na

Kripa: no subha say tumharey sath hoon lunch ker chuki ab ghar jana hai …

Angad:kripaaaaaaaa

Kripa: angad plz …jantey ho na kitna kam time hai humarey pass.!

Angad: ok

They drive off…during angad continuously flirting wt his beautiful fiance……by touching her hairs , cheeks ,,,,,finally they reach at kripa 's house

Kripa: ok ab hum one week baad apnay sangeet main milengye

Angad: kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Kripa: oh batana bhool gyethi mamma nay kaha tha ab hm akeley nahi milsaktey …..And she grins at angad's temper which he is loosing

Angad:ye kya baat hoi

Kripa: mujey nahi pata main jari hoon bye

She is about to leave…………..when …….angad hold her hand bring her closer ..till she can feel his heart beat and breath at her face…………………..she close her eyes as she is expecting a kiss…….from him …….but he free her….kripa get confused look

Angad: kripa…..ab main tumhara shaadi tak intezaar keronga….na tum say miloonga , na baat keroonga………………………main apney app ko azmana chahta hoon mager janney say pehley main……..tum say poochey bina nahi kersakta tha

He when stop …kripa come closer ad give him a sweet kiss on his lips …which later become passionate…….after almost five mins they apart ……….and with teary eyes say bye to each other …they hugs again and then kripa run from there into her house !

PART:15

KRIPA AND ANGAD …didn't meet each other through out week …although kripa some how tried to meet him but he remain wt his words that I will not meet her till sangeet …and even try to hug her till my marriage. Finally a week passed a day of sangeeet comes …kripa is very happy finally she is able to meet angad on other hand angad is happy too. Angad wear black shalwar kameez with light orange and golden work ……looking like a prince …..while kripa dressed up in orange lehenga…looking as pretty as not before……………and blushing like a crazy. …
Angad's family come over kripa's place ….angad is twisting around to see kripa ..finally she come down with her friends …angad's mom naina ….applied mehendi at kripa's hand and then its time to rocks…………………………….!

Guys come at one place as a supporters of angad …..and gals come at one place as supporters of kripa ……………………with angad …there is prithvi,josh,karthick,mannan…while with kripa gals are ……..mishty , aaliya , prena and her best friend kashish ….!

First guys:

Thora sa pyaar howa hai
Thora hai baqi………
Hum to chahein gye tumey
Jab talak jaan hain baqi …
Thora sa pyaar howa hai
Thora hai baqi………


Angad keep looking at kripa who is blushing and not looking at angad at all.
Prithvi as usual in aaliya's eyes …two lovebirds who have …no probs with surrounding!!!!!!!!!

Gals:
Wada raha pyaar say pyaar
Ab hum na hongey judaa…
Wada raha pyaar say pyaar
Ab hum na hongey judaa…
Ye meri dhadkanien sun raha hai khuda
Chahey tumey is qadar mera dil
Tum ko nahi hai pata …
Ye meri dhadkanien sun raha khudaaaaaaa

Wada rahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Guys:
Oo haseena zalfoon wali
Janey jahan …..
Dhoondati hein kafir aankhein
Kis ka nishaan …
Oo haseena zalfoon wali
Janey jahan …..
Mehfil mehfil aae shama phirti ho kahan

Gals:
Sayan jee bayaan chura k nahi jaana
Hay hyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeheye ..
Aana je aanna zara tumka lagana ..
Aana je aanna zara tumka lagana ..
Main to abhi na ghar jaongi
Nachoon gi tum ko nachoon gi……..

Gals:

Pyaar main sau uljaney hein pyaar maat kerna
Jeeney marney ka koi ikrar maat kerna
Chahat ki baton main samjo to bas dhoka hai
Ye batein suney say apney dil ko hum ney to roka hai
Pyaar main sau uljaney hein pyaar maat kerna
Jeeney marney ka koi ikrar maat kerna


Gals:

Piya piya o piya piya o piya
Piya piya o piya piya o piya
Subha shaam karey mera jiya
Jiya jiya jiya jiya o ..jiya
Jiya piya ..o ..jiya piya …

Guys:

Mehendi laganey ki raat aagye
Mehendi laganey ki raat aagye
Milney milaney ki raat aagye
Milney milaney ki raat aagye
Sab ko bataney ki raat aagye
Sab ko bataney ki raat aagye ..

Gals:

Meri zindagi mera pyaar yaad aaraha hai
Anney wala hai jo …wo yaad aaraha hai
Sajan sajan teru dulhan tujh ko pukarey aaja
Aaker merey hathoon main mehendi tu hi racha ja..
Sajan sajan teru dulhan tujh ko pukarey aaja
Aaker merey hathoon main mehendi tu hi racha ja..

Guys:

Ankhoon main shabab hai
Chera ye ghulab hai
Her adda aazaab hai
Husan be hisab hai
Tu jo be nikaab hai
Tauba hai tauba hai tauba hai…
Tauba hai tauba hai tauba hai…
Tauba hai tauba hai tauba hai…
Tauba hai tauba hai tauba hai…

Gals:

Mehendi say likh gori
Hathoon pe merey
Tu merey balma ka naam
Tu merey balma ka naam
Mehendi say likh gori
Hathoon pe merey
Hooooooooooooo
Tu merey balm ka naam….

In end every one sing……

Bole churiyaan
Bole kangna
Bole churiyaan
Bole kangna
Haye main ho gai
Teri saajna
Terey bin jee
Nayioo lagta
Main tu maar gyeyaan
Le ja le ja soniya le ja
hooooooooooooooooo

Bole churiyaan
Bole kangna
Bole churiyaan
Bole kangna
Haye main ho gya
Tera sajnaa
Terey bin jee nayoon lagta
Main te marjawaan
Le ja le ja soniya le ja
hooooooooooooooooo


ok me continue tomorrow …I need rest as i listen too many songs today to select best one …


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PART:16

as the sangeet ends ...the both family and guests have their dinner...after that the time forsaying good bye comes ...angad-kripa get upset again...mean while they get chance for chit chat...............!

angd comes at place where kripa is sitting with kashish..when kashish see angad coming towards them she excuse her self...smart girl... ! now kripa is all alone ...angad come over there kripa still not looking at him..angad finally speaks;

angad: ajj enjoy kiya na

kripa:hmmmmmmmmmm

angad: main nay bhi....hmm...mujey miss kiya tha

kripa:haan magar lagta hai tum ney nahi kiya

angad: aur tum ko essa kyun laga....?

kripa: main nay tum ko phone kerney ki koshish ki...even mamma k na chahtyey howey milney ki koshish ki office anney k liya try kiya magar tum na to mujh say miley na koshish ki .............i m really very angry with u!

angad: hey krips....tumey yaad nahi main kaha tha k main khud ko azmaoon ga

kripa:azmaaliya

angad: haan bhoot tough tha bas ik din aur...

kripa: angad can i have a hug

angad: no...hum kal tak....hath bhi nahi milayegye

kripa:angad u r very rude...i hate u

angad:u know what i hate u u too.............kripa become mad

kripa:kya kaha

angad: haaan i hate u .....but wt NO


KRIPA:(NO RELAX) ANGAD

angad:kripa

kripa:ik aur din

angad:no bas ik aur raat

kripa blushe and speak.....

kripa:tum jao sab wait kerey hein

angad:can i have a hug now?

kripa: no

angad: ab kya hai

kripa come closer to angad ...as he can feel her breath at his face..

kripa:tum ney hi to kaha tha intezaar.....karo...!

she saying this leave from there with smiling face...wink at him................!

angad: GOD...I LOVE THIS GAL...........!

COMING UP: angad weds kripa................big night for both   

PART:17

The wedding day

At both khanna residence and at sharma residence preparations are going on …lets have look at both!

Khanna mansion:

We see naina screaming at their servant…who is listening her and try to speak but not getting any way….!

Naina: tushar tujey kitni baar kaha hai k dhang say kaam kya ker magar nahi maharaj kyun kisi ki baat sunengye….tujey main nay kaha tha k flower decoration walay ko bola tha k ajj k liya red and white roses zaroor laye reception k liya chahiya …bata kya kay nahi….?

Tushar: kiya na ma'm …kiya main abhi wo aagye hai ..wo jo madam shaadi organize ker ri hain un k husband sab handle kerey hein ….!

Naina: acha wo organizer kahan hai

Tushar ma'm wo aagye

Then we see a women of aged between 40 to 45 years old her name is somia…..she is like to slap every one …when tushar goes to her …she slap him and then ask;

Somia: ( she is Punjabi) oye tu yahan ky kera hai ..naukar kahin ka koi kaam nahi kerta hai abhi naina jee say kehti hoon

Tushar: main bhi batao gaa nain ma'm ko tum kitni bad tameez ho

Somia: oye jatta hai ya nahi …..

And their fight continue lets have a look at dulha's room where bechara angad….is in hands of sujal and rishi his other friend….prena and aaliya is also here so both guys and gals…..arguing….over angad's accessories and angad is sitting on bed who has his head in his hand……!

Prena: sujal tum samjh nahi rahey ho ye angad per acha nahi lagye ga believe me yaar

Sujal: nahi prena tumhari ankhein kharab hai …..yeangad per bhoot acha lagye balki jo patka main add keri ho wo acha nahi lagye ga …

Rishi: chor yaar sujal ye larkiyoon ko kya pata latest happening or fashion ka wo bhi hum larkoon k

Aaliya: ae rishi tu apna mua band rakh tujey khud nahi pata hota kya kerna hai samja …..
Rishi: ae chipkali tu apna band rakh or jaa yahan say

Prena: rishi tum kyun nahi chup ho jatey …

Sujal: kyun rishi kyun chup ho gat um is chipkali ko chup kerwao na …ms. Chuhiya…

Prena: hey mujey chuhiya pukara you…………….

Angad temper looses at every minute now it crosses the limit……………

Angad: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh ….chup ik dum chup sab …mujey jo phena ho ga phenoga ….tum loog apni bakwaas band karo samjey ……

Mean while karthick and his wife harshani ….karthick is angad's first cousin …comes and hugs angad…

Karthick: wow mera ..chota bhai bhoot pyaara lag ra hai

Angad: thanks yaar …acha howa tum loog aagye ….ab in loog say meri jaan churao …!

Now lets have a look at kripa's place………………….!

Gayatry is screaming here……………………over suryaban ,josh and prithvi …..!

G: arey tum loog pata hai kitni deeri hori hai …..kripa tayar hogai dulhan ho ker magar tum loog nahi hoye hai na …

J: mamma hum loog hogye bas app ka hi wait kerey hein

P: chalya na ab …kis ka intezaar hai

J: mujey essa kyun lag raha hai …k tum ko aaliya say milnay ki jaldi hori hai

P: shut up josh ….every one laughs …..

In kripa's room she is with kashish and sneha …..sitting on bed ready …to go ….gayatry come over there and can't take her eyes off from her daughter…..!

WEDDING PLACE:

Kripa comes ….wearing maroon lehenga with heavy beads, thread and resham golden work looking stunning ….angad comes over there wearing…black sherwani with silver and grey resham work …looking as hot and handsome as usual ….both look into each other's eyes and angad cant able to take his eyes off from kripa …..kripa again looks down ….!

Both are called at mandap ….angad and kripa exchange their maalas …and then they perform their pheras …angad then full kripa's maang with sindoor and tie mangal sutar in her neck ……! Then they have dinner now time for bedai or rukhsati comes …….!

RUKHSATI OR BEDAI:

Kripa's mom and dad are crying and hugs her...Kripa too crying bitterly …josh have tears of happiness in his eyes he also hugs kripa..kripa hugs him back …prthvi also hugs her and kiss on her forehead …and say

Prithvi: meri koi behen nahi thi kripa …..mager tum bani thi aur ajj tum bhi jaari ho ..magar …mujey pata hai angad k sath hamesha khush raho gi or angad tum ….

Angad looks at prithvi …

Prithvi : meri behen ko kabhi dukh maat dena ok

Angad nodded ….and hugs prithvi and josh …..finally kripa and angad leaves……………………..!


coming up: the big night     

PART:18
kripa angad now at the starting of new and different life …with totally different views and feelings ..although angad experiencing t second time but now he feels that love for mishty was hi infactuation …but true love is kripa …who give him more then mishty….!

Kripa enter in the angad's home with all traditions(I don know the details sorry) well after every thing kripa taken to the angad's room …! After about half an hour angad enters in kripa's room he see kripa standing by the window holding mishty's photo in her hand tears rolling down from her eyes making their path to her pink cheeks …….!

Angad come closer to she see him puts photo frame down at side table …and hugs angad tightly …angad hugs her back …angad then again pick photo frame up holding kripa …speak to frame!

Angad: mishty ..main janta hoon k ajj tum bhoot khush ho gi ..aur main tum say waada kerta hoon k tumhari dost ko hamesha khush rakhoonga …he puts its down look at kripa who is smiling now …they both hugs again.

Angad then pick kripa up and make his way to bed …petals of red roses spread on whole bed ….angad then kiss kripa at her lips …kripa shy again …he then start to take her jewellary off one by one kissing at every place then he make kripa lay down and him self on top of her he kiss her eyes , nose , lips neck …kripa then stretch her hand and close the lights ! Next depends upon ur imagination!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IN THE MORNING ………

They wake kripa found her self in angad's arm tightly around her self …she smile …….and try to free her self ….   But no mercy here in angad's arm is seen for her!!!!!!!!

Kripa: ufffffffff

Angad:…. Still sleeping

Kripa after trying hard get free her self go to take bath coming out wearing dark green colour sari with golden embroided royal blue boarder looking .she come close to angad water trips from her hairs on angad's face he open his eyes and smiles …and pull kripa over him!

Angad: so ma'm where r u trying to go?

Kripa: sir I m trying to go down stairs

Angad: u know in ur duty it is included that u have to obey me !

Kripa: well in which duty

Angad: we made contract dear

Kripa: when?????????????

Angad: when met for the first time

Kripa: oh so that contract u r talking about

Angad: yups

Kripa: so in that contract I m your sub-ordinate and u r pulling ur sub-ordinate over u while u r in your bed!

Angad: well this all include in marriage contract between me and my wife

Kripa: well sir app ki biwi ap ko isterha merey sath dekhey gi to problem ho jaye gi…app ko sharam nahi atti???

Angad: app ko sharam nahi atti app k pati dev dekhengye to kya sochengye?????????

Kripa: main to apney pati k pass hoon

Angad: pull her more close…….haan main bhi apni biwi kay pass hoon samji

They both laugh………………….

Kripa: acha ab janey do mujey tayar hona hai mummy papa or bhai mujey leney aney waley hein

Angad: kyun

Kripa:uff….rasam hai

Angad: means whole relaxing day with out you…..Yahoo!

Kripa:don be so happy darling I will be back in evening

Angad:opps bad luck!!!!!!!!!!1

Kripa: angaddddddddddddddd

Angad: sorry yaar …my jaanu I will miss like a hell………!

Kripa: me too

Both smile…………..!

Kripa: ok now leave me bhoot ho gya neechey chal ker break fast kerna hai….ok

Angad: yes boss

Kripa laugh …angad lets her go …..she then sit in front of mirror to get ready …angad slowly come again hugs and kiss at her neck and back …she embarrassed…and hugs him and finally speak ….!

Kripa: angad jao …go and take bath

Angad:~ ~ ~ ~ ~ still busy in kissing kripa's neck ….

Kripa: uff……angad I said leave me now

Angad: no

Kripa: yes

Angad: no

Kripa: yes

Angad: yes

Kripa: no

Angad: yooooooooo I win I win

Kripa: this is cheating

Angad: ok …theek hai but tonight I m not gonna spare u ………….with full of passion in his eyes …kripa …blushes!

Kripa: dekhtey hein

Angad: dekh lena

Kripa: dekh leygye

Angad: dekh liya ….ab tayar ho jao …filhaal to apni mom k ghar janey or breakfast k liya ….but shaam ko jab main tum ko lanay aaonga to kisi aur cheez k liyaa….samji

Kripa: lets see!

Angad goes in to bathroom ……………………..! come back after about 30mins …kripa already sitting on bed waiting for him …..angad when see her totally….gone for her …she blushes …and stands and about to go in some corner to escape …but angad grab he hand pull her close and kiss her o her lips …at first lightly ….but then it turn in full of intensity ………………!

Ok after this full of romance part …COMING UP: kahani main twist hai …but between aaliya and prithvi ….how angad-kripa solve it before their honey moon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART:19
The day ends kripa come home back wt angad ….in the whole way to home angas did n't utter a single word while reaching to home he simply picks kripa's luggage and heads to their room ………enter keep the luggage at one side …kripa followed him to their room ……shock at angad's so unromantic behaviour …she tried to speak him but no reply!

Angad after some time come out of bath room changed himself in kurta pajama …..lay on bed …..he made side lamp switched off …now kripa cant able to hold this nonsence more …..open the lamp again …look directly in anagd's eyes ……..!

Kripa: why are u behaving like stubborn angad …whats the matter

Angad: kuch nahi kripa change kerkay soo jao

Kripa: kyun kyun soo jao main ….tum apney andar apni problem ko leker pareshaan raho aur main sukoon say soo jaon

Angad: tumey kis nay kaha main tensed hoon

Kripa: merey angad ko mujh say acha koi jaan sakta hai

Angad: tumharey anagd ko koi problem nahi hai soo jao

Kripa: mera angad mujh say jhoot bol raha hai

Angad: nahi

Kripa: haan

Angad: nahi

Kripa: haan

Angad: nahi

Kripa: nahi

Angad; haan

Kripa: fine chalo ab batao kya howa hai

Angad: wo kripa ………choro tum bhi bilawajah tensed ho jao gi

Kripa: angad plz batao kya howa hai

Angad: ye lo khud paar lo

He hands her a letter ……………

Hi angad

Tumhari ex-wife mishty kisi accident main nahi naari thi balki kisi nay us ka murder kya hai ……ab wok on tha ..us ney essa kyun kiya ye janna tumhara or kripa ka kaam hai …kyun kay ab wo kripa ko marna chahta hai!

Ur well wisher

Kripa get scary look at her face and dugs her face in angad's chest ……….! Not leaving him saying…crying bitterly

Kripa: angad mishty di ka khoon howa tha

Angad: haan kripa ab jab kay main ye jaan gya hoon to main us ka pata laga ker hi rahoon ga….aur us shakas nay mishty ko to mujh say cheen liya magar ….kripa tum ko wo kabhi mujh say alag nahi ker paye ga …….is janum to kya agley saath janum tak tum meri ho!

kripa: angad mujh khud ki fikar nahi merey liya tum ho magar .....mishty di ....un ko insaaf to dilwana hi hoga na

angad:kripa tum janti ho ........main tum say mishty say bhi zayada pyaar kyun kerta hoon

now kripa pull back and look at him

kripa: nods NO ...like a cute baby

angad: smiles ..........kyun k tum khud ki nahi balki sab ki fikar kerti ho ..........tumhari her baat main sab kay kahin na kahin say bhoot sara pyaar bera hota hai ...........I LOVE U ALOTS ..... aur ab jab tum merey sath ho to us khatil ko hum zaroor saza dilwayengye ...!

WHO IS KILLER??????????????????

coming up: a truth regarding .....mishty life come infront of kripa-angad .....what it is ......shocking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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PART:20

kripa and angad went to mall to have some shopping and kripa asked angad to buy some stuff for her

angad: tu phir tum kya karogi

kripa: idiot tumharey liya shopping

angad:oh

kripa: chalo jao

angad: ja raha ho na

kripa pushed him to woman's wear department ...kripa was searing some good stuff was searching some good stuff for angad when a person come and give her a chit ! Kripa open that chit and lost the clolour of her face ..she rn from there towards the section where angad was ..she looked at angad tears start rolling down from her eyes angad looked at her ..and was ..scared …



angad:why are you crying what happened?

Kripa:tum theek tu ho na

Angad: haan magar howa kya
Kripa: wo …wo ye chit …dekho

Angad read the chit :Kripa tum ne apney pati ko akela chor diya ye bhi na socha …ke wo tum se phir kabhi miley gab hi ya nahi !

Kripa start more crying ..and says;

Kripa: angad hum ney kisi ka kya begara hai jo wo hamrey peechey hath dho ker para hai …kyun hamein chain se sans nahi leney deta

Angad: ye hi pata lagana hai ke kon hai wo ..he then hugged Kripa …ba s chup ho jao dekho main theek hoon bas ..ab mat rona ..kyun ab hum nahi koi aur roye ga !



new part

part:21


angad and kripa heads to home ......kripa through the begs on bed ....and sit while holding her head .....angad look at her and make her calm down ......

angad: kripa ........

kripa: (look at him and hugs him tight ) i love angad never leave me ...

angad: not even after my death kri...she keep the hand on his mouth ....
kripa: hum saath main jiyengye aur saaath hi is duniya se jaye gye ....samjhey ..

angad nods his head ...

angad: chalo koi movie dekhtey hein .....

kripa: not a bad idea mr.khanna

angad: any thing for u mrs. khanna

angad open the tv ......he was shocked to see a tape is playing ....while mishty adressing some thing ....

mishty's recording:

mishty: angad main janti hoon ke ajj ke baad tum mujey kabhi nahi milogye ..ik sachai jo hamesha tum se share kerna chahti thi wo ye hai ke .....angad main ne ...tum se pyaar kiya magar ik dost ki terha ..........sameer se main ne ishq kiya .....angad.....sameer mar chuka hai ......jis din humari shaadi hoi us din us ne khud kushi kerli .........angad ye rana hai ....sameer ka bhai ...

rana ..(sanjay dutt) ..cutts ..off the convo of mishty..

rana: ajj main issey bhejh raha hoon sameer ke pass......aur ik wada kerta hoon tujh se...teri wajah se mera bhai is duniya se gya ab jo bhi lerki teri zindagi main aye giu ..ya jo bhi khushi aye gi main usey cheen loonga .............then he kills mishth by knife,/.................!

kripa scream ....she was scared ..she closed her eyes ......angad hugs her ..he was also shattered after having a look at how mishty died ..!


coming up: will tey able to escape from rana LOL

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