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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
superb story
continue soon 

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Sameer's heart beat is fast... he is tense... he want that Altaaf by hook or crook... He dn't know anything. bt ys tod he have little fear also.. Always he had to act brave & emotionless , even  if he had any feeling for that victim  or Criminal too.. but tod he can't control his emotions.. Roads are jams because of Ganpati Pandals , & he is getting restless ... dn't know why ... bt he is hell worris abt her.. his Cindrealla... As Altaaf told is she really looking like me??? Bt i love if she got Ayesha's eyes... and her skin???? omg god plz plz help me give me all ur strength & power... Sameer Rathod The  Iron Man's mind start praying to God to help me out... Suddenely one small boy come in front of his SUV & he immeadtly put his leg on breakes & press it hardly... SUV stops with big noise... One person comes there & take that little boy & thx Sameer for saving his child..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Bhagwan aapko lambi umr de , aapke biwi , bacche hamesha surkhisht rahe ,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Bhagwan unhe boori nazar se bachaye.."  That person says & Sameer just nodded his head.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer continue his drive & finally he reach his destination...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Rathod ...  hame charo tarh se attack karnge , lekin sab se pehele unke bahar jane ke sare raaste band karne honge..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Yes .. Sir.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod wears Bulletproof Jacket.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Servael Commondos hide every where... to find Culprits & knock them down..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Rathod  bahar kisi ko bhanak tak nhi lagni chayie ki yaha kya ho raha hai... aur ha Altaaf ka ek bhi aadami bahar nhi jana chayie , agar koi bhi bahar gaya to use pakdana mushkil hoga... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ys Sir..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Aur ha Team hamara bus yahi kaam hai Find & shoot  , Knock them down at any cost .. baki sab mai dekh lunga.. " Commissioner says
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Yes Sir... " Team says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Altaaf looking at one Barbie doll , she is sleeping quietly...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hmm yaar ye ladkiya itni khub surat kyu hoti hai?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Pata nhi Bhai..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Lekin jaan le leti hai , jab iska rona shru ho jaata hai to bas ... " Altaaf says while rembering that sleeping beauty's cry..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Suddenely they hears gun sounds... Altaaf gets alert , "Ye yaha tak pehunch gaye..." he says & pick the child & ran from there.. Bt alas his all  ways for escaping are closed by Police Team..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Aaahhh " Altaaf yells in frusation...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer knocks down serveal Culprits... & start to search Altaaf...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Baby starts crying badly , she is frightened... she wants someone who is take care of her , love her... her little heart thunding fastly...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer hears her cry , his baby , he slowly goes to upstairs & sees Alaat cursing them..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ye Police wale , per mujhe bhagna hi hoga... per iska kya karu?? ha ... ye hoga meri bahar jane ke raasta.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Galat..." Sameer says & holding aim on him...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Oh ACP... wow.. dekho Pari Papa aa gaye... bt so sad na... ki aapko mere saath hi chalna hoga..." Alataaf says in  anger..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Dekho bacchi mujhe de do ... " Sameer yells ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" No... ye mer bahar jane ka rasta hai..." with that Altaaf starts to go back words..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ruko... stop or i will shoot " Sameer warned...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
But Altaaf smile at him...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Peeche ek aur staricase hai , mai vaha se bhag jaaunga , aur tu kuch nhi kar paayega... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer felt amused at this idiot  brain , he himself reveal to him , how he is escaping...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 2:17pm | IP Logged

Here  Arjun comes at Ganpati Panadal & starts to rubbing his neck... His gaze look every corner , surroundings & man...

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sir sab apne hi aadami hai... Bomb ke bare mai pata chalne ke baad  kisi bhi Civil andar aane se mana kiya hai , ye bol kar ki kuch technical problems hai ligts arrange ments  or shot circuit bhi ho sakta hai... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Great .. aur Public maan gayi.. " Arjun ask over Micro phone..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ji.. "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun smile at that..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
His eyes searching for what Sameer told him abt the Bomb..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
after 2 minutes he smiles..  & goes towards Ganpati.. he look here & there & pick up object..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Yaar tu yaha thi??? oh... " Arjun says while looking at Bomb..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Shree nodded his head , " Ye Banda kabhi nhi sudhrega.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun look at Bomb..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Shree need ur help.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ya , tel me.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Shree yaha per 4 wires hai , kounsa cut karu?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Sirrr..." Shree yells in amusement...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" I m serious..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ok ... " Shree says & starts to search on hia lappy..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Shree ,  time nhi hai ... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ok.. Sir ... ( after a pause...) Sir its  Time Bomb... & we can't defuse it... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" What nonsenses.." Arjun yells..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha Sir.. Hame kuch aur karna hoga... " Shree suugests..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Yaha sochne ke liye time nhi hai Samjhe ya Samjhayu?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sry Sir.. but ab ??"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Hello Sir..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Shree maine  red wire cut kiya... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" what???"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sir ab position kya hai... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hmmm timer fast jaa raha hai Shree.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Oh Shit..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ab Sir?/"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ab sirf 20 minutes hai Shree , koi  aisi jagah hai yaha per... jaha mai ise lekar jaa paau?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha hai , per abhi bheed bahut hogi hai... " Shree says.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum uski fikr mat karo , bas jaga ka naam bolo... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sir explosive kafi bada hai..?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ys.. agar yaha blast hua , to bahut badi barbaad hogi Shree.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Dn't wry Sir.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun carefully pick up box & comes out of Pandal... He just smiles at ON Duty Officer Shinde...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ae chalo sab ko Darshan karne do Bappa ke ..." Shinde yells & Pandal memebers  start to send Devotees inside Pandal...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun comes to SUV & keep box at his next seat..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sir vaha Povai lake hai... & agar iaka blast paani mai hua to effect kam hoga thoda.. '
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ok.. "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sir aap jayie , bheed ko mai sabhal leta hue..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ok.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" All the best Sir.."
 
 
 
 
 
" Thx.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here Sameer aim his Gun on Altaaf & abt to shoot him , but Suddenely somone kick Altaaf from back & Altaaf  throws himself on Sameer but alas his leg slip on slippery carpet & Baby goes in Air... Sameer just keep his hands in air to catch her & finally he catch her , his daughter.. His mind full of happiness.. Suddenely he hears gun sounds.. & sees Commissioner Shoots Alataaf & he lay down..
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Ufff...
Finally,Altaaf ddead and Sam bhai rescued his daughter.
I was myself really worried.
Thank God.
Update the next part sooon,Manu di.

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Cont soon

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...SmileSmileSmile
Finally Sam rescued his daughter...SmileSmileSmile

Continue soon...SmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Great update..

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
superb..
yes pari is back to sameer.. 


loved it..


arjun is gf is very dangeorus..

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