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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
He is standing near Ganpati Temple..  , his gaze fell on all crowed , he felt bad for  them... after half hour they will be die ... He look at Officers who doing their Job... Being a Chief it is not difficult for him to place Bomb near Temple.. Yes he is there for Completing A Mission... He always against  Crime , and tod he is Criminal... His one step will be killed Thousands of people.. Bt he can't do anything , he is helpless , Tod he is Victim , and Criminal too. Only one person save him .. Arjun , his best buddy , his Collgue & his everthing...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here she is crying bitterely , She dn't know what to do? she know her husband doing wrong , bt tod she is also helpless.. She just holding her hands on her & crying bitterely.. Suddenely somone keep hand on her shoulder... She look at that person & throw herself in her arms... That other girl... only caressing her hair softly & feel bad for her... That girl wears saree , Green bangles  showed that she is Newely Married , in  her one hand one yellow colour dhaga is tied , that also indicates that she must be married yesterdy... that girl turn her face & look at her Husband who silently standing near door watching them...  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here he just can't believe what he heard ?????? bt they all are with his Chief... ys tod their Cheif needed them ,  their support.  One strong man come near him & just keep his hand on his shoulder & squzees it..
 
 
 
"Chotu yaar ye sab?????" he ask him..
 
 
 
"Sab thik hoga Shree , Arjun Sir aa gaye hai... ab hame use bacha kar hi rehenge... bas Bhagwan se dua karo ki vo thik ho..." Chotu says ...
 
 
 
 
"Per Chotu???" that man ask him...
 
 
 
" Ab kuch aur mat pucho hame use bachana hai... kaise bhi kar ke " one girl says while entering room..
 
 
 
"Liza..."
 
 
 
"Ha Shree , aaj ham apne differences bhul kar kaam karnge... plz... " Liza requests.  While Shree silently nodded & Chotu sighs..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here she look at her husband who standing near door , he look at them & comes towards her, he sits on Bed & slowly calls "Ayesha"
She look at him  , bt Arjun feel bad , Ayesha is Dabbang lady of ETF , but tod she lost her charm , her strength... she just silently look at him ...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Sab kuch thik kar dunga Ayesha , use scartch bhi nhi aayega ... I promise... " Arjun says
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Per vo log ...  bade gandhe hai Arjun... vo use... maar... maar..." she can't complete her words & again crying ...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun get up from Bed & starts to walk towards Door...  but stops mid way..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Riya ... uska dhyan rakhna ... aur ha mujhe call mat karna... ... mai apni care kar sakta hue.. " with that he goes near door & abt to open it , but stops & says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Apna dhayan rakhna..." and goes out in ETF ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Vo theek hogi na Chotu?" Shree ask him...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Chotu abt to answer...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Vo bilkul theek hai Chotu & Shree..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Chore & Liza look & sees Arjun is thr..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Arjun  Sir..." Shree goes near him
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun look at him & understands situation bt he have to stay calm..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Shree Rathod kaha hai..?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Shree look at him & understands..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Sir vo Ganpati Pandal ki taraf gaye hai... vaha ... vaha..." Shree can't complete...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hame unhe rokhna hoga Sir , ya phir mai vaha Bomb Diffuse karne wale squed ko bulava lu...?" Chotu ask them..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Nahi Chotu ham aisa kuch nhi karnge..." Arjun announced & all look at him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"To phir Sir... Rathod Sir ko kya hum vaha Bomb plant karne denge...?" Liza ask...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha... Rathod ko uska kaam karne do , hame apne kaam karna hai... " Arjun says..
 
 
 
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Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 18 September 2013 at 1:09pm

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Awesome start...SmileSmileSmile
OMG sameer planning a bomb in ganpati pandal...ShockedShockedShocked

Plzzz Continue soon...SmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Hmmm i was waiting to see if you had more to post LOL
Very interesting, but i wonder why Rathore is doing something like thatConfused
and Poor Aisha, bilkul toot chuki heinOuch
but Arjun promising everything will be good, well that's something we all are waiting forBig smile
Please continue Manali, a very interesting startSmile

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:57am | IP Logged
superb start...!!!
sam placing bomb at the pandal?ShockedShocked why is he doing that?
and about whom were shreetu talking? whom will the save?
love how arjun promised aisha that he will bring sam back...!!!
and ariya already married...!!!
now whats gonna arjun do?
continue soon..!!

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Superb start...
Sam why is he doing that???
Aww Aisha :'(
Ariya married cool...
Everyone concerned and worried for Sam...
Sam believes Arjun vl stop anythng bad from happening...
Arjun hv some plan i guess...
Update soon

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
"Per...?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Chotu  ham Rathod ko rok denge to unhe shak hoga , isiliye Rathod jo kar raha hai , use karne do , hame apne kaam karna hoga... ( after a pause..)  Shree Rathod ke ghar pe , se kitne caal gaye aur aaye , aur ha uske cell per last call kis ka aaya tha kaha se, mujhe jana hai , aur ha Rathod ki location ko bhi trace karo... " Arjun orders..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Liza tum mere saath chalo , hame use Servant se baat karni hogi... " Arjun orders & Liza follow him...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Chotu , tum tab tak  us group ke har ek member jo abhi unke saath hai unka pata karo , aur ha unki saari kamiya mujhe jaani hai... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Yes Sir..." Chotu says & leaves..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun & Liza enter in Introgation room , Liza starts Cameras..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
That Servant look at Arjun ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Arjun baba ... " she starts cries..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Mujhe sab kuch jaana hai... " Arjun coldly look at her...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Arjun baba... mujhe maaf ... maaf kar..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Mujhe sirf sach jaan na hai..." Arjun says in loud voice
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
That servant composes herself  & tell them all story..
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun listens all  ... and says ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Liza inhe chodna mat , ye yahi rehegi jab tak case solve nhi hogi... "  and starts to go out..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Arjun baba..." that servant call him..
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun turn & look at her ,
 
 
 
 
 
" Sharam aati hai mujhe tumhe Mausi kehete hue... 10 laakh ke liye tumne itni ghatiya harkat kar di... iski saza tumhe kaanoon se mile iski mai poori koshish karunga.. "  and goes out..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun comes to Shree & get most important information.. Chotu also comes & share his info...
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ab bas Chotu unke adde ka pata karo... aur ha unke sare informers ye baat..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Nahi pehuchegi Sir..." Chotu says ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here Ayesha seating on Bed...
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Riya  pata hai vo bilkul Sameer ki jaise dikhti hai... ek dum gori gori , per uski aankhe kaise hogi ? aur uske baal?"
 
 
 
 
 
Riya just look at her...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Aur na uska haath kitne chote honge , choti ungaliya ( fingers) naakhon bhi chote , aur Riya vo... ( suddenely she panicks...)use bhookh lagi hogi na... kon use doodh dega... vo ro rahi thi ... bahut ro rahi thi... aur vo vo... has raha tha... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya pathes her back ..
 
 
 
 
 
" BHagwan pe bharosa rakho , sab thik hoga.. " Riya assures her..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod is standing near  Ganpati Idol...
 
 
 
 
 
 
He closes his eyes   . " Bappa mujhe maaf kar... mere apne ki jaan khatre mai hai ... mai ye paap nhi karna chahta , per ... per... kuch kar Bappa ..." he prays in his mind & open his eyes , his eyes feel with tears..
He can still hear her sound,, she is crying... bitterely crying...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" I m sorry... really sorry..." he says to her...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
FLASHBACK..
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha happily seating on Chair enjying Arjun 7 Riya's wedding.. She smile happily as Arjun put Garland around Riya's neck... & Riya do the same..
 
 
After all ceremoney over Ariya comes to her .. Riya hug her , Arjun also hug her...
 
 
 
" Bhaut pyari lag rahi ho..." Ayesha says to Riya & kiss her forhead..
 
 
 
" Tum thik ho na..?" Arjun ask her..
 
 
 
" Use kya hoga?" bhag to mai raha hue us ke liye.." Rathod irritatedly complaint Arjun..
 
 
 
 
"Ahhh"    Maine kaha tha ki mere liye paani le aao , ghar ka khana laao ... " Ayesha says with fake anger..
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha forwards her hand & Rathod come to her & give her support for stand - up... Ayesha is heavily pregnat & also completed her 9 months..  Dr. advice her to takr rest , but she is not intersted.. she is due in any time.. all cares for her , and she enjying their care affection..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ayesha ye lo khana.." Chotu comes with plate..
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Nhi Chotu aaj khane ka man nhi hai.." Ayesha says..
 
 
 
 
 
" Bilkul nhi.. thoda khana hoga.." Rathod says & Ayesha smiles.
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha to phir meetha de do.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ayesha Rice kha lo.."  Rathod take dish from Chotu , while Arjun help her to seat on  chair
again.. Rathod give her plate & starts her eating...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
After cermony all goes to thr Homes.. 2nd dy Ariya comes to meet Rathod..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha is seating on Bed & Rathod do his wrk on his Lappy...
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Are tum log???? yaha kaise???? Riya yaha aao..." Ayesha says..
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha whispers in her ear..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Riya kya hua ??? Arjun romantic nhi hai kya? mai Sam ko bolti hue... vo daat dega Arjun ko..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Nhi... vo... sab... sab kuch thik hai..." Riya lowers her eyes 7 plays with Bedsheet..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" To phir tum log yaha...?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hmane tay kiya hai ki jab tak Ayesha ki delivery nhi hoti hum yahi rehenge... tab tak no Honey moon... " Arjun declares & Riya nooded...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Are per in sab koi jarurat nhi..." Sameer say..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ofo tum log bhi na..." Ayesha says & abt to get up from bed... " ouch... Sammm..." she yells & hold her tummy..
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kyu hua??? " Sameer worridly ask her...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Achanak se pain hua,, thoda sa... " Ayesha answers..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ab pata chala hum yaha kyu hai..?" Arjun says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
" No ways tum log jaao... plz... aur ha ye mera order hai... aur ha tumko mere baby ki kasam..." Ayesha yells 7 Ariya look at each other.. while Sameer chuckling..
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ok"  Ariya says angrily & goes from there..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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No res iss liye commenting!
Haww! Yeh kya ho gaya? o.O

Hope everything gets cleared soon! :)

Manali Di like button not working! Sorry!



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