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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bc123456

What a lovely OS , beautifully written , now waiting for u to continue Double Thumbs Up animated emoticon

Thank you Doc Babs. Big smile  Will post the second chapter soon. 


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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by parmarA

Aardhan,i am glad that you started writing os.And you know i always like your style of commenting and your words.And this os is treat to read.Very well written hats off.Waiting for the next part
Thank you Alka. Hope you are feeling better now. Tongue

Very glad you liked this OS and the style.

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Diksha_1991

Wonderful OS..Clap Clap

Please continue soon...Tongue
Thank you Diksha. Will do soon, working on it. Big smile

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amu_05

loved this os.very thoughtful and emotional too..!!
Mistakes... when it came to Nidhi they were many.. so true!
I loved ur writing ..pls continue.
Thank you Amu for your encouragement. Smile

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jayasree.rao


Loved this OS.The writing style is straight forward as well as beautiful.  
Thank you Jayashree, I do realize that the entire OS is a narration of thoughts in prose form and mostly in the past tense. Glad you liked it. Big smile

The subject taken is commendable. Though I loved Ashutosh in this serial I always felt that he has taken his wife for granted. He was n't as compassionate and loving as Nidhi is towards him.  His  attitude started to change and he has fully accepted Nidhi as a Very good doctor after CM's surgery.
You are correct and this is one thing I have commented on in various instances. I do feel this aspect of their relationship was not handled as well, there was no dwelling on the past and no projection of feelings either. Hence this attempt. And you are also right about Ashu's attitude towards Nidhi and the subsequent change.

Loved this part and waiting for the next.
Thanks, very soon I will post the next chapter. 

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pardeshi.Mithu

ExcellentThumbs Up will wait for the next part...Can u plz PM me when u update the next part plz plz plz!!!Embarrassed

Thank you Mithu. And I will PM you sometime this weekend, plan to update then. 

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swati62

Wow. Always thought u had a great potential to write OS or FF . Amazing start waiting for the next chapter.
Thank you for your encouraging words Swati. Next chapter soon. Tongue

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suvika.

can't believe my eyes smiley Aarti..you wrote an OS?? can't believe my eyes smiley
yes fist pump smileyYES! Finally!! got to read a scene / version from that analytical mind of yours! 
Kya karen... lagta hai India he hawa paani ka asar hai! Wink  I finally got bitten by the same bug that bt you more than a year ago. LOL

Enjoyed it thoroughly clapping hands above head smiley ..waiting for the continuation..rubbing hands in excitement smiley when is it going to come?? Please don't tell me the next part is after you reach your home!! thats so not acceptable..hands in ears smiley
Thanks for the vote of confidence... and sorry but your guess turned out to be true. Ouch  But now I will post soon. Big smile

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