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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged

THE TEENAGER

 

As the morning sun creeped

out behind the trees

As the flowers bloomed

The birds began to sing

Cars hit the road

Bread turned into toast

Curtains removed

Rays of sunlight introduced

Everything seemed normal

Because no one knew...no one knew

 

In a room far away

Sat a teenager watching a shadow play

The curtains unremoved

Gave the room a gloomy shade

The shadows spoke to the teenager

While she sat there afraid

Her hands tremling with fear

Life has become to hard to bear...they exclaimed

No one was there to hear

Except the teenager herself.

 

She lived in a world

Where no one was her...

She lived in a place

With shadows to play..

She lived a life

Of a liitle mice

Searching her way..

In a world..that was an unknown place.





its my first try to write something

pls leave ur feedback

thanksSmile

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
padosan jee 
u r writer too 
i didnt knew dat ROFL
Awesome yaar

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